Jim Kirkwood, Jr

Smashwords book reviews by Jim Kirkwood, Jr

  • The Surgery on March 20, 2011
    (no rating)
    I think it was a fun story for a regular Joe and not a professional write. The chapter titles were entertaining and the sense of humor is my style. Even the description of the story had humor in it that one of the reviewers evidently didn't pick up on. Putting comments by ones wife and best friend is obviously meant to be funny. The end of the story was nice as well. Something different than what I had anticipated. Obviously, I am not an editor, so I am not going to comment on punctuation, just on the story, which I enjoyed.