Location: United States
Member Since:
Aug. 29, 2019
Cocoa788
Cocoa788's favorite authors on Smashwords
Gay Monster Rape
Latest book:
Gay Monster Rape: The Prince and the Orc.
Published November 25, 2023. (5.00 from 1 review)
Published November 25, 2023. (5.00 from 1 review)
Smashwords book reviews by Cocoa788
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Barefoot, Pregnant & Gay
on May 16, 2023
The blurb doesn’t match the actual story. And the story is really really hard to follow. Because each paragraph seems like there’s stuff that should go between it, or missing completely. Like one paragraph will be a big fight, and the next paragraph they’re engaged, and then the very next paragraph it’s the wedding. Or they’ll be trying to get pregnant, and then the character is immediately like six months pregnant in the next paragraph and sporting a baby bump. It’s very hard to follow because it seems like there’s things missing between each paragraph, and the description feels like it’s from a different story entirely. Hate to leave a bad review because I’m sure the author worked very hard on it, but I just could not finish. It was so hard to understand and get through, and so confusing, because of all the points made previously. I got halfway, and couldn’t finish the rest.