Kesha's favorite authors on Smashwords

Kevin Davis
Latest book: Helping out my Straight Neighbors.
Published January 6, 2024.
Aric Lanewood
Latest book: House Guest: An Unexpected Summoning.
Published February 28, 2024.
Delilah Demoan
Latest book: Cinnamon.
Published March 1, 2024.
Alaric Maison
Latest book: The Eccentric and Feral.
Published January 8, 2024.
Mychael Black
Latest book: On His Knees.
Pre-release—available March 17, 2024.
Rob Masters
Latest book: Bondage with Jacob.
Published August 24, 2023.
A. Dean
Latest book: My Straight Boss.
Published January 23, 2024.
...and 257 more

Smashwords book reviews by Kesha

  • The Thought on Dec. 04, 2013

    I loved this book. I totally agree with Natasha Action. This book has everything. I loved the characters and the action. It's amazing how one single thought can become an obsession and change a person. If the new book is as good or better, the reader is in for a real treat.
  • Straight Through on Dec. 10, 2013

    I'm on the fence about this book. The beginning started off strong and grabbed my attention. I actually felt a connection between the Brandon and Paul. But when it was time for the sex, the story lost something. The sex was rushed which is usually not a problem for me, but I would have liked a little more details in the intimacy. I would have liked if Brandon did the taking, showing Paul how good it could be. Then let Paul take him next time. I was expecting a little more from this author since I really enjoyed The Thought. The story wasn't awful, but I was hoping for more.
  • Flirt Alert on Dec. 30, 2013

    It was a good story but really short. The price was to much for the length of the story. I would have been happier with more story. To me this was a flirt.
  • Sucked By My Straight Stepdad (a First Time Gay Taboo Tale) on Feb. 06, 2014

    I really enjoyed this book. It was well written and the sex was hot. I would love to read to read an second installment with characters to see how their relationship has continued. I would think I would enjoy reading other books by this author.
  • Danny's Story: The Recruiter on Jan. 02, 2018

    I loved this book. It was engaging and very sexy. I would read more from this writer.
  • Jason's Story: Internet Hookup on Jan. 03, 2018

    I give this 3.5 stars. The story was a nice first time and Jason was lucky to find Jeff. Someone to help him and not rush him. The story was not overly explicit but nice.
  • Gay Werewolf Biker Gangbang on July 15, 2018

    This wasn’t as good as I thought it would be. It wasn’t sexy or erotica. I’m glad the price was only $.99.
  • Straight No More on Aug. 09, 2018

    This story could’ve easily been a 4 or 5 stars. However, the editing mistakes (I.e. missing words, spelling) are hard to ignore. The sex between Matt and Mr. Carter could’ve been more drawn out, but it was still hot. Because of the editing, this story lost points. 2.5 stars but I’ll give 3 for the sex.
  • Paying The Bill on Aug. 26, 2018

    This was a fun story. I didn’t think I would enjoy this but I was surprised.
  • The Dual Turntable on Aug. 26, 2018

    Well...Dave couldn't seem to get enough. After all he really needs that dual turntable. I like Dave and Ty together and who knows maybe they'll have a HEA.
  • The Power Receiver on Aug. 26, 2018

    Honestly explain to me how naive can Dave be. Someone wanted to try something kinky for a long time. The story was very entertaining and sexy.
  • Like a Good Neighbor on Aug. 26, 2018

    This story was so good. It was funny and charming. It engaged the reader from the very beginning. However, I do feel let down. What happens between Pierce and Don? Does this become a neighbor with benefits? Another story with these two would be awesome.
  • Let's Make a Deal on Aug. 26, 2018

    This was a really good. Very sexy. I was sad when the story ended. I would’ve loved to read more about Greg, Woody and the unknown buyer.
  • Brothers in Business: Gay Stepbrother Pseudo Incest Erotica on Aug. 29, 2018

    A good story. Nothing romantic here. Switched character names once.
  • Crossing the Line on Sep. 03, 2018

    The story was good, hot even. This story could’ve been 4 or 5 stars. However, the spelling errors... PROOFREADING IS A MUST! Proofreading makes the difference between 3 stars and 5 stars.
  • Bully Blowjob on Sep. 03, 2018

    I knew this would be a non-consensual sexual act. But I thought it would be more. The story was so short, just as the reader was getting into it, the story ended. There was no real finish and it just left unanswered questions. I can’t say it’s worth $.99 as is. I’m giving two stars just for the premise.
  • Boomer the Gorilla & His Pussy Boy on Dec. 02, 2018

    This was deliciously naughty. I really enjoyed reading the story. There were a couple editing mistakes but I hardly noticed them. I hope Naughti Gurl continues to write, I’m curious about what is in next for Henry.
  • The Butt Baby on Dec. 02, 2018

    This was a weird but funny story. Also, a little gross at times. I’m happy for the happy ending. An interesting premise for male pregnancy.
  • Master's Pet, Fenrir's Bitch on Dec. 16, 2018

    Awesome story. So unbelievably hot. I would recommend being open-minded when reading this.
  • Minotaur Sex Slave (Reluctant Gay Monster Sex Forced BDSM) on Dec. 16, 2018

    This was an interest story. There were some editing mistakes (i.e. spelling, etc) but fun.
  • Like and Subscribe on Dec. 16, 2018

    This was a sweet romantic story. It’s funny where you can find your dream partner and where u least expect it.
  • Timmy's Adventures in Dog Sitting First Encounter on March 19, 2019

    This is not a story for everyone. If your open-minded, then you will thoroughly enjoy this one.
  • The Patience of Elves on March 19, 2019

    This was really good. I wasn’t disappointed at all with this story. I wished the story continued a little longer. Maybe a part 2.
  • Taking Kevin on March 27, 2019

    This wasn’t a bad read. But the word choices used could’ve been better (i.e. his tasty banana). Also, the writer switched pronouns at the end. I never could understand why the person who is being blackmailed just doesn’t come clean to their wives or husbands. It’s just a sex video, not an assassination.
  • Wedding Day Jitters on May 03, 2019

    This was very enjoyable. There was A LOT of action between these family members. Very hot read. Luke made the right choice.
  • A Night in the Drunk Tank With Dad on May 03, 2019

    This story was very good. It was a fun read and I don’t think this will be the last time these 4 men will take pleasure from each other. At least I hope.
  • Bottom Daddies on May 04, 2019

