Veenstra Publishing
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Veenstra Publishing is a publisher resourced for West Michigan Indie Authors, wishing to remain full owners of their creative works, but may not know enough about the publishing business to get their book and name to the public. We offer self publishing and Self Promotional assistance to the average author, helping them get to the next level of their own publishing Goals.
The primary goal of Veenstra Publishing is to Bring forth new potential authors, otherwise ignored by the mainstream publishers and set them loose on to wreak havoc on the publishing world... Sinister maybe... but I believe that everyone can write something... everyone has something to share and something to offer this world, even if it is obscure, unique, or odd to the normality of this world.
This site is also where you can find all my books (Troy Veenstra), as well as books by other authors such as Lord Koga (Women's Erotic Fiction). But don't let Lord Koga's work fool you as we cover an array of different Genre's. This site also has a main blog, a contest/give away blog, free reads, chat room, erotica/other e-book store, Mailing Lists, Publishing News, Author Resource Page, and links to odd and weird pages. Come and check it out and become part of the mailing list if you would like to be kept up on all our future books or if you need assistance becoming an author yourself.
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Truth or Dare: The Taming of a Virgin Tomboy
by Tia Rain
Price: $1.39 USD. 5530 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on May 21, 2013. .
“Truth or dare Shane?” Lisa, his best friend and next-door neighbor asked as they sat across from one another on the floor of her dorm room. “Ummm… Truth I guess,”
“I know you like watching me practice soccer, I can feel you staring at me everything time your there, so I want to know Shane, do you have perverted thoughts of me? Do you want to taste every inch of my body with your tongue?” she ask
Brother’s Promiscuous Wife: An Open Marriage Erotic Tale
by Lord Koga
Price: $1.25 USD. 2190 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on April 29, 2013. .
A few year back, my younger brother married this women whom worked nights as a fully nude stripper at some strip high-end nightclub in Detroit Michigan. I did not know her all that well, having just met her a few weeks ago, when my brother let me stay with them for a while. Little did I known then the secret as to how open they were and how they liked to share each other’s siblings.
Cousin's Slave: The Training of a Pervert Submissive
by Tia Rain
Price: $1.25 USD. 2320 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on April 16, 2013. .
Yes, I was a pervert; there should be no shame in being a pervert. At least not until you meet a woman that is even more of a pervert than you are, then it becomes a game... a game to see who is the better. For me, it quickly became clear, the moment she invited me into the shower with her, that I was not as much of a pervert as i thought... Thankfully, she was more than will to teach...
Virgin Island: The Taming of a Female Squirter
by Tia Rain
Price: $1.25 USD. 1540 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on April 14, 2013. .
It was my first time having sex that my boyfriend and I found out that I was a squirter, something he and I found both erotic and highly arousing. Thankfully, we had a nice open spot, the sun shining down upon us, waves basking against the sandy shore as he did it repeatedly on our own uninhabited island, my lover taming me as his one and only sex toy.
The Virgins Window: A Tale of Two Spying Virgins
by Tia Rain
Price: $1.25 USD. 2230 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on April 4, 2013. .
It was my senior year when Mike moved in next door, his bedroom window less than a few feet from my own. It was the year I first saw a man naked. First, saw a man touching himself in the mirror, spying at him from the darkness in my room; it was the year of many, many hot, erotic firsts…
Wild Cherry: A Tale of a Wild Virgin
by Tia Rain
Price: $1.25 USD. 2020 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on March 31, 2013. .
As time went on and we began to get to know each other, he began calling me is “Wild Cherry.” It was only when I found myself naked in the shower one day, my hands caressing his long hard tool. Lathering it up with the bar of soap that I he told me what it meant, apparently he saw me a hot “Wild,” chick and thus the “Cherry” meant me as a virgin. Thus, I was his Wild Virgin, at least bef
Taboo Slave: A Tale of a Virgin Slave & Rough BDSM
by Tia Rain
Price: $1.20 USD. 2230 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on March 28, 2013. .
