A freelance writer who lives on a boat, I was captivated by the immense imagery the ocean provides and inspired to write my first novella, Hourglass. I also enjoy the simpler times that proceeded the automobile and take trips back in time from the back of my horse. The ocean and horses became a major theme in my first finished work Hourglass and if you enjoyed it, you might be pleased to know my next work will continue the saga. I hope my readers will continue to browse my work and look forward to my next work, Cyborg Chess.
on April 27, 2013 :
On the whole, an impressive effort. You can tell Sarah put in some due diligence on maritime mechanics and period historical references. The twist at the ending was a complete surprise to me. On the constructive criticism side, I'd recommend this piece be reviewed by an editor for a number of grammatical errors that tended to distract the reader. There were about 15 - 20 that I noticed. This was the earliest work in her offering list...if that is so, than this is a heck of a good start.
(review of free book)