    I love all three stories. So hot. My favorite story was Mitch Takes A Seat.
  • My Camping Trip With Dad on May 04, 2019

    A good story. I could’ve done without the water sports but to each their own. 3.5 stars
  • Feminized by My Daughter's Boyfriend on May 04, 2019

    Awesome story. I was hoping Victor, sorry Simone and Brad would meet more often. The story was well written and very sexy.
  • He Made Me His Bitch on May 04, 2019

    This was an odd story. Very amusing actually. A couple of typos. This was not as interesting as Feminized By Daughter’s Boyfriend.
  • My Girlfriend’s Stallion on May 13, 2019

    This was...interesting. First, it would’ve been nice to know the boyfriend’s name. There were one or two typos. But if you enjoy bestiality stories, then you might enjoy this.
  • The Most Natural Thing: A Close Relations Series Novella on June 03, 2019

    This was a really good story. It was kink galore and fun. I think it’s good for Josiah to go out find out if his feelings for Micah are true or if there someone else for him. Maybe, the new person for Josiah is very open minded and doesn’t mind sharing.
  • My Mistress's Husband on June 13, 2019

    This was good but it was too short. I think the story could’ve been expanded some more. Maybe expand the tension between Mark and Sam. Maybe Mark could be the dominant and take Sam. The possibilities are endless.
  • Falling into the Trap on June 13, 2019

    A good story but too short. These story could’ve gone on a lot longer and could’ve been drawn out more.
  • Riding Ryan on June 13, 2019

    No to water sorts. Not for me. One pronoun change. The
  • The Right Gift at the Wrong Door on June 13, 2019

    This was a really good story. I’m always looking forward to other works from this writer.
  • Sexy Shorts: Gay Hookups and Anonymous Quickies: Volume One on June 16, 2019

    A solid good collection of short stories. Some are very erotica and some are good first time stories. Some can be made into longer stories with character backgrounds.
  • Home Invasion! on June 16, 2019

    Really good. But I’m wondering if it was just Duke to return or all of the men? What about Max? How will he feel knowing his boyfriend likes having sex with his Dad? Will he want to participate? Unanswered questions.
  • Right Under Mom's Nose on June 16, 2019

    So good. Highly Recommended. John Valjean is master of taboo.
  • Done by the Dragon on June 16, 2019

    This was an ok story. Very short was hoping for more.
  • High School Bully (A Forced Gay High School Story) on July 27, 2019

    I’m sorry but sounds to me that Scott is the gay boy in this story. Yeah, Tim is also gay but Scott is DEFINITELY batting for the other team. If I was Tim I would dare Scott to out him, and when the question came, “ who was Tim giving oral sex to?” I would out Scott. There was one character name switch.
  • While My Brother Was Asleep, A Taboo Sleeping Family Sex Fantasy on Aug. 04, 2019

    I loved this story. The passion and acknowledgement of their feelings for each other. Very hot.
  • Punished by My Brother: A Taboo Mpreg Series on Aug. 30, 2019

    This was an ok story. It was dark and humiliating but both brothers enjoyed it. That’s the point.
  • Read The Fine Print on Aug. 30, 2019

    I am not really one for using hypnosis to conquer someone sexually. But I was curious and read this anyway. This strangely amusing and teaches a lesson: always read the fine print!
  • Halloween Dinner Date (Dark Holidays 1) on Sep. 15, 2019

    This was an ok story. I thought it could’ve been longer. It wasn’t really a steamy story but I guess it was a nice warm-up.
  • Johnson's Pack: "The Pack Party" on Sep. 22, 2019

    This story needs serious editing. There misspelled words, grammatical errors every where. After Cory saw James with a different omega, he said he wouldn’t be with anyone other than his destined mate. Then boom Cory’s is with James. What happened in between these two events. The reader needs clarification. As is I can only give one star.
  • Johnson's Pack: The Gender Swap on Sep. 22, 2019

    Wow...reading this story gave me a headache. So many editing mistakes: spelling and grammar. Just a mess. Please find a editor and fix your work.
  • He Needs Discipline on Sep. 23, 2019

    This was really good. I enjoyed it. Looking forward to the second installment.
  • Alien's Pet on Nov. 01, 2019

    This was a good book. I wouldn’t call it erotic or sexy, but a nice explanation of abductions.
  • Heads or Tails: A Night inside Him on Nov. 01, 2019

    This was a good story. Very sexy. However, the title didn’t really match up to the story. I thought it would be a game of heads or tails, with partners making bets or switching positions.
  • He Needs Discipline #2: Excuses on Nov. 05, 2019

    This was a good story. There were a few editing mistakes. But a good half-brothers to lovers story.
  • The Count of Three on Nov. 09, 2019

    This was a interesting story. Not much background on the characters, just that they are mages. This was an ok story, but very short. What happened to Alex?
  • Brother Wrestling on Nov. 09, 2019

    This was too short to really get into. It started and then ended. I wish this was longer and more detailed.
  • Ouija Pleasure on Nov. 10, 2019

    This was totally creepy and interesting at the same time. I feel bad for Sam. What happens when Sam meets someone..,oh my god.
  • Resistance is Fertile: The Devil's Forced Breeding on Nov. 15, 2019

    I love non-con / dub-con stories. This one really hit all the right buttons. Thoroughly enjoyable and sexy. Can’t wait to read more from this writer.
  • Taken on Dec. 09, 2019

    This was an good story. I thought story could’ve been a little longer, but still it was a good start to the series.
  • The Arrangement on Dec. 15, 2019

    This was a short and sweet story. I loved it. Captain Blackwater is kind and generous and for a pirate that is....interesting.
  • Forced Assault: Revenge of the Jocks on Dec. 15, 2019

    There were names switches a few times throughout the story. This was just ok. 2.5. Stars.
  • Bearing His Pups Part One on Dec. 15, 2019

    This was a good story, I’m concerned there isn’t a part two for this. So we may never know what happens to Cam, his pups or if Dr. M forces himself on Cam. Um...
  • The Three on Feb. 23, 2020

    This book was a good read. This is a gay erotica version of the three little pigs, but so much better.
  • No Rush on April 18, 2020

    This was an ok story to read. It was a nice first time story.
  • A Billionaire Daddy Dom Punished by Two Scottish Highlanders on April 23, 2020

    This was an ok story to read. It was entertaining. I think it could’ve had more detailed with the ‘relationship’ between Bruce, Fergus and Davey. The sex was just kind of skimmed over.
  • Orcs and Elves: The Dark Times on May 09, 2020

