I am a Stark. I am the Mother of Dragons. I am a Shadowhunter. I am Divergent. I am the Mockingjay. I am a Dark Hunter. I am an Immortal After Dark. I am the wicked love child of Mac Lane and Jericho Z Barrons.
I am a reader!
Where to find Future Slayer Girl (aka kitten) online
LOVED this story! I went directly to her website to find more stuff from this author after reading it! It was clever, sexy, and totally naughty!
Five stars and no doubts about my choice to give them to her!
This would be my first 'naughty daddy' book. Go figure that my pick would be a BDSM themed story.
First off, I just have to say that this story was not just well written. But it was sexy as hell and the BDSM theme was very accurate which I totally appreciate! I was so worried it would just be a deep sea of fantasy BDSM, but I was delighted and surprised that it was super sexy and all the elements rang true! I even found myself going awwwww at the end. I was able to develop attachments to the lead characters and want more at the end. Totally looking forward to reading more about Jen's journey with her new, Sir!
I will be reading more from this author!!!!! I loved her voice as a writer and call me naughty for totally enjoying my first daddy book, but you would to if you were a fan of BDSM.
I will be reading the sequel by the way!
The writing style of this story was very fresh and unique. However, I found myself struggling to keep up with the voyeur elements of the book. It jumped with a bit of a choppy flow and I wanted so bad to have it just click with me.
With that being said it was a very clever little short. I would recommend it if you would like to read something quick, witty, a little sexy, and fun.
I had to laugh, it was made to be a joke. Atleast I hope it was made to be a joke. I found my own subbie mind running through thoughts to snap back at the 'abused Master'.
It was clever, it got a good giggle out of me, but I know this will totally piss off some people.
And Rachel does it again! I think I am officially a big fan of Rachel's books! I haven't read any of her Daddy or Swingers books but I tend to dive right into anything she has that is paranormal/horror and I am NEVER disappointed. This story was dark, wicked, erotic, and at the last page I was laughing and going 'OH! She went there!' Now I'm hoping there is a another book! Why?! Because I so have to know what the wicked demons evil plans are!
I recommend this to anyone that likes erotica, paranormal, some edgy horror, and hot sex scenes! Rachel makes demons hot!
on Nov. 13, 2011
Ok, I'm going to try and be a little bit more forgiving than Mr. Winchester down there. Seeing as I actually live the BDSM lifestyle, I am a better judge of 'appalling' when it comes to a Sadomasochistic relationship. Firstly, I'm not going to rate this book, its not fair. For me this is a first draft. Second, the story idea--fantastic. However, it was poorly executed.
I will tell you why.
I maybe live a BDSM lifestyle with my husband, but I am not a masochist--yes, there is a varying way we all--play. Unfortunately, what this novel fails to show is realism in a sadomasochistic relationship. Therefore, you get reviews like Mr. Winchester down below where he states he is appalled.
Firstly, if any Master punished his inexperienced slave like Max did, he wouldn't just break her, he would scar her for life mentally. You can't dive into that intense of a punishment right out of the gate like that, just not going to happen. Second, Lizzy acted like a child, an 11 year old child, for the whole of the story. After her first few sexual encounters that would have kicked her brain into adulthood. She may have wanted to eventually be a cock hungry slut, but not after three days of intense play like that. That would have broken me, and I've lived the lifestyle now for two years.
Lastly, Max states for her to never lose her spark, her passion. Um, he took it all honey. The moment she 'submitted' to him, he stole all her individuality. Eventually, yes she would have accepted a full 24/7 Master/slave relationship, but not after three days like that. You spent more time in her childish mind then laying the groundwork for a fantastic S & M story.
Join fetlife and talk to some experienced slaves and their master. Second, you have a great idea here. Find a crit group and fine tune. The story was all I've the place and not ready for publication. Flush out your characters a bit more, evolve them. Especially, Lizzy. She was the same Little girl's with no growth at all.
This was one of the best Fantasy themed BDSM stories I have read. The writing was crisp, the story flowed, and I was pulled in from the first para and you weren't going to drag me out. I instantly found the authors other works once I was done! Excellent job!
I want more! I feel like I'm totally not getting enough once I get to the end of this authors shorts. The world building is amazing, the characters are all flushed out, and I feel that even though the slaves are 'pre trained' they aren't push overs.
Amazing job! Can't wait for more from this author! I WILL be buying his full length novel!
And this author does Contemporary BDSM erotica just as well as his fantasy writings!
I sooooo wanted more at the in of this, the big tease. I have a feeling people are shorting this author a star because they like his writing but they don't want to like the subject matter.
Well, the writing is fantastic, and I live BDSM and am an avid fan when authors get it right! And this author GETS IT RIGHT! Bravo!
I'm not a huge fan of gay erotica--unless its well written, and boy of boy is this well written. Not only did I feel like giggling sometimes--in a good way-- But I found myself google searching more by this authors.
I found that she has one other work that I would delightfully read! Very few authors are pull me into the popular M/M genre, this is one of those authors. Highly recommend!
