Reviews of Murder On The Mountain

This is a tightly-written, tense short story with a surprise at its conclusion. The black humor which is one of the signature features of its writer's oeuvre is again in evidence here, and effective for its allegorical impact.

Very clever writing. I was not expecting that for an ending. Well done!

I really liked this story. Well written with a twist.

I have got to tell you, was surprised in the end! Nice! Not real fond of people who... murder as they do.

I used to be one of those jerks. No more.
The story caught me off guard.
Perfect writing to me.

Great story but ending surprisd me.
I agree!
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Very interesting idea for a story. Love this one!

Wow! Great twist at the end!

I don't think people realise how difficult it is to write flash fiction like this and still wow your readers - this was very nicely done, with the type of twist I love. I've always believed that animals are much more like us than we give them credit for, and I completely agree with the idiot murderer being depicted as that. Well worth the read.

I was not expecting this!
I'm thinking it's a person and then... what a surprise!
You've got a great story-telling ability!
Please write something longer!!