    An interesting twist on the relationship between elves and orcs. Not the same as the Lord of Rings I can tell you. A good story. I felt sorry for the elves. To lose one’s identity like this...3.5 stars
  • Newblood Initiate (Midnight Pearl Brotherhood, Ep. 1) on June 04, 2020

    This story was ok. There one or two editing mistakes. But I’m curious to see what happens,
  • His Surrender: Male/male Seduction on June 13, 2020

    This story was good. It could’ve been a little longer and it definitely needs a second installment. Looking forward to reading more.
  • The Captain's Cabin on July 20, 2020

    This was a quick steamy read. I was saddened it ended so quickly. But still enjoyable p.
  • Caught by My Brother on July 24, 2020

    This was really good. This was the first time I read a story by this writer. I was not disappointed. I do wish the story was longer with more interaction between Jack, Lance and Tristan. The three men have the makings of a good threesome relationship.
  • True Gay Confessions (Complete Series) – Four True Stories of First Man on Man Experiences on July 25, 2020

    This was a good collection of stories. Nothing romantic here just raw sex. I could read other such stories for this writer.
  • Watching Her Man Take A Big Black Cock on July 25, 2020

    This wasn’t a bad story. I enjoyed reading it. It was sexy.
  • Man & Beast on July 26, 2020

    I read this book some years ago. I didn’t review it, so I’m doing it now. A great story and characters. This keeps the reader engaged. Highly recommended.
  • Brainwashing the Straight Hunk Next Door on Aug. 04, 2020

    This was really good. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.
  • Taken in my Straight, Virgin Ass on the Subway on Aug. 05, 2020
    (no rating)
    This was my first time reading this writer. This was a good dub con story. I just wish it was longer and they did more somewhere else. I’m looking forward to reading more,
  • Taken in my Straight, Virgin Ass on the Subway on Aug. 05, 2020

    This was so good. The point of view from the ‘catcher’ on the train. It doesn’t sound like he minded be used on the train. The reader gets the impression he’ll do it again.
  • The Cumslut’s Secret: Caught Sucking Dick and Fucked By His Son-in-Law on Aug. 07, 2020

    This was a good story. I just wish it was longer. This story had a lot more potential.
  • Earning The Raise With A Threesome: The Beta Gets Fucked In The Ass By His Boss While His Wife Watches on Aug. 08, 2020

    This was a awesome story. My goodness. It was such a turn on. There was one minor editing mistake. I want more. I’m mostly interested in Brett and David.
  • Closer than Brothers: 3 Incest Shorts on Aug. 08, 2020

    Drawing My Brother: awesome story. So hot. Fun read. Caught By My Brother: this was a really good story. Lance and Tristan despite being identical twins so different. Jake is a good catch. Not judgmental. A nice threesome. Locked In With My Brother: if I could give this story 10 stars I would. Such a turn on.
  • Punishing My Brother on Aug. 08, 2020

    This was awesome. My goodness this was so good.
  • A Peek Under the Towel on Aug. 09, 2020

    this story was more aggressive and raw. Colten and James are two forces of nature. The give and take between the two is explosive. Some minor editing mistakes.
  • One Night Together on Aug. 09, 2020

    this was so good. So hot. I’ve found a new favorite writer to add to my list.
  • Daddy's Favorite Camper on Aug. 09, 2020

    This was a good story. A fun and sexy story. I wish it was longer. Greedy me!
  • Fucked in my Straight, Virgin Ass on the 4th of July on Aug. 09, 2020

    these stories are fun. I enjoyed this one immensely. At least this time the poor guy was able to get relief AND a phone number. It would be so hot to read that story.
  • Fucking the Frat Bro's Straight, Virgin Ass in the Parking Lot on Aug. 16, 2020

    I wish this stories were longer. It should be criminal they are so short because these are really good. It makes you wonder what the bigger guy would do with even more time and without interruptions.
  • Taking the Stranger's Straight, Virgin Ass on the Subway on Aug. 16, 2020

    This was a good story but too short. You just wanted the big construction guy to take his conquest home and really make him scream. More please.
  • Gay BDSM Club 4-Pack Bundle on Aug. 17, 2020

    This was a excellent series. From beginning to end, you will not be disappointed. However, I am not one for water sports so that one small section was a turn off for me. But other than this was enjoyable.
  • I'll Do All the Work on Aug. 17, 2020

    This story was good but too short. Also, there wer few editing mistakes that interrupts the flow of the story.
  • My First Time on Aug. 18, 2020

    This was an ok story. There were minor editing mistakes. Apparently Jay just needed someone to treat him like crap to find his mojo. Yeah, was a jerk but honestly does anyone think there special when someone famous takes an interest? Maybe sometimes....
  • A Sordid Understanding on Aug. 23, 2020

    This was a good story. I was hoping for some action between Leonard and Isaac. That’s really the main reason I bought this book. But I’m thinking I’ll get my wish and maybe enjoy Hal, Isaac and Leonard together...eventually.
  • Hurts So Good on Sep. 05, 2020

    A good collection of stories.
  • Fucked in my Straight, Virgin Ass by the Museum Guard on Sep. 05, 2020

    I do enjoy reading stories by this writer. So much fun.
  • Big D's Repair Service on Sep. 06, 2020

    I am not into water sports. So I could’ve done without those details. There wad a character name switch and some editing mistakes.
  • Fucked in my Straight, Virgin Ass by my Ex's Dad on Sep. 06, 2020

    I only wish the stories were longer. They are so fun to read.
  • Fucking the Pro Goalie's Straight, Virgin Ass at Practice on Sep. 06, 2020

    Always a pleasure to read these stories. Looking forward to more.
  • Pirate's Boy on Sep. 07, 2020

    3.5 stars: A quick short story. A nice tease before bed. A pirate ship with nothing but good looking men. Sign me up.
  • Teacher's Pet on Sep. 11, 2020

    This was a good story. Very hot. However some background information would’ve been good as to how Jack was able to make his teacher submit to him. Some word choices in a few sentences could’ve been better. But still very enjoyable. Looking forward to reading more.
  • Orcs Are Made For Raping on Sep. 11, 2020