Try as I might to resist, especially in the beginning of our relationship was futile, for, as taboo as it was for me to be with him, I loved and wanted it too, wanted him just as much as he did me. Wanted to feel his hot touch, the soft velvet brushing of his fingers over my body, I knew he was going to bring me to the brink, to my breaking point repeatedly, before forcing us to both snap into a
Virgin Slave: The Training of a Virgin Submissive
by Tia Rain
Price: $1.25 USD. 2000 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on March 20, 2013. .
After being heated up by Sarah, her sister slave, it was time for Mandy to begin her training with their master... Training Mandy knew would break her open in many ways and force feelings of pained pleasure upon her unlike anything she could ever fathom... Crying out to God wasn't going to help her overcome this time...
Sister Slave: The Training of a Virgin Submissive
by Tia Rain
Price: $1.29 USD. 2190 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on March 20, 2013. .
“What are… what are you,” Mandy tried to speak, tried to ask only to feel me overpowering her, flipping her over, slamming her stomach across the floor before kissing the back of her neck. Holding her in place as she felt the tip of my tongue slithering down the base of her spinal cord, before slowly, reaching the back of her ass. "Warming you up for your training with Master," I hissed...
The Full Oral: An Erotic Tale of Virginity Given, Taken & Ravaged ,
by Lord Koga
Price: $1.29 USD. 4420 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on March 12, 2013. .
Nick and I had been Best friends since we were kids. We both grew up on the same street, graduated from the same high school and even went to college and worked at the same bar together. Thus, it seemed only right, that one night, after closing of the bar we would change the status of our relationship from Best Friends Forever to Best Fuck forever… at least after both passing the Full Oral.
Slurped Dry: A Tale of Virginity Taken, Devoured & Ravaged
by Lord Koga
Price: $1.20 USD. 2560 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on February 26, 2013. .
Tina never thought her Boyfriend Tony would take her up on her dare. Challenging him to drop his swim shorts and expose his long, thick package to her in exchange for her doing the same.
She should have known better than to challenge her hot, 18 year old, virgin boyfriend to do something so bold, now she has to go forth (Happily) with the consequences of her dare...
Her First Scream: Tales of Two Virgins
by Lord Koga
Price: $1.25 USD. 2690 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on February 24, 2013. .
Tricia’s parents trusted the both of us enough to think we would not do it that night, that night they left the two of us alone in the house; such misplaced trust set upon two sex-crazed, virgin 18 year-olds, it was almost a joke that they left the two of us alone.
In a way, I almost feel bad for them, knowing that by the time they came back that night I would have seen, touched, tasted, licked
Breaking Point: A Tale of Rough, Hard, Forced Seduction & Submission
by Lord Koga
Price: $1.25 USD. 8020 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on February 19, 2013. .
Maru has spent the past several years hunting and ravaging her own kind, but when she comes across Karin, his rough, beastly nature – she becomes intoxicated with his ability to tame the beast between her thighs like none other…
Karin has waited many years for his intended mate, and now that he’s found her, he plans to make her his. Her stunning beauty, strength and passion call to him to ravage
My First Blow: Tales of Virginity Taken, Devoured & Ravaged
by Lord Koga
Price: $1.25 USD. 2260 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on February 17, 2013. .
It was the one thing that I wanted Kevin, my best friend and next-door neighbor to give me for my 18th birthday. The one thing I craved more than anything else. Wanted to try with a man I liked and knew secretly liked me too. Thank you Kevin for letting me be the first to suck you dry that night... the night of my 18th birthday party. Thank you for breaking me in as a woman!
Reasons to be Missed
by Troy Veenstra
Price: $4.99 USD. 46260 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on February 14, 2013. .
Meet 26 year-old Elizabeth Hunters. A single woman, still living with her parents. She never went to college, never found true love or a job, she was a woman that didn't really begin to know the meaning of life, and how she wanted to live it, until the day she was found out she was dying... the day her life turned upside down. The day her life found meaning.
The Tight, Hot Cougar: Tales of My Sexual Bucket List
by Tia Rain
Price: $1.25 USD. 1670 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on February 10, 2013. .
