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Aug. 14, 2022
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Demigoddesses
on Aug. 14, 2022
Definitely my favorite work of yours. You have an impressive catalog but I've always liked your takes on extreme sizes the best. Stories like Pop, The Drug, Waiting For Corrine, and To The Limit do a lot for me. Eulogy was my favorite before I got through this one. You do an exceedingly good job describing sizes that are physically impossible to imagine. Getting that confusion and monstrous/in-human vibe across really well. The interviewer's genuinely baffled thoughts trying to parse the crazy stuff in front of her was fun. In the former examples of stories the size is predominantly the end point as you'd expect but here it's the opposite. I'm more a fan of what happens to characters after the high of the transformation and all that. The mundane life they go through after excites me a fair deal. Eulogy as well doesn't posit the change as quick, it takes a long time to slowly build up to the monster size stuff. Narration speeds it along but it gets across a creeping passage of time. Enough time for it to be normal and not as freaky. Scary thoughts, exciting thoughts. I got pretty attached to the titular pair, your efforts at giving them cute moments didn't go unnoticed. I appreciate the character depth here with vulnerabilities and relationship concerns. I enjoy a good roid rage-esc silly romp on occasion but I connect much more when the wall of meat has deep-seated issues and projects insecurities and junk. Self-actualization and positivity was a real curveball, I wasn't expecting to get emotionally invested and now I'm kinda hooked on it. Speaking of junk, I like the cheeky penis gag. Only one line but that's all you need to get the imagination going. Haven't read much of your works involving that particular kink since we usually don't get to absurd sizes there, I'm more of a "full-package" kinda guy if that means anything. If Samantha had that on top of everything else she would truly be a sight to behold. I'm personally super down with it knowing she probably couldn't even reach it at her size. That makes it even better in my eyes. I'd love to see more Samantha sizes in your future works, especially a Samantha sized you-know-what on top of everything. The blend of mundane and extreme was intoxicating and the relationship was sweet, genuinely heartwarming. I'll keep an eye out for your Sam-sized stuff in the future!
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A Dream into a Nightmare
on July 02, 2023
Pretty good! You don't often tackle this brutification, FtM type thing from my memory. The reactions of the characters were pretty understandable. I love that Valentina despised her changes to a point. Her quote "I hate it but I'm beginning to love to hate it." is interesting. Makes me think that her womanly sensibilities still exist with stuff like the painted nails and back shaving but that the disgust she feels towards her gross bod is what gets her off. I think a follow up where she reaches crazier sizes where Valentina is like an uber-caveman type just walking around in public would be fun. The sections from her perspective were brief but great. My only real complaint is that there isn't more! Though I was admittedly expecting more of a confrontation with her finding Marco and the drug. We imply that she puts two-and-two together before that but I think it would've been more dramatic for her to blow up and choose to grow anyway since she's so far gone. Your descriptions of her voice and face were good but I was itching for more detail there. She's well on her way to a monster-like face and voice in my mind. Stuff like her lips and brow, voice sounding unnaturally, artificially deep, something inhuman. These are minor gripes, though. Would love to see you tackle this again and get even more extreme!
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The Biggest
on Jan. 16, 2024
Great stuff! I really appreciate the length of this one! Bryce was surprisingly chill about everything, so was her roommate. Interesting, I'll say that much. I'm hoping that one day you'll go full monster on one of these prompts, to the point where we reach overt caveman levels appearance-wise. Something outright ugly by conventional standards. Piling on more and more in spite of this, though? That's the hottest thing. Just completely unrealistic, cartoonishly stupid sizes. Loved this for what it was, though. Good stuff!