    This story was too short to really enjoy and I’m not sure I understood what happened. The elf prince was captured by an orc. The Orc began having his way with the prince. Then suddenly the prince gathered his magic and killed the orc. If he could’ve done that in the first place why bother with the charade? It wasn’t as if the prince enjoyed being used by the orc. So I don’t know. 2.5 to 3 stars
  • Rick: Dudes Who Turn You On #1 on Sep. 22, 2020

    This was an ok story. I was expecting a little more action but I guess for a nice tease.
  • The Beast in the Nothing Room on Oct. 03, 2020

    This was a different type of story for me. It had everything to make it an engaging story. I did hope Rob, Stuart, Finn and Christian all ended in a relationship with each other. Talk about taboo.
  • Mitch: Dudes Who Turn You On #2 on Oct. 05, 2020

    This was a quick story. It was over too quickly to really enjoy. I wish it was longer.
  • Jake: Dudes Who Turn You On #3 on Oct. 05, 2020

    Not enough meat on the bone to enjoy this. It was over as quickly as it started. I think this could’ve been longer with more detail.
  • Fucked in my Straight, Virgin Ass in the Wall on Oct. 15, 2020

    Well....this is a fine pickle this guy finds himself in. But this was a good story and a little funny.
  • Fucking the Stranger's Straight, Virgin Ass in the Wall on Oct. 15, 2020

    This story is from point of view of the ‘taker’. When opportunity knocks or gets stuck in a wall...take it. Cool story.
  • Underwear House Cleaning Crew: My Straight Best Friend’s First Gay Threesome on Oct. 16, 2020

    I must say this was thoroughly enjoyable. It did seem like Jeremy was taking advantage of Chris’ drunken state, but Chris seemed to enjoy the end result. The action is quick and to the point. I wish the story was longer.
  • Fucked in my Straight, Virgin Ass by the Trucker on Oct. 29, 2020

    Stories from DB Dixon is always a pleasure to read. This story was no different,
  • The Satyr's Virgin Sacrifice on Oct. 29, 2020

    This was a good story. I’m looking forward to reading more.
  • A Gay BDSM Pair: Two in One on Dec. 11, 2020

    Loved these two stories. Well mostly the second.
  • Fucking my Neighbor's Straight, Virgin Ass in the Elevator on Dec. 12, 2020

    This was a good story. It was I’ve come to hope for from DB Dixon.
  • Fucked in my Straight, Virgin Ass by the City Bus Driver on Dec. 12, 2020

    Hey...I wanted to read about the lacrosse buddies getting their piece of 24-year artist. Mr. Dixon owes me a ménage. Even without the group sex the story was still hot.
  • Fucking the College Stud's Straight, Virgin Ass on the Bus on Dec. 12, 2020

    Why didn’t he take the Erik home with him?! I know he’s tired but I’m sorry he could’ve worked out one more release. Story was still hot.
  • The Secret Diary on Dec. 12, 2020

    3.5 stars There wasn’t much story but a lot of sex between elven brothers. Didn’t bother me in the slightest. But it seemed to me this needed more storyline and not just every page sex. This type of story needed dragons or some type of other excitement in between the sex.
  • An Illegal Suggestion on Dec. 13, 2020

    3.5 stars This was an ok story. There was a little storyline but the story was mostly sex between Midnight and Raven. There was one or two writing mistakes.
  • Drew's Guest on Dec. 19, 2020

    2.5 stars I am sure how I should rate this. The story wasn’t really arousing or sexy. The story didn’t have any life in it. It could’ve use more details and described how everything felt. There were also one or two minor spelling errors.
  • In the Minotaur's Labyrinth: Gay Erotica on Dec. 23, 2020

    This was story was so short. 3 pages and 1 column of a paragraph. The rest of the book is only a list of other stories offered by this writer. The story didn’t arouse or tease. It was over before the reader could enjoy it. I’ve read a few Minotaur stories, but this one was a disappointment. I’m glad this story was free.
  • First Times: Seducing My Straight Coworker on Jan. 02, 2021

    This was a ok story. It was a nice first time gay.
  • Fucked in my Straight, Virgin Ass by the Man I Tried to Rob on Jan. 05, 2021

    I really enjoyed this story. Lesson learned and if this guy doesn’t remember the lesson, I’m sure there are some sexy dominant Daddies that can teach him.
  • Prurient Possibilities on Feb. 15, 2021

    This was a good story. My only complaint is that I want to see more intimacy between Isaac and Leonard and then with all three men. I want to see Isaac and Leonard use Hal. I think the three men can have a wonderful relationship.
  • Uncharted Territory on Feb. 19, 2021

    Finally the action I’ve been aching to see between Isaac and Leonard. It was beautiful to read. And I’m looking forward to the interaction between all three men. I’m so loving this series. There was one name change in the story.
  • Student Pet Book 1: Punished on Feb. 25, 2021

    For a short story there was a lot action packed in. I really enjoyed reading this. There were minor spelling mistakes but I’ve read worse. I’m looking forward to the next installment.
  • Sharing His Sub on March 05, 2021

    I do wish this story was longer. But just this little fragment was great to read.
  • His Brother's Care on March 05, 2021

    Oh such a tease are these stories are. Still loved it even though it ended so quickly.
  • A Rousing Display on March 05, 2021

    3.75 stars: I’m not sure what to think. I wanted to read about Tommy and the three ‘guests’. Fragments is the correct description of these stories.
  • A Welcome Sting on March 05, 2021

    I’m not sure how to review this story. It was exactly as described: a short (really short) smutlet. The story just jumps right into the action, no explanation of the characters or how they connected. Just Tommy tied up on the boss’s desk.
  • Doing His Best on March 05, 2021

    This was short but still hot.
  • Father Me With Temptation on March 10, 2021

    Ok...first things first. Adam is gay or at least bisexual. The story, for me wasn’t engaging. The constant denials from Adam were becoming annoying. The story just didn’t ring the right tone with me.
  • Bought for Breeding: Auctioned Off as a Tentacle Alien Eggsac! on March 20, 2021

    This was a enjoyable story. I was hoping to read about the birth and whether Dirk will be able to overcome the aphrodisiacs of the male and female and escape. Maybe next time.
  • A Tentacle Encounter on April 12, 2021

    I just wish this was longer. Oh, the possibilities. The story is short but enjoyable.
  • A Kinky Call on April 12, 2021

    Loved it. Nothing else to say.
  • Prey on April 16, 2021

    I think I needed a little more clarification as to why Taylor was dancing with a snake and if this is an alien planet! I need something more! But the story was interesting.
  • Locker Room Confidential on April 16, 2021

