Publisher info

MemeThreeFour's authors write kinky stories to try to get you off without insulting your intelligence.

Polly Liticat
F-solo, M-solo, MF, FF, MM, groups
Themes: taboo relations, mind-control, sci-fi/paranormal, mild D/s
Polly doesn't think porn can ever be apolitical, and doesn't pretend to be. Polly's stories feature taboo relations, mind-control. They explore the edges of consent and often feature people who learn their lines aren't quite where they thought they were, but they are sex-positive and center the pleasure of their characters.

Max Zed
F-solo, M-solo, MF, FF, MM, groups
Themes: taboo relations, porn-about-porn
Max likes to take standard porn scenarios and make them more emotionally realistic.

Rex Schmutzig
F-Solo, MF, FF, groups
Themes: sci-fi, superheroes
Rex is inspired by the over-the-top, anything goes smut he read at an impressionable age from publishers like Star and Liverpool. The sort of books where every dude is straight, every gal is bi, and the author reliably gets a whole page of shiftcaps "dialog" from each climax.

Penny Lumiere
F-solo, FF, groups
Themes: erotic romance, sci-fi, mild D/s
Penny loves Jane Austen and many of the genteel romances she inspired. And Penny likes (some) unapologetic, uncomplicated smut. But Penny can't write either of those things. Penny's characters almost always want to get it on (often in unorthodox, un-couple-y configurations) but they have to be messy and decidedly complicated about it.

Smashwords Interview

What's MemeThreeFour all about?
We publish - or try to, anyway! - erotic stories, with equal emphasis on both words. So, we hope they make you hot and bothered! But we hope they also have characters who undergo change in the course of the story, and some conflicts that aren't just will-they-or-won't-they?

We want to be diverse and inclusive. So, stories that feature, and hopefully appeal, to a lot of different kinds of people.

Want to be very sex-positive. No kink shaming is a ground rule. Some of our writers, especially Polly Liticat, play with the lines of consent/nonconsent – don't try this at home, kids! But we want stories where all parties are enjoying what they're doing, even if some boundaries are pushed.

Finally, our writers explore some taboo territory that's often associated with some not-very-good prose, but we don't want to insult our readers' intelligence. Rex Schmutzig is a little the odd one out here, his stories pay homage to a certain sensibility, so they are more "male gaze" oriented and kind of dumb on purpose. He wears out his exclamation point key! But hopefully there's an underlying humor that that comes through.
Who are your authors?
Polly Liticat
Polly is the first author we worked with. Polly has written quite a few things with taboo relationships, often with a Sci-Fi element. The "Swelter in Place" series doesn't have any taboo elements. Polly didn't really want to write a quarantine themed story – there are a lot of them right now for some reason – but says this one demanded to be written.
We usually keep at least one or two of Polly's shortest stories free on the site for new readers to check out.

Penny Lumiere
We've only published one of Penny's stories so far, she writes romance (mostly FF) under another name. The story she brought us was just a bit too kinky for her usual markets.

Res Schmutzig
Rex has a very gonzo style, inspired by 80s erotica publishers, but with a comic book/sci-fi kind of spin.
Some of Rex's shorter stories are pay-what-you-want on Smashwords.

