The Unfinished Song: Initiate

By Tara Maya
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(4.60 based on 5 reviews)

Published: April 14, 2011
Words: 54,757 (approximate)
Language: English
ISBN: 9781458035776


Short description

Dindi longs to become a Tavaedi, one of the powerful warrior-dancers who wield magic. No one of her kind has ever succeeded. But Dindi has a plan.

Extended description

DEADLY INITIATION

A DETERMINED GIRL...

Dindi can't do anything right, maybe because she spends more time dancing with pixies than doing her chores. Her clan hopes to marry her off and settle her down, but she dreams of becoming a Tavaedi, one of the powerful warrior-dancers whose secret magics are revealed only to those who pass a mysterious Test during the Initiation ceremony. The problem? No-one in Dindi's clan has ever passed the Test. Her grandmother died trying. But Dindi has a plan.

AN EXILED WARRIOR...

Kavio is the most powerful warrior-dancer in Faearth, but when he is exiled from the tribehold for a crime he didn't commit, he decides to shed his old life. If roving cannibals and hexers don't kill him first, this is his chance to escape the shadow of his father's wars and his mother's curse. But when he rescues a young Initiate girl, he finds himself drawn into as deadly a plot as any he left behind. He must decide whether to walk away or fight for her... assuming she wou.. (Read more)


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shaman, paranormal romance, fantasy, young adult, myth, fairy tales, legend, epic fantasy, elf, fairy, dragon, fantasy romance, fae, dancing, tribal fantasy, fantasy action, epic romance, tara maya

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Review by: Julia Averbeck on May 29, 2012 : star star star star
The book really feels like a fairytale and it was fun to read it. Sometimes it's a bit hard to read because of the different viewpoints but when you know who the characters are, it gets easier.
A great first part of the series.
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Review by: L. D. Robwell on Feb. 25, 2012 : star star star star star
The world building is fantastic. I've been meaning to write a review for this for a while but it always comes back to this. Tara Maya created a lush and vivid world, full of very human characters, art, music, dance and magic. If any of that sounds interesting to you, read the hell out of this book. Read the whole series. It's engaging, fun and interesting.

I'm not big on fairy tales or hard fantasy and this is both of those but done in a very interesting way. It's not a fairy tale in the way that The Girl Who Circumnavigated Fairyland in a Ship of Her Own Making is, but rather an ancient tribal version of Charles DeLint. The Fairies aren't Tinkerbell, they are wild magic that causes problems for the protagonists but helps them too, a little, kind of. Also, I've never been a fan of dance, which plays a prominent role in this story, but the other aspects of the story were so strong and well written that I enjoyed even the bits I didn't expect to.

Tara Maya is giving a good name to self published e-book authors.

You are seriously missing out if you're looking for a smart read and choose to pass this up.
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Review by: S.J. Collins on Jan. 25, 2012 : star star star star star
Initiate is the first book of a new series, The Unfinished Song, by Tara Maya. As such, there are a few things I feel that you should know up front. First, if cliffhangers piss you off, be sure you have the second book, Taboo (which was just recently released), ready to dive into once you're finished Initiate. I wasn't bothered because I pretty much knew what I was getting into right off the bat but the Amazon description doesn't much give the cliffhanger impression to potential readers so I'm just giving you all a heads up.

Also, this is VERY much an Epic Fantasy. While I feel one of the book's strong points is Tara's exceptional dedication to the World Building, I do know that some readers would find it off putting if their not huge culture fanatics. Some people have complained that they were disoriented/confused by the various names and political systems, but I found the seven tribes utterly fascinating and I felt Tara explained them all well enough without ever going into a huge, long, drawn out info dump. Tara also manages to be very lyrical with her prose without it becoming meandering. I always felt rooted in the story.

I liked that Dindi, our heroine, is not only conscious of her differences but embraces them despite insurmountable criticism from her clan. She beats to the tune of her own drums and doesn't give up on her dreams no matter how others might view them. I'm looking forward to seeing how she'll change as a person in the light of the events at the end of Book 1. I have to give it to Tara for being gutsy with her ending. That's all I'll say about that.

While I never got to the point where I "liked" Gwenika, Dindi's friend, I found her relate-able. Her self-sabotage was very interesting in a tragic way.

Kavio, thus far, has the makings of a good hero. I love "lone wolf" heroes. Vindicated, honorable, but rough around the edges.

And yet...I feel my "side-character love" creeping up. Meira, my favorite character (which is to say, the one I found most intriguing) , is the one I can reveal the least about. She almost got my "favorite quote" vote but the one above was simply too deliciously bitter for me to pass up on.

I would recommend this book to Fantasy lovers and lovers of Fairy Tales. And by Fairy Tales, I don't mean those of the watered down Disney variety.
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Review by: KaterinaBlakelock on Dec. 01, 2011 : star star star star
The shifting of viewpoints was a little confusing in the beginning, but it's an engrossing tale set in a fascinating world.
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Review by: TheSFReader on Aug. 24, 2011 : star star star star star
Such a nice book, greatly written, with a captivating story. What's more, it's world is quite refreshing for me, a mix of "tribal" cultures.
The only problem is that it leaves me wanting for more. I now can't wait for the next part.
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Review by: fiskani nyirenda on April 15, 2011 : (no rating)
wow! I couldn't put it down. Its so fluid and....wow, cant wait to read book 2!
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