Reviews of Mary's Toy

A superbly intriguing tale, short, sweet, incredibly erotic and oh so sexy. Delightfully detailed, perfectly described, with an exquisitely executed finale.

I just loved this story. It was great. Every woman should own one of those. They are great. The story sure gets you turned on.

That was fantastic!! Short sweet and hot

I look first for good writing, which certainly includes proper grammar. The style and voice are up to the author, but I expect the author to take me somewhere else and make me believe the story. Dialog that sounds right is a plus. These expectations are why I go to Ernest Winchester: He's dependable.

Mary's Toy--five stars.

Short but hot, this story makes me wonder what my wife is doing at home while I'm gone. I can only hope I catch her at this sometime. Well-written and a fun, quick read. Well done.

Wonderfully written, loved the details of both character and action. Nice twist at the end, though I think it begs for a sequal.

good suspense. the ending lingers in your mind. not my style of writing but extremely well written

this was GREAT! hot & well-written. LOVED it!

This author has a way with suprising endings, great quick read.

The sex toy company should hire you to promote their products. Superb masturbation story!