For the past year, I have worked hard to check off the sexual urges, desires, positions & partners I want to experience before meeting my end. As a cougar, A mature woman that knows what she craves sexually, last night I able to check off a topic from that list. Having a hard, rough, slam bam in the park with a man old enough to be my own son, and all it cost me was my favorite pair of panties..
Suffering Passions: A Dramantic Romance
by Troy Veenstra
Price: $0.99 USD. 2940 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on February 7, 2013. .
Ana prepared herself for the coming day, getting ready for that night, when her & her lover would celebrate the one-year anniversary of their first day, and the night they would begin talks about their future as husband and wife.
Sadly, for Ana, that was yesterday, and today is a whole new day.
Romance, Drama, love, death
Tale of Two Virgins: A Hot Tale of Virginity Taken, Devoured & Ravaged
by Tia Rain
Price: $1.20 USD. 2990 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on February 6, 2013. .
Despite having oral sex already with each other, Dean and his girlfriend, Holly, were still thought of as virgins. Thus when the night of Holly’s “End of the freshman year,” party came it seemed only natural for one of them to make the first move. Leave it to the outgoing, and sex crazed Holly to be the one to make it first, catching her boyfriend by surprise as he made his way out of her parent
The Virgin Chronicles Vol 2: Tales of Virginity Taken, Devoured & Ravaged
by Lord Koga
Price: $4.99 USD. 53060 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on February 3, 2013. .
The Virgin Chronicles (Vol 2) Includes 20 short, intense erotic tales of Virginity taken, devoured & ravanged, plus an oral bonus series.
Do you ever lie in bed and remember the time you lost your virginity? The first time a lover from the past took you hard and fast, and the first time you felt the heat, the passion, the pleasured pain of sex ravage every part of you. Feel it all over again...
Hot Asian Taboo: A Forbidden Tale of Submission & Forced Seduction
by Lord Koga
Price: $1.25 USD. 1810 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on February 3, 2013. .
Two months after the hot Japanese chick, the college exchange student moved into his house, Daniel had already seen her naked almost every day, as was her culture she said, “Nudity isn’t that big of a deal in my country.” Neither did it seem was her need to rub him through his pants while watching TV, or the fact she kept calling him, her big Onii-chan (Brother)…
On Her Knees: A Story of Oral Seduction & Submission
by Tia Rain
Price: $1.25 USD. 2070 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on January 30, 2013. .
After finally turning 18, Donna's new, virgin boyfriend wanted to know just how true the rumors of Donna being an oral little slut in high school really were... On their first Friday night as a new couple, alone in his bedroom, the Virgin boy would quickly find out just how much Donna loved to suck on thigs long, hard and lively...
Erotica,Hardcore,BDSM,oral,Virgin,High school
My First Ten Inches: A Tale of Virginity Taken, Devoured and Ravaged
by Tia Rain
Price: $1.25 USD. 2440 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on January 28, 2013. .
Alone in the early morning hours while working at a closed party store, 22 year old, Darla, a hot virgin college girl, turns to the soon to be divorced, highly attractive and well hung Beer Delivery man to assist her in losing her virginity. A soon to be single man, a horny virgin, and cases of beer all alone in the back of a loading dock. What more could one ask for?
My First: A Quick Tale of Virginity Taken, Ravaged and Devoured
by Tia Rain
Price: $1.25 USD. 1450 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on January 24, 2013. .
Mike was my first. Mike was the one that took me, ravaged my virginity all his own. I first heard about mike from a fellow classmate in college. Heard the stories of his piercing dark brown eyes, which gazed deeply into the eyes of the women he was with as he blew his load deep inside them. Yep, Mike was just the kind of guy I wanted to be my first...
On All Fours: My First Lesbian Experience
by Tia Rain
Price: $1.25 USD. 2930 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on January 8, 2013. .
