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on Aug. 17, 2012 :
I am aware that this story was written in only six days. Keeping that in mind, I will say that it has promise, but it needs more work. There were "holes" in it for me such as: Cri-why h/she is so despondent is not adequately explained (I had to "guess" that it is because h/she can no longer transform). And the "usual tirade" h/she would seemingly launch into isn't explained, either. Also, the whole DNA manipulation thing doesn't sit right. Why make hermaphroditic, "perfect" people and then require them to transform in order to procreate? Finally, there were too many distracting errors in verb tense and in language usage for me to fully enjoy. I loved the sexual imagery though; it was very steamy. If the original premise (the fe/male thing) was further explored and more satisfyingly explained, this story could be developed into something quite extraordinary.
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