The descriptions were spot on and I was able to envision the entire scene. Really enjoyed the plot twist!
(review of free book)
Secret Narrative reviewed
on May 14, 2012
Beautifully written with meticulous attention to detail, simply adored the reference to Poker. Great finish!Actually, great opening, great development, great finish. Loved it.
Quick and to the point. I do like a tad more storyline but I get the idea. :)
You reviewed one of my stories... Thanks...I wrote a second one and if you read it let me know what you think.
Getting a blow job behind a dumpster from a street walker while worrying about being robbed by her pimp???? I saw nothing erotic about this book at all
Firstly I personally don't like the front cover which looks more like it should be on a gardening book. Secondly there is no structure or paragraphs in the book it is basically an essay. Thirdly it is a mildly good story however it doesn't flow as well as it could have done.