Reviews of Bunnies

Great short story - wonderfully done. Not a childrens book - but adults will find this a wonderful short read. Horror genre.

What a great little story! Often with unknown authors there is a concern about spelling and grammatical errors that an editor would pick up. Not so here; I was able to relax and enjoy the action.
I loved the difference in writing styles between the two characters, painted a better picture than paragraphs of descriptive prose.
Will hunt down your others now!

I really enjoyed this story. I liked the transition between the two characters, it happened very organically with the transferring of the box.

It drew me in in a subtle way - I was just casually reading and slowly found myself getting more and more tense waiting to find out what would happen.

Very imaginative and engaging, great work as always :-)

This is a great evil little story. Well written and a little twisted. I will never look at my daughters rabbits in the same way again!

Good story! Starts out with a feel like a normal children's story with a hint of foreshadowing, and then gets darker and definitely creepier.

This was nicely written from a child's point of view. Bunnies have now joined the creepy ranks with clowns and ice cream trucks. The window was a little much, but still an awesome story.

Pretty good for a horror short about kids; my only real issue was that I didn't really understand the 'rules' of how the bunnies worked (I don't want to say much more to avoid spoilers).

I love the way that this was written from the perspective of the children themselves - the thought process, the innocence and the realisation of consequences following actions.

A great little story there. Thanks for sharing.

Great characters and buildup, tapping into how crappy kids are to each other and fears of critters. I wasn't too crazy about half the story centering on Katarina and half on Brendan, and there were a few typos, such as 'breath' where 'breathe' was intended. I think a leaner, 3500-word version would do the trick more effectively, but overall I enjoyed reading it--most importantly, I finished!