To say that I enjoyed this story was a bit of an understatement. I have been wanting to read CJ Roberts for awhile and I'm glad to have finally picked up a story by her, even if it is a short.
I felt teased, aroused, tantalized, and wanted more more more! While singing "How do you like it, how do you like it! More, more, more!"
I'm a huge fan of the menage, and this was well written and made me tingle.
I have to say that this story is not only sexy, but it got under my skin.
To explain I have to sort of spoiler a bit. The lead characters starts off at a 12 step meeting for people addicted to sex. You get into the inner workings of this woman so deep that you find yourself in conflict with her. Now, I know this is totally supposed to be smut, but I have to say that hidden in this smutty tale is something a bit deeper for me.
The last sentence sort of slammed it home.
"I had a lot to think about, a lot to process, and most of it had to with how much of myself I was willing to give up for the sake of recovery."
There was so much in that one last sentence, that for me, took it over the edge of smut and made it vibrate in my brain. So many times I have heard things like this from woman, where they want something so bad, and have an unsupportive spouse. How well this story sings to woman that want kink and have someone denying them the simple joy.
Sorry Rachel you are too good of a writer, you gave me hot kinky sex and a great sound story in the backdrop of this erotica short.
I officially have a whole new outlook on Jane Austen. What potential these books had for wicked debauchery!
I LOVED this story! I'm glad that someone thought of this idea and bought it out, I have bought the second book in this naughty little series and I saw that the third book is out which I will be getting too!
Highly recommend for a quick, naughty read. (It even has a Happy for now ending! How can you go wrong!?)
So far this is my FAVORITE naught Jane Austen Story! I do have Emma still to read, but seeing as Sense and Sensibility was always my favorite Austen story, to have it modernized and made to be super naughty--well, it made it all the more awesome for me!
The story was told extremely well, and Wade expertly converted a Classic into a Classic Erotica tale to withstand the test of time!
I had read the excerpt for the first story in this series and Rachel was super kind to provide me with a copy of the first collection. Stories 1 - 5! And let me say I enjoyed them all just the same!
They were hot! The story was well told and I related to parts of it seeing as my husband and I are 17 years apart. For the story wasn't taboo but life for me. I have grown to love every character of this series. I'm a interested in knowing how it continues now that Becky knows and is refusing to talk to both of them. The fact that I care is HUGE! Sometimes erotica is just erotica. However, Rachel has a great voice, is sexy as hell, and always keeps me wanting more!
Christmas Eve on Olympus was the first story I have read by Lisa Beth Darling. While reading it I couldn’t help but feel like I was missing something in not having read the other books in the series. That being said the first part of the story read for me like a YA Fantasy. It was well written. For me it focused too much on the duties of Christmas Eve, like a list. I was able to keep reading because the author did create a fantastic world of the gods and goddesses of Olympus, and I love anything with a little bit of magic. It was a bit jarring when it smoothed into the intimate scene and it was like reading a totally different story. The sex scene was hot, well written, with very adult detail. A total clash with the first half of the story that made me wonder if this was a YA Fantasy book. The sex was steamy, it made me wiggle in my seat and I couldn’t help but want more by the end.
The main issue I had was the drastic jump from simple reading to detailed hot steamy sex in the matter of a few paragraphs. I couldn’t get over the contrast in the moment. With all that being said it was for sure a good Christmas read! If you are looking for something to heat up your eReader, you should really grab a copy!
This is the first time I am very unhappy to rate a book a one star. I probably shouldn't--the author put this story out there for people to review--therefore, she sort of has to stand up to what is going to come of it.
Yes, I saw some good reviews for this book. I was inclined to believe that they dismissed the really terrible grammar, spelling errors, and poor plot developments, and just thought about what the story could be.
I could have done that.
The story had a form of potential.
Right now I felt like it was a first draft that the author had put out for all of us to beta read. Or I felt like we all got ARC copies in the Paranormal group. Then I realized I had gotten this off smashwords so it was in fact a published version of this story.
I have to say that if I properly wrote this review, it would be attached with a fully critiqued copy of the book in an email after it. As I was reading I was literally rewriting the stilted dialogue. I was slashing out whole sentences that literally mirrored the sentence before it that just made it all seem that much more juvenile. This story has potential. HUGE even. It needs an editor and a proofreader really really bad!
It could also benefit from being beta read and or critiqued before it goes to an editor. The plot flow was jarring. It didn't flow and it shoved you into one scene then the other, than back again. The characters had no dimensional value, so it was very hard to connect with any of them.
I honestly contemplated not rating this book. It was just NOT READY to be published. However, the author put the book up for reviews and it is officially published, therefore it needs the rating. I feel bad because the story didn't make me angry, I was just hurting while I read it. Each sentence I cringed and wondering WHY? Yes, just why?
I suggest pulling the version available now, grabbing up a few beta readers that will help with plot flow, some sentence structure, and solidifying the story line. The story is there, the idea is hovering, but it got lost in a sea of amateurish mistakes.
*I received a copy of this book via Lovers of Paranormal romance on behalf of the author in exchange for an honest review**