Probably being the only female virgin in college, I asked my best friend one night how it felt to be with a man, to get some idea how it would feel with a man penetrating me for the first time, driving into me hard and deep. I wanted to know about all her conquests, though at the time, I never thought by the end of that night I too would be one those she would be adding to her very long list.
Scents of Desire: Erotic Tales of a Future Ex-Wife
by Tia Rain
Price: $1.29 USD. 2870 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on January 6, 2013. .
Damn that is fucking hot, I thought, never really believing Clint would have the balls to make a move on me, his best friend’s wife. Through the past several years, as my husband grew more distant, I began flirting with Clint whenever a moment would allow, shaking my tight ass in front of him when no one else was looking.
Allowing him to walk in on me in the shower, or see parts of my naked...
Exploited: My New Year Three-way
by Lord Koga
Price: $1.25 USD. 1690 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on January 1, 2013. .
Ringing in 2013 as a hot Goth chick she never thought one of her best friends would help achieve her goal. Taken by not only him and his large well endowments but also his buddy and his God given package. Now she can fufill one of her new year goals as a human cum dumpster...
Taboo Quickie
by Tia Rain
Price: $1.20 USD. 1790 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on November 25, 2012. .
Last year Justin and Amber were at each other’s throats when it came to the holidays. This year, this year they both arrived early to quickly give in to their differences. A lot can change over the span of a year. Enemies one year, sex crazed lovers out for the quick thrill of being caught the next...
Demon Heat
by Lord Koga
Price: Free! 1800 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on November 11, 2012. .
While flying through the sky late one night, the demon cat of fire gave off a scent. A scent that would soon find her on all fours growling up at the moon... a night of intense heat, ravishing tastes and pleasures only demons could handle.
Kala’s Battle Cry
by Lord Koga
Price: $0.99 USD. 3490 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on October 31, 2012. .
After a 20 year hiatus, Christian has come back to reawaken those long forgotten desires Kala and he once shared alone one night in the all-purpose sports room... the night he taught her the cheer that only comes with the pounding, thrusting echoes and cries of adulthood.
Joselyn’s Erotic Spa Adventure
by Lord Koga
Price: $1.25 USD. 3520 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on October 16, 2012. .
After a long & hard day of training future recruits, (underlings) in TKD, Joselyn needed a good long rest in the dojo's spa. craved the private time to be alone with her thoughts and fingers... little did she know, one of her Underlings had something else hard and long in store for her that night, something she would be more than willing to bear all for.
The Anal-retentive Virgin
by Lord Koga
Price: $1.20 USD. 3080 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on September 30, 2012. .
“Baby, it’s the single, sexiest thing my eyes have ever been blessed to view… how can I not love these ripened, sharp curves of yours?” Cru growled, flicking the tip of his tongue across her ear lobe, kissing the side of her neck before pushing himself away once more. Before that night, I never knew, nor never thought to wonder, what it meant to be so anal-retentive… at least not in that way…
The Virgins Plan
by Lord Koga
Price: $0.99 USD. 1930 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on September 5, 2012. .
Kat had a plan. Bring her virgin boyfriend to her house, find a way to get him into her bedroom and let nature take its course. Lucky for her Boyfriend Mitch, Kat loves it when a plan comes together…
Prey: Chronicles of the Lycan part 3
by Lord Koga
Price: $1.20 USD. 3540 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on August 26, 2012. .
The huntress turned hunted. she could feel him near her, smell the pungent, sensual scent of him circling around her, preparing to attack her at any moment. His scent giving off a vibe of darkness, of carnal, sensual sin, the scent so pungent she could taste the hostility rising up from her throat, chocking her with each passing breath, each slight inhale that drew him closer to his attack.
The Virgin's Night Out
by Lord Koga
Price: $1.25 USD. 2900 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on August 19, 2012. .
Since becoming an adult, I have been a bit selective in my search for the right man to devour my body as his and his alone. However, secretly, it’s always been my dream to have two instead of just one… who ever thought dreams come true so easily?
The Troy Veenstra Sampler
by Troy Veenstra
Price: Free! 13650 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on August 16, 2012. .