    The story was good and very hot, but I’m not sure of the rating. Supposedly straight guys showering together and then having sex together. Interesting team dynamic.
  • His Brother's Mouth on April 16, 2021

    I wanted to know what Jake wanted for his reward. Teasing the readers is apparently fun.
  • Banging My Blindfolded Bro: Gay Incest Breeding on April 25, 2021

    There was one editing mistake. The writer used she instead of he. The story was good. I do think the writer could’ve made the story longer, giving more action. The potential and possibilities was there.
  • Alpha Rut, Omega Heat : All in the Family - Five Book Bundle on May 01, 2021

    This was an interesting collection of stories. Bred By My Alpha Father: Andy forgot his heat suppressants, thinking his father would be away with a female Omega. And the cabin is in isolated area. But his father returns just as Andy’s heat is really starting. This was a quick and direct. Not much story line. Knotted by My Alpha Brother: This was a Alpha brother trying to help his Omega brother. They are trapped together in a elevator just as Benji’s heat hits. I wish this was longer, it had potential. Mated by My Alpha Son: Oh I think this one was my favorite story so far. I wish this one was really longer. David is the Omega father who just wanted to spend time with his 18 year old Alpha son Connor. But Connor has other ideas and takes his father. I just wanted more. Rutting my Omega Twin: this was an good story. Once again the potential is there for a nice story line. Stuffing my Omega Nephew: this Omega decided not to take his pills so that his Alpha boyfriend (his parents do not like the Alpha) can take his heat. Well...he gets his Alpha Uncle Bill. All in all I just wish all the stories were longer.
  • Dad Son Sex Secrets 4-Pack Bundle on May 17, 2021

    These were ok stories to read.
  • Locker Room Rape on May 20, 2021

    I hope there will be a second story about Connor and Noah. How will Noah react to this new dimension to his arousal. Will Connor only use him or will it be something more? Can’t wait for more.
  • Paying the Rent on May 20, 2021

    This was a very good and fun to read.
  • The Taming of Colton on May 23, 2021

    There were editing mistakes and a name switch in this story. The writer may want to re-edit this story. The story was good despite the lacking of proofreading and it could’ve been longer. Heck, I could imagine Dominic getting two more boys to keep Colton company. Also, the first story The Breaking of Colton I purchased some time ago, but the writer was Roman Delacroix. So I’m not sure what’s going there.
  • Monster Hookup on May 28, 2021

    Oh no it’s over too soon. A good quick hot read.
  • Beneath His Boss on May 28, 2021

    Over too soon, but a good thrill.
  • Sharing the Priest on May 28, 2021

    I am always so saddened when these stories end. They are just so good. This story did not disappoint.
  • Kneeling for His Brother on May 28, 2021

    This is a fun kinky quickie.
  • The Endowment on July 10, 2021

    I must I was hesitant to read this book because I thought I won’t be able to handle it. But this was a awesome beginning to the series. I’m looking forward to reading the next installment.
  • Andrew's New Sneakers: Transformation Erotica on July 19, 2021

    I didn’t really enjoy this story. It needed some editing. I’ve read one other book by this writer and I found that one more enjoyable. This one was missing something.
  • The Mandate on July 30, 2021

    This was enjoyable book. It was dark and graphic. I’m happy Felix and Tristian found love with each other. I hope it isn’t the last time for either of them.
  • His Surrender: Breaking Kirill on Aug. 07, 2021

    This story was well worth the wait. Can’t wait to read more about Kirill, Maybe we’ll get a third installment.
  • Anonymous Surrender on Aug. 18, 2021

    Well if your looking for romance this ain’t it. Short and rough.
  • Trouble In The Locker-room on Sep. 03, 2021

    Well…this was one way of teaching team work to a big ego. I was expecting a more of lesson for Ryan Drew but it was ok.
  • Audience Participation on Sep. 11, 2021

    Oh my goodness so worth the wait. So incredibly arousing. I’m just hoping installment 5 doesn’t take to long to come out.
  • Tentacle Ship on Sep. 13, 2021

    This wasn’t a bad read. I was hoping for some mpreg but still the story was good.
  • Tentacle Seas on Oct. 07, 2021

    There were some minor writing mistakes but the story was ok.
  • Goodnight, Son on Oct. 12, 2021

    There were a few editing mistakes but the story is thoroughly hot.
  • You Should Have Knocked (An Alder Family Story) on Oct. 12, 2021

    Once again some minor editing mistakes. But I so enjoy reading this,
  • The Little Blue Apron on Oct. 12, 2021

    Oh how I wish this story were longer.
  • My Brother, My Slave: Twincest Erotica on Oct. 12, 2021

    2.5 stars at most. I have to be honest, this story is not worth $3.99 (in my opinion). I wish I could return it. The one disadvantage of Smashwords. The story seemed rushed and it could’ve been longer and more detailed ( a full novel).
  • The Remaking of Colton on Oct. 19, 2021

    The story ended too quickly and had some editing mistakes. However, I’m not opposed to a fourth installment with Dominic, Colton, Frasier and Oliver.
  • His Surrender: Confession on Nov. 18, 2021

    this was a good story. apparently Gene has absolutely no shame. my kind of story.
  • Uncle's Favorite Toy on Nov. 18, 2021

    this story wasn't as good as the other stories I've read from this writer. The formatting was also not very good.
  • The Male Wives of Beastmen II on Dec. 20, 2021

    3.5 stars - There some minor writing mistakes. But the stories were good. I would have liked to read about the births. Maybe next time.
  • My Son's Best Friend on Dec. 23, 2021

    This was an ok story. There was one mistake: Ken didn’t ask Kyle to move the car, he asked him to move the basketball hoop. Will Kyle be sleeping the entire Jergen family? Only time will tell.
  • He Came From Mars on Dec. 23, 2021

    This is a twist on alien abductions. The story was good but too short.
  • His Dad's Best Friend on Dec. 25, 2021

    So good. Thoroughly enjoyable.
  • Serving His Alpha Brothers on Dec. 27, 2021

    This was a ok story. I know it was a short story but it did seem rushed.There were minor editing mistakes.
  • Ridden by the Cowboys on Dec. 27, 2021

    This story was really good. But it was too short. I wanted more with Rich, Roy and Tex.
  • What Are You Wearing? on Dec. 31, 2021

    This was an ok story. I hope the two men at least live in the same city.
  • Confessing to Daddy. on Jan. 01, 2022

