The Pit Stop

Rated 5.00/5 based on 2 reviews
When what seems like a normal pit stop turns to more than just gas and food, a lost couple finds themselves searching for the truth of a twenty-year-old mystery that may cost them their life.
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Published by 5 Prince Publishing
Words: 9,820
Language: English
ISBN: 9781939217080
About Carmen DeSousa

A romantic-suspense writer, Carmen DeSousa's novels overflow with romance, mystery, suspense, a hint of paranormal sometimes, and of course, tragedy. After all, what would a great story be without a tragic event setting the stage? Her sensual and gripping stories have earned bestseller status on three continents because of her ability to make readers love, laugh, cry, gasp, and hope.

Carmen's newest series, CREATUS, is a realistic twist on the myths and fairy tales you've heard about preternatural sentient beings. Prepare to believe.

She Belongs to Me (Romantic Suspense) December 2011
Land of the Noonday Sun (Romantic Suspense) May 2012
Entangled Dreams (Romantic Suspense) September 2012
The Pit Stop (FREE Short Story) October 2012
When Noonday Ends (Romantic Suspense) December 2012
The Depot (FREE Mystery with a Paranormal Edge - Short Story) - January 2013
Split Decisions (Romantic Suspense with a Paranormal Edge) June 2013
Creatus (Paranormal Romantic Suspense)September 2013
The Library (Mystery with a Ghostly Edge) December 2013
Creatus Rogue (Paranormal Romantic Suspense) February 2014
Creatus (They Exist) The Prequel - April 2014

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Review by: Kim Stapf on March 11, 2013 :
A short story with a solid end. Gino was dreaming of his grandparents that have been dead 20 years. They say his grandparents died of natural causes, but Gino , who's a detective never believed it. His grandparents were only in their 50's. They were in their bedroom, died in their sleep. Gino married his childhood best friend Shelia. They dated thru high school and then she went to college and they dated other people. When Shelia came back to town in her 20's he knew she was the one he wanted to spend the rest of his life with. They moved into his grandparents house. Gino met his boss at The Pit Stop the next morning for breakfast. The diner has been open since Gino could remember. He used to go there with his grandfather. He hasn't been in the diner since his grandfather passed away. He couldn't figure out why his boss wanted to meet there, he knows Gino doesn't frequent the diner. He tells Gino of a murder a couple of towns over with the same mo as his grandparents homicide. His captain told him he never believed they died of natural causes. The owner of the diner came over and said hi to Gino like he knew him. Gino couldn't place him, but he knew Gino. Gino thinks he crazy and goes home to tell Shelia. Shelia grew up close to his grandmother. He asked her if she ever heard of the owner of the dinner. Shelia says she remembers his name but can't place it. Shelia said his grandma kept a diary, she used to read it to Shelia. The next day the captain and Gino went to the town where the murders happened and examined the scene. The place was immaculant. Gino found one thing out of place, a photo album. When he looked thru it he noticed a pic of his grandfather and grandmother. These people went to school with his grandparents. You will have to download the book to find out what happens. It FREE! Carmen never disappoints.
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Review by: Sue Erickson on Oct. 12, 2012 :
Loved your story!!! Nice read at lunch!!! Looking forward to more of your work!!!
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