Free -- this promo book shows the first chapters of Author Troy Veenstra's novels. Each chapter gives a detail description of the book, where to find it on-line, the first chapter, as well as other reader’s comments/reviews. The purpose of this book is to give each reader a sample of what you may expect of each listed title before going out and purchasing it.
Driven Hard
by Lord Koga
Price: $0.99 USD. 1960 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on August 13, 2012. .
Friends for as long as Alex could remember, it wasn't until one night after Shannon broke up with the man she thought she loved that the truth of what they really where became known...
“Alex… Alex please,” she panted, running the tips of her fingers through the damp strands of his hair, “I… I need it raw… I needed rough… and f@#! I need it harder, deeper,”
Subservient Foreplay
by Lord Koga
Price: $1.20 USD. 2150 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on August 8, 2012. .
In some marriages the Husband and wife share everything with each other, even when it comes to breaking in a new edition to the love making... this is one of those marriages
Her Addiction
by Lord Koga
Price: $1.25 USD. 8770 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on July 29, 2012. .
She had worked long hard nights before at the Hospital. She had thought she had seen it all in one way or another but she was wrong. It was this night she would face the thing she craved, the thing she dreamed of in the darkest recesses of her mind. It was this night she became addicted to its ungodly savor, size, and need... this night she would be claimed, taken and wantonly devoured.
The Sleeping Virgin
by Lord Koga
Price: $0.99 USD. 2090 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on July 26, 2012. .
Yuna could not believe it, laying there naked on her bed, beads of sweat pouring over her lush developed body; waking to the hot seductive feelings coursing through her body. “How… How did he get inside my room,” she thought, feeling his rough, masculine hands roaming over her taut flesh. “More importantly, who… who is it?” her mind raced, as a slight image of the body came to view...
Put Away Wet
by Lord Koga
Price: $1.29 USD. 2450 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on July 9, 2012. .
It was the night just before graduation, the night of final chances and confessions. The night Katie gave in to her forbidden desires. The night Gabe confessed to his sister’s best friend and the night Katie became a woman by her BFF’s younger brother. A night for several, pleasurable firsts.
Tightlipped Virgin
by Lord Koga
Price: $1.25 USD. 2800 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on June 29, 2012. .
“Mmmmm yes, I love taking the full stream in my mouth,” she moaned, her words forcing me to look up from my t-shirt only to see her holding the head of the hose inches away from her mouth. Her tongue, lashing across the stream of water as it flashed across her face, bubbling up in small beads across her cheeks, lips, and chin; soaking through her white t-shirt. I had no choice, but to react...
A Virgins Crush
by Lord Koga
Price: $1.20 USD. 2770 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on June 19, 2012. .
Never in his wildest dreams did Scott think his older sister's best friend--his crush, would make a move on him, let along at such an ill-fated time. Yet as Scott quickly found out, anytime is a good time to lose it to a hot, highly perverted, woman like Kara.
Bedroom Window Confessional
by Lord Koga
Price: $0.99 USD. 1530 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on June 12, 2012. .
You may recall mother, the night before last, the night you were called in to work the nightshift over the weekend, for I shall always remember that following morning, that morning as your drove home from work, those passing few minutes where the girl I was shattered to pieces, becoming woman. Our lover becoming mine for all eternity
Virgin's Cry
by Lord Koga
Price: $0.99 USD. 2100 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on June 5, 2012. .
Late at night, in the local park with her boyfriend, Jess informed the world she was no longer pure with her screams to the world... her virgin's cry!
“Eric,” I sighed once more, “baby…, I’m… I’m still a virgin,” I gasped, only to feel his kiss upon the side of my neck before he growled in a low, almost beast like voice.
“Not any longer,”
The Virgin's Deceit: The Virgin Chronicles 2
by Lord Koga
Price: $1.25 USD. 2540 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on May 30, 2012. .
Luring his best friend Megan, over with the idea of assisting him with his science project, Drake was able to find out first hand just how far she was willing to go to win the game of truth or punishment. One thing Drake did not expect, however, was Megan’s ability to use the truth as well as her body to decieve him so easily.
