I've been writing for as long as I can remember. It's how I express myself and it really shows my true thoughts and personality. Currently, I am engaged to my soul-mate of 3 and a half years and am about to be a freshman in college.
And for the man who critiqued my short story, Public Humiliation, I am in fact a teenage writer. I wrote that in my junior year of high school. Please, excuse my lack of editing. I get overly excited about my writing and do not reread what I write, as I am aware I should. Also, unless you have written an erotica or anything that can be judged on this site, please do not give your input until then. Thank you.
A teacher's lesson is interrupted when her Marine husband and master comes to play.
DISCLAIMER: All students as mentioned in the story are over the age of 18. This is a college classroom unlike previously assumed by the creators of this site. I repeat, there are no underaged people view the acts as described nor are they taking part in it.
One Plus Two Minus One
on March 24, 2013
This is a very unusual but intriguing novella. I thoroughly enjoyed the characters and could feel my emotions being taken on a roller coaster. Throughout the novella, I felt quite agitated at her unwillingness to take action over her life until the very end.
There were a few errors here and there, grammatically and spelling wise. Overall, very very nice. :)
on April 11, 2013
I fell in love with this book. I could not wait to finish my work and find out what will happen next. I appreciate the changes in Cal while he maintains his sweetness. If only all guys could be like that. The two main characters are made for each other and I cannot wait for the next book. My jaw dropped at his ex-wife's unexpected text. There's no way the child is his right? I mean, his affair start more than 6 months before that point and I doubt they had sex during, or even before, it started. I really hope that it's not his and that his little minx is having one in the future.