Francis W. Porretto
on April 09, 2014 :
I'll pass in silence over the detail errors in grammar and punctuation; after all, they might have been deliberate, to create authenticity. But I can't pass over the heavy-handedness of your polemic. This is barely a story as most of us understand the term.
The criminal-to-terrorist motif almost redeems the story, but without a follow-up it doesn't rise sufficiently above the prior polemicizing to amount to much.
Your craft is good and promises better things to come, but please moderate the preaching next time.
(review of free book)