Murder on the mountain. It’s not the first time blood soaks the ground and it won’t be the last. Kids are left without their parents and those who murder, cheer. Would you? A 553 word short story.
I don't think people realise how difficult it is to write flash fiction like this and still wow your readers - this was very nicely done, with the type of twist I love. I've always believed that animals are much more like us than we give them credit for, and I completely agree with the idiot murderer being depicted as that. Well worth the read.
I was not expecting this!
I'm thinking it's a person and then... what a surprise!
You've got a great story-telling ability!
Please write something longer!!