    The story waa ok. There were editing mistakes throughout the story. It could’ve been better.
  • Father May I? on Jan. 01, 2022

    This story would have been perfect if not for the spelling mistakes. It takes just a bit of time to proofread your work. But the action was hot. But despite that..2 stars
  • Father May II? on Jan. 01, 2022

    Once again proofreading and good editing is a must. It makes the difference for a good story and a bad story. I wonder how many times Mark / Matt (not really sure which name is correct) will ask Charlotte’s father? It is apparent he has a good time while asking.
  • Broken Brother on Jan. 20, 2022

    Well…what I just read is about how a rapist is born. I do hope Soren gets revenge and ruins Luke in every way possible. I can’t say I enjoyed reading this. I honestly thought this would be a dub-con story, with the characters attracted to each other and one has to force himself a little on the other, but the other would realize how much he wants it. Boy was I wrong. If you have any triggers, please do not read this story.
  • Beach Balls: A Gaycest One-Shot on Feb. 09, 2022

    This was an ok read. I do enjoy gay incest stories and this one had it all. My only turn off was a bit of the water sports.
  • House Call on March 16, 2022

    This was a good story, but too short. There were spelling mistakes. I do wonder who the werewolf visitor is.
  • Same Time Tomorrow on March 21, 2022

    A good mild tease of a story. Can be built upon if the writer decides to revisit.
  • Tentacles in the Vent on March 21, 2022

    This was ok. Tentacle sex is always fun.
  • Bratty Brother on April 09, 2022

    This was darn smokin’ good. So thoroughly enjoyed reading this. I was so bummed when the story was over. I am looking forward to reading more from this writer.
  • Benevolent Brother on April 09, 2022

    This was so good, I just wish it was longer. I wish Eric and Tom took their relationship another step further.
  • Begging for a Big Sale on April 10, 2022

    I’m not sure how I feel about this book. The story was detailed, I will give the writer that. It was an ok story to read.
  • Used by the Omegas: Gay Erotica on May 11, 2022

    I wish the story was longer and even more detailed. But it was good. I would give this 3.5 stars.
  • Becoming My Brother's Toy on May 20, 2022

    I nice quickie. Rough and quick.
  • Best Friends Bound on May 29, 2022

    There was a name switch and some misspelled words. The story was enjoyable but some proofreading would have made it better.
  • Taken By the Yrag: A Gay Tale of Alien Abduction on May 29, 2022

    This wasn’t a bad story. Interesting storyline. I’m am curious how the next installment will progress, if there is a next installment. I have been disappointed before and I am not hopeful with this writer either.
  • The Monster Games: Episode 2 - Greg on June 14, 2022

    This was highly enjoyable. The tender moments between Greg and his monster was nice. How did the monster know Greg would be feisty? Interesting. It would have been nice if some babies could be born but that’s for another story maybe.
  • The Orc Commandant's Captive on June 16, 2022

    This was a good story and enjoyable. It’s short but fun. A new way of looking at orcs.
  • The Werewolf and His Boyfriend Bride Part I on June 29, 2022

    This story is a mess. It would be great if not for the poor editing. The opening sentence what Terri’s name misspelled. There are inconsistencies and just goes downhill. Re-edited, rewrite and then resubmit.
  • A Rent Boy to Own on July 04, 2022

    This story was ok. It didn’t have much heat to it but I think that was the point. I think this story was more about connection and not the sex. At least that is the way it seemed. So the excitement for me wasn’t there. The story wasn’t bad but it didn’t grab my attention. Honestly, I would this story 2.5 to 3 star rating.
  • Spa Weekend on July 05, 2022

    Still loving this series.
  • Seducing the Dictator on July 09, 2022

    This was an awesome story. I loved it!
  • His to Use on July 13, 2022

    This is a short story in need of some proofreading. There were a few spelling mistakes. The story was….ok. My rating 2.5 stars.
  • Weekend Getaway on July 16, 2022

    I absolutely love Daniel and Ryan. This series is so much fun.
  • Caught In Between on July 17, 2022

    Brett is a sweet guy. He definitely is not meant to be a Dominant. This was a really good story.
  • Disowned on July 23, 2022

    This was another success. I loved this story and it was sad when it over.
  • Interspecies Breeding Exotic: MM Alien Noncon on July 26, 2022

    Well… Jack wanted money and he got more than he bargained for. This story was definitely a “what not to do” when a customer (an alien) wants a private dance at his house. I hope someone comes to look for Jack.
  • My Teammate on July 26, 2022

    Ok…I am sure this the storyline is decent but i wouldn’t know because of all the editing mistakes!! Missing words, extra words, misspelled words, etc. Is it too much trouble to expect a writer to proofread their work or get someone else to do it. It is so frustrating because you spend money thinking you will get quality work. As is…2 stars
  • Sunset Interloper on Aug. 02, 2022

    This was a short and interesting story. Oliver took seeing a merman really well. Not many would be so cool. I liked this story.
  • Straight to the Point on Aug. 28, 2022

    This was a good story and I really enjoyed reading it. There was one name change in the story. Also, maybe the book description can be revised because it reads the character’s name is Chuck and not Jack. I do wish there was an epilogue perhaps detailing what happened to Jack and Matt. Maybe Jack is bisexual or maybe his sexuality is more fluid.
  • The Werewolf and His Boyfriend Bride Part II on Aug. 29, 2022

    This story could use some editing. I must admit this story is like a car crash, you can’t help but look. The sex was maybe the best part.
  • Tales From the Bear's Back Bar: What Would You Do?: Gay Male Bareback Gangbang MC Club (Bear's Back MC Club 1) on Sep. 06, 2022

    Awesome story! So hot and where can I find these guys. Can’t wait to read the second installment.
  • Worth It: A M/M Incest Historical Erotica on Sep. 29, 2022

    A good historical story involving very handsome brothers. I disappointed when it ended. I liked it.
  • Good Boys on Oct. 12, 2022

    This story was ok. There were some editing mistakes. I would give this story 2.5.
  • Taken on Oct. 22, 2022

    This story was ok. The storx could use some minor editing because the story didn't flow as smoothly as it should have. I wish there was an epilogue with the children being born.
  • Invaded on Oct. 22, 2022

    This story was ok. The storx could use some minor editing because the story didn't flow as smoothly as it should have. I wish there was an epilogue with the children being born.
  • His First Heat on Dec. 29, 2022

