Reviews of Murder On The Mountain
by GlennAndSasha Gabriel
Murder on the mountain. It’s not the first time blood soaks the ground and it won’t be the last. Kids are left without their parents and those who murder, cheer. Would you? A 553 word short story.
Reviews of Murder On The Mountain by GlennAndSasha Gabriel
Brendon Lewis
reviewed
on April 9, 2013
I loved this story than the others.very well written with a clever ending.
(review of free book)
Kyle Schewe
reviewed
on May 14, 2012
Written well, but written to be clever, this fast moving short story takes a very specific viewpoint and tries to drive home a point.
While not knowing what the story was about, I already knew the ending almost immediately. It felt very transparent, and it did not have the same impact knowing how clever the author was trying to be. It is very difficult to write a surprise ending like this, especially if the story loses its impact because the reader catches on before they are supposed to.
(review of free book)