The author did a great job with the characters. It had me invested in their story. However the story line though it had potential, it fell flat for me at the climax. The author had build up this big conflict (and took her time getting us there) only to brush it aside real quick to give us a happy ending. I mean why create a villian if you're not going to utilize him effectively? Just my two cents.....
The Fake Husband
on Nov. 27, 2012
Very fun read! It's been awhile since I've read an erotica book with humor. I love the two main characters. Its so easy to see why they are a perfect match. Being that it was a short story, I can see myself reading this story over and over again! Thank you!