    The writer changed Jonas’ name to Jason a couple of times. I do wish the story was longer. I give this story 3.5 stars.
  • His First Handjob on Dec. 30, 2022

    I have two complaints: 1) the writer changed the character’s name to Ben and 2) the story wasn’t long enough. Alex and Rob could really set the sheets on fire. I’ll give this 3.5 - 4 stars.
  • Claimed by the Sleep Paralysis Demon: Gay Monster Erotica on Dec. 30, 2022

    This was a quick and direct story. I thought it was good.
  • First Times: My Bi Threesome on Dec. 31, 2022

    Horrible writing. The story does not flow well.
  • The Mall Cop and the Shoplifter on Dec. 31, 2022

    A good story with a couple of spelling mistakes. I think the story could’ve been longer.
  • My Husband's Boyfriend on Jan. 10, 2023

    to be honest, I don’t mind the wife or the girlfriend being present but in a limited capacity. I like a story where it is just the guys and the wife/ girlfriend just watches from the sidelines, not really a part of the action.
  • The Team Incentive on April 15, 2023

    I hate to say this but this was not a good story at all. It just seemed like the writer just threw some words on the page,
  • The Wolf's Doctor on April 15, 2023

    This was good but too short. I do wish the story was longer.
  • Forced by the Hellhound on April 15, 2023

    This was good story to read. I was hoping for some action with Paul too. Maybe will get that with Ben, Isaac and Paul. Looking forward to more with these characters.
  • Seduced by my Son: Part 1 on June 15, 2023

    This was a good start to this series. I can’t wait to read part 2.
  • Fucking His Son For Breakfast on June 22, 2023

    This story is quick and to the point. It was a good quickie.
  • Seduced by my Son: Part 2 on July 05, 2023

    This story was scorching hot. I loved it. So worth the time.
  • Cabin Fever on July 05, 2023

    This was really good. There were minor spelling mistakes but my only complaint is that I wish the story was longer.
  • Taking off the Mask on July 05, 2023

    I’ve read this story and it was good. Looking forward to more stories.
  • Gay for My Brother on July 06, 2023

    This was really good. There were a few writing/spelling mistakes but the story was still hot. I wanted the story to be longer. What happened with Ethan’s best friend? Did he tell anyone? More of Cole and Ethan would be good but honestly another brother pair would work too.
  • Dad's Dirty Secret on July 07, 2023

    I liked this story. I do think Nick’s Dad and Uncle could’ve at least waited until the mom was gone for the weekend to start.
  • Sucking His Big Brother's Morning Wood on July 08, 2023

    This was too short and kind of disappointing. I was expecting from this perhaps but the writing was not what I was expecting.
  • Joining His Dad In The Shower on July 08, 2023

    This story was a little better. So I think 2.5 stars is a reasonable rating.
  • Carlos My Pushy Flirt on July 09, 2023

    This story was so good. I was really surprised by the connection between Carlos and Lincoln. Carlos is totally a sweetheart. I can’t wait to read the second book.
  • Carlos My Sexy Friend on July 09, 2023

    Carlos is breaking down Lincoln in a good way. Giving him what he needs and honestly I don’t think Linc knew what he needed. This chemistry is off the charts and there is some humor in this story too. A bonus.
  • Carlos My Patient Lover on July 09, 2023

    This third installment exposed how Linc has been taking Carlos for granted and being selfish. The reaction of Lincoln’s father surprised me especially given Lincoln’s description of him. But Carlos finally made Linc realize he needs more and deserves more than to be a secret in the closet. Angie is a great big sister and got the two men talking to each other. Laying out the truth of things.
  • Carlos My Loving Partner on July 09, 2023

    I can’t believe all this drama over the grandkids and continuing the family name! Oh well. This was an even better and worth the wait. I was hoping for an epilogue with some kids or something. More stories like this please.
  • Touching My Bully on July 09, 2023

    This was an awesome story. I wasn’t sure about it but I’m glad I took a chance. Can’t wait for to read the next installments.
  • I Accidentally Fucked My Son on July 12, 2023

    The story was ok. It could’ve been longer. The story also needs to be edited properly. It doesn’t matter how steamy the story, if the reader has to constantly deal with misspelled words. It becomes annoying and the rating drops. So, please proofread and re-edit and submit the revised version.
  • Hated by Step Bro on July 12, 2023

    3.5 stars - This was a rough straight to the point passionate sex. There wasn’t any romance just lust. There were a lot of editing mistakes and the story could be fine tuned.
  • Claimed by My Big Brother on July 12, 2023

    So very good. I loved it. There were a couple of writing mistakes but still enjoyable. Owen is a jerk and doesn’t deserve Kendall.
  • Caught by Step Bro on July 12, 2023

    Slight better but still has the same problem: writing mistakes that can be easily solved by proofreading and editing.
  • Daddy Dearest on July 14, 2023

    Yes, this story has to continue. There absolutely MUST be a Part 2 and hopefully Part 3.
  • Shore Leave: Coming Home to Get Fisted on July 14, 2023

    This was extremely hot. A sexy hot story about lovers reconnecting after a long separation.
  • His Uncle's Plaything on July 21, 2023

    This was an ok story. It didn’t really grab my attention. But I’m sure someone else will have a different opinion.
  • Backcountry on Aug. 01, 2023

    I can only give this story 2 stars as is. The premise behind the story was good but the execution was not good. There were spelling mistakes throughout this story. He spelled Keith’s name correctly maybe twice the entire time. Also, Güt is not spelled with an Umlaut (the double dots over an a, u and o) in Germany but in Luxemburg. This story needs (in my opinion) to proofread and re-edited.
  • Taking Dad At Work on Aug. 13, 2023

    3.5 stars - This was sinfully too short. Despite the length the story is still enjoyable. Looking forward to reading more.
  • The Farmhand on Aug. 19, 2023

    2.5 stars - This story had a lot of potential. There were some spelling mistakes and the character names were switched a couple of times. The writing didn’t really flow smoothly in my opinion. If this story is re-edited, I think this story would 5 stars.
  • Big, Beefy and Freaky on Oct. 14, 2023

    A short direct story with the protagonist kink for the unusual. I liked this one and we get a second unrelated bonus story.
  • Forced by the Hitman: a dark DubCon MM short on Oct. 15, 2023