Up From Behind
by Lord Koga
Price: $0.99 USD. 1720 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on May 22, 2012. .
My first time was unlike most others as we did everything ass backwards... and when I say, "Ass Backwards," I mean "ASS BACKWARDS." -- Coming up from behind me that Saturday evening, just as my parents drove out the driveway, he caught me from behind. “Are you… are you ready?” Haden asked almost shyly, his hands cupping my firm rounded C cups as the tips of his fingers stroked my nipples...
My First of Many
by Lord Koga
Price: $0.99 USD. 2500 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on May 13, 2012. .
I was almost nineteen when it happened. That hot summer day when he came over, the boy, the man I had liked; loved for so long. I was amazed at how daring he was, how quick he moved in stripping me naked. He would become the man that took me for my very first time, the man that broke me open, strip away my innocents, turn me into a woman... take me in the first of many ways...
My Quick Admission
by Lord Koga
Price: $0.99 USD. 1610 words.
Published by Veenstra Publishing on May 8, 2012. .
I guess that’s really how it happened. Lying in bed with each other night after night our skintight panties and bare-breasted t-shirts, watching some lame romantic comedy only to have our thoughts revolve around some of the male eye candy we had already seen around campus. I guess it was bound to happen that one night we would take it to that point.
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- That One Night in Vegas
on Aug. 14, 2010
Fairly Good, Some grammatical issues on page six, "Everything little thing she did turned me on," and a few other places but it has great flow, style, and description to it. Though the grammar can take away from some of the story flow, i found this story to be a good read, and not too much of a distraction to the storyline as other similar stories have been in the same category. Definitely worth paying for if it weren't free.
- What Happened in Vegas
on Aug. 14, 2010
Very animal like, full of heated, physical only desires. This short is more for those just wanting a story that gets right down to the point without any romance or passion but more on desires of the flesh. If this is what your looking for its an great short, however, if your looking for something more mental and physical this is not for you, but for what it is... its great.
- Hedo Two
on Aug. 22, 2010
Agree with the other reviewer... not only that, it just doesn't come off as being too exciting.
- Fall for You
on April 03, 2012
I admit that UK spelling is diffrent from US spelling, however, the author of this books states in her bio that none of her words are mispelled. That's a bold statement to make when less than three sentences into this title she writes, "whenever she slid her had lightly across his
pelvic area," what is a "had" in the UK? Outside of that there are no real issues with this title. I give the author a thumbs up overall.
- Why Women can do a Better Job in Ruling the World, Than Men
on April 28, 2012
There is no evidence used to support the claims stated as fact in this book, its all opinion. I saw no references to primary or even secondary sources. Also, a lot of his interpretations on women being "non-abusive," are very flawed. The rise in woman domestic violence against men is on a continued rise each year. This book is just opinion, no fact, nothing to back up any of the thoughts listed.
- Over the Edge
on June 12, 2012
In need of some editing, overall though it was decent, not the best work but I would rate it just a bit below average.
- The Text
on June 12, 2012
for a teen romance flash fiction, this flowed really well. I think if the author wanted to they could make this into a good opening for a novel, detailing more about chad, but as it stands, I really don't think you need to know anything about him for now. Overall a good flash fiction for what it is.
- A Halloween Story
on Oct. 18, 2012
Needs some editing, otherwise fairly good, not scary at all, think I could easily read this to my four year old niece and she wouldn't be scared. That said its true form with the holiday. The one thing that got to me a lot was the "says," being used. the errors distracted from the story telling.
- America's Gestapo, the FBI Part I
on Jan. 01, 2013
Found this book, if you can call it that, more of a rambling as well, seems the author has some issues with lawyers. Not to mention he skips from one tangent to another without any warning making it hard to read and keep up with the rambling man in the first place.
- Stacy and Harold on the Fourth
on Feb. 18, 2013
The numerous syntax and typo errors made this a very jerky read. The author should spend more time polishing and rewriting before submitting his work.