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Smashwords book reviews by tweety01

  • Minutiae on July 24, 2016

    I felt drawn into the character's emotions almost immediately. It really helped me to understand, at some level, the inner torment that people endure every day and of which we are totally unaware. At first, I felt that there should be a more defined ending to the stories, but, then I decided that I would almost rather be able to imagine an ending - one that I personally would enjoy. My ending would bring Jesus into the picture to help calm the man suffering from psychosis and give him hope, to "adopt" the child about to encounter feeling alone and tell her "I will never leave you nor forsake you" and to bring healing to the parents who lost their child. How is it possible to feel so much with so few words? That is the mark of a good storyteller.... Great job.