    This story was awesome. It was extremely exciting and sexy. I hope Simon and The Hitman have a happy and kinky life together away from Simon’s father.
  • Red on Oct. 17, 2023

    Surprisingly I loved this story. It was so…I’m not sure of the words to use to describe it. It was dirty and brilliant at the same time.
  • The Monster Games: Episode 4 - Alex and Tim on Oct. 18, 2023

    Loved it! I thought it was great how the alien brothers mirrored Alex and Tim. The alien brothers had no shame about their relationship and that helped Alex and Tim.
  • The Monster Games: Episode 3 - Drew on Oct. 18, 2023

    Drew is definitely an adventure seeker and was totally relaxed when abducted by his alien. A great story and it’s addictive.
  • The Monster Games: Episode 1 - Jay on Oct. 18, 2023

    An interesting beginning to the series. I’m looking forward to reading more. Hopefully some permanent matings between the aliens and their human partners.
  • Unexpected Encounters at the Construction Site on Oct. 21, 2023

    I couldn’t finish reading this story. It wasn’t working for me. I just couldn’t read it. Not for me.
  • Seized by the Orc on Oct. 22, 2023

    A great story to read. I liked the way this writer portrayed orcs, as intelligent, wild but still civilized. They only kept mates that want to be kept. Looking forward to reading book 2.
  • Wrecked by the Orcs on Oct. 22, 2023

    Book 2 was just as good as Book 1. Well…Book 3 has a lot of potential and looking forward to the pregnancy.
  • Icing on Oct. 22, 2023

    I didn’t like this story too much. I think the writing style bothered me. I think cheating just before the wedding instead of talking to your partner is lousy. However if he agrees to be a cuckold and it’s mutual then by all means.
  • Encounter on Oct. 24, 2023

    This was good story. I was hesitant to read this but I’m glad I took the chance.
  • Entanglement on Oct. 24, 2023

    Well…the word entanglement is interesting. A round-about way of saying…mated. Nice kink added.
  • Helping Hand on Oct. 24, 2023

    This just ended! I’m let wondering what will happen next and wondering when the second book will be released. Such a good start to the series.
  • Strictly Business on Oct. 24, 2023

    Ok…where is book 2. I’m ready for it. This was a nice tease.
  • Cabin Fever: Part 3 on Nov. 14, 2023

    This story was really good and so very hot. These two have decided to be together forever. It sounds nice in a hotel away from everyone but how will it work out? Interesting.
  • Late Submission on Nov. 26, 2023

    These were really good stories. They were fun, sexy, sad and healing. My only complaint is there were spelling mistakes throughout the stories.
  • Summer Heat on Nov. 29, 2023

    I want more of this story. I need to know what happens between Alan and Uncle Laurie. There were a couple of minor writing mistakes in the story.
  • Fishing Trip on Nov. 29, 2023

    Always a pleasure to read these stories. It is just a shame the stories are over so quickly.
  • In My Son's Bed on Dec. 24, 2023

    This was a quick and short story. There was one tiny writing mistake but the story is solid and good. I do wish there would be a second story.
  • Waking Emory on Dec. 26, 2023

    This was short but very well done. I loved it.
  • Drink or Dare Daddy on Jan. 01, 2024

    I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. Twins Sammy and Shane with some Daddy and brat kink…just perfect.
  • Put Him in Panties: Feminizing My Wife's Younger Brother, Part One on Jan. 08, 2024

    Well…this was surprisingly good. Looking forward to reading Part 2.
  • Put Him in Panties: Feminizing My Wife's Younger Brother, Part Two on Jan. 09, 2024

    This was a good story. I do wonder what Dean will do about his marriage. I can’t see this situation ending well for anyone.
  • Need on Jan. 11, 2024

    A very good start. I’m so looking forward to part 2.
  • Unstoppable on Jan. 11, 2024

    This was so good but too short. I want a part 3 and with the Dad awake. Yummy!!!!
  • Unrest on Jan. 21, 2024

    Um…not sure how to rate this story. I think 3 - 3.5 stars is an appropriate rating. The story wasn’t horrible but it wasn’t as polished as the first. The story seemed rushed. At least we know the Wolfkin’s name. I was wondering about that. I am looking forward to reading Part 3 (if there will be a Part 3). How will a relationship between a human male and a Wolfkin survive in such an unstable and violent world? Curious minds would like to know.
  • Filled on Feb. 01, 2024

    Well worth the wait. I hope there will be a 4th installment! I want to know if Caleb’s father will be sober the next time and how the relationship will progress. Please more!
  • Spending His Wedding Night with Daddy-in-Law on Feb. 01, 2024

    This story would be perfect if not for the switching of pronouns. The writer kept changing “her husband” to ‘his husband”. Please be careful of such things.
  • Guilty Pleasure on Feb. 02, 2024

    A great start to the series. Looking forward to reading the 2nd installment.
  • Guilty Pleasure: Part 2 on Feb. 02, 2024

    Well…this starting to get more interesting. I’m curious how Heath with react to that wonderful mouth belonging to his father?! I bet it won’t be a problem.
  • Cabin Fever: Part 2 on Feb. 02, 2024

    I’m glad it didn’t stay in the cabin. A really good second installment.
  • The Stag Hunt on Feb. 06, 2024

    2.5 stars - Extremely short stories. Not much information regarding The Stag but I think that was the point. The Stag is just an object to be used, nothing more. I guess it was ok.
  • Trained by My Father-In-Law on Feb. 07, 2024

    A really good story. The continuing situation Jacob finds himself doesn’t seem to be getting any better. Looking forward to reading book #3.
  • Used by My Father-In-Law on Feb. 07, 2024

    Getting interesting. Can Shelley really be surprised by Jacob’s change?! He has been constantly conditioned by her father and so of course the risk was he would be more into dominant males. Then to bring in a new boy… I hope Jacob didn’t kill him. I don’t think he could live with that. But the Citrus-Guy seems to be a mystery character. Book #4 please.
  • Topped by my Father-In-Law on Feb. 12, 2024

    Wow…meeting your future father-in-law in such a way! Honestly, I think Jacob should have run for the hills as quickly as possible. Nothing good could come from this situation.
  • Straight Boy Butt Raped by a Giant: Science Fiction, Fantasy, Paranormal, Horror & Sci-Fi Erotica Featuring Gay Monster & Beast Rape on Feb. 20, 2024

    This story could using some editing. Incorrect words were used and the wrong pronoun. All in all with some re-editing this could be really entertaining.