Max Zed
Max's first series with us has taboo elements, but mostly it inverts the heteronormative take on the MMF menage where they guys don't interact sexually.
Read more of this interview.
0: Zyrgle, Chiyo
Series: Perverted Tentacle Creature. Pre-release—available August 15, 2020. Price: $0.99 USD. Words: 2,880. Language: English. Published by MemeThreeFour. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Sci-Fi Erotica
Zyrgle is a tentacle creature from the Zhunod nebula! He's into human women, which makes him a pervert. Chiyo is a human woman from San Francisco! She's into tentacle creatures, which sucks a bit for her, since there aren't any in San Francisco. Or are there?
1: Chiyo+Zyrgle
Series: Perverted Tentacle Creature. Pre-release—available August 15, 2020. Price: $1.99 USD. Words: 4,880. Language: English. Published by MemeThreeFour. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Sci-Fi Erotica, Fiction » Erotica » Comedy/Humor
After a lousy day, Chiyo just wants some alone time with one of her favorite hentai tentacle movies and a silicone "friend" or two. Or three. Zyrgle has paid a lot of lugol to watch her! But something is about to go horribly wrong. Or, just maybe, horribly right!
Studio SexSickSex with the Fam
Series: Studio SexSickSex. Price: $2.49 USD. Words: 6,980. Language: English. Published: August 1, 2020 by MemeThreeFour. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Menage/Multiple Partners, Fiction » Erotica » MILF
(5.00 from 1 review)
Jason Sr. has to come to terms with what happened while he was away on his business trip. It's time for him, his wife, his daughter, and his son to work out all their issues - together! And the dark secret behind Studio SexSickSex is finally revealed!
Studio SexSickSex with Dad
Series: Studio SexSickSex. Price: $2.49 USD. Words: 7,880. Language: English. Published: July 25, 2020 by MemeThreeFour. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Menage/Multiple Partners, Fiction » Erotica » MILF
(5.00 from 2 reviews)
When Jason gets home from a business trip and finds his wife in a compromising position. Jason, his wife, and daughter have an intense conversation! Then he, his daughter, and his son have another one!
Studio SexSickSex with Mom's GF Too
Series: Studio SexSickSex. Price: $1.99 USD. Words: 5,520. Language: English. Published: July 18, 2020 by MemeThreeFour. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » MILF, Fiction » Erotica » Menage/Multiple Partners
(5.00 from 2 reviews)
Watching kinky videos inspires Mariana and Roberto to fulfill their most taboo fantasies – while Jase and Suzette urge them on!
Studio SexSickSex with GF's Son
Series: Studio SexSickSex. Price: $1.99 USD. Words: 6,270. Language: English. Published: July 11, 2020 by MemeThreeFour. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » MILF, Fiction » Erotica » Menage/Multiple Partners
(5.00 from 2 reviews)
Suzette's girlfriend Mariana agrees to let Suzette seduce Mariana's son, Roberto. But what happens when Roberto's best friend Jase finds them in a compromising position? Could it lead to a kinky threesome?
Studio SexSickSex with Sis's BFF
Series: Studio SexSickSex. Price: $2.49 USD. Words: 6,960. Language: English. Published: July 4, 2020 by MemeThreeFour. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Menage/Multiple Partners, Fiction » Erotica » Paranormal
(5.00 from 2 reviews)
Ceci, Bonney, and Jase find themselves acting out a scene from a kinky erotic video they've all watched - but what is real and what is fantasy? And who is behind Studio SexSickSex?
Studio SexSickSex with Mom's GF
Series: Studio SexSickSex. Price: $1.99 USD. Words: 4,730. Language: English. Published: June 29, 2020 by MemeThreeFour. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Menage/Multiple Partners, Fiction » Erotica » MILF
(5.00 from 2 reviews)
Mariana has a date with Suzette for some lady loving. Things are hot and heavy, when suddenly Suzette walks in on her! What? How is that possible? A case of mistaken identity leads to taboo triple action!
Swelter in Place: Day 19
Series: Swelter in Place. Price: Free! Words: 1,930. Language: English. Published: June 27, 2020 by MemeThreeFour. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Paranormal, Fiction » Erotica » Contemporary
Sexual tensions in the neighborhood during quarantine lockdown – Amber trades sexy selfies with Drew!
Swelter in Place: Day 18
Series: Swelter in Place. Price: Free! Words: 1,680. Language: English. Published: June 20, 2020 by MemeThreeFour. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Paranormal, Fiction » Erotica » Women's Erotica
Sexual tensions in the neighborhood during quarantine lockdown! Amber wakes up hot and bothered.
Swelter in Place: Day 17
Series: Swelter in Place. Price: Free! Words: 1,350. Language: English. Published: June 13, 2020 by MemeThreeFour. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Paranormal, Fiction » Erotica » Menage/Multiple Partners
Sexual tensions in the neighborhood during quarantine lockdown – Amber the part-succubus texts neighbor couples with invitations they don't want to refuse!
Swelter in Place: Day 16
Series: Swelter in Place. Price: $1.34 USD. Words: 3,500. Language: English. Published: June 6, 2020 by MemeThreeFour. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Paranormal, Fiction » Erotica » Contemporary
Sexual tensions in the neighborhood during quarantine lockdown – Amber shares her biggest secret with Emiliano. Then she shares a good time with Drew!
Swelter in Place: Day 15
Series: Swelter in Place. Price: $1.34 USD. Words: 2,990. Language: English. Published: June 1, 2020 by MemeThreeFour. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Paranormal, Fiction » Erotica » Contemporary
Sexual tensions in the neighborhood during quarantine lockdown – Drew's a bit of a voyeur, but Amber's a bit of a succubus! 6% succubus, to be exact.
Daddy's Doll Doubled - Box Set
Series: Daddy's Doll Doubled. Price: $2.49 USD. Words: 9,120. Language: English. Published: May 2, 2020 by MemeThreeFour. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Sci-Fi Erotica, Fiction » Erotica » Menage/Multiple Partners
When her girlfriend dumps her, Molly decides to crash at her stepdad’s place until her new job starts. When she learns he has a life-like robotic sex toy, it brings up old memories . . .  and taboo desires. All 4 parts complete in one bargain volume! Includes Discovering Daddy's Doll, Playing with Daddy's Doll, Doubling Down on Daddy's Doll, and After Daddy's Doll.
After Daddy's Doll
Series: Daddy's Doll Doubled. Price: Free! Words: 1,490. Language: English. Published: April 25, 2020 by MemeThreeFour. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Sci-Fi Erotica, Fiction » Erotica » Menage/Multiple Partners
Molly, her stepdad, and the life-like TruDoll that looks just like her have shattered every taboo! What happens now?
Doubling Down on Daddy's Doll
Series: Daddy's Doll Doubled. Price: $1.99 USD. Words: 4,030. Language: English. Published: April 18, 2020 by MemeThreeFour. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Sci-Fi Erotica, Fiction » Erotica » Menage/Multiple Partners
Now that Molly knows she and her stepdad have both been struggling with taboo desires, she wants to satisfy them – with the help of her TruDoll sex toy double!
Playing with Daddy's Doll
Series: Daddy's Doll Doubled. Price: $1.34 USD. Words: 2,540. Language: English. Published: April 11, 2020 by MemeThreeFour. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Sci-Fi Erotica, Fiction » Erotica » Lesbian Erotica
Molly is shocked – but excited – to learn that her stepdad’s TruDoll looks, sounds, and acts like her. She learns about the doll’s history – and tries the doll out for herself!
Discovering Daddy's Doll
Series: Daddy's Doll Doubled. Price: $1.34 USD. Words: 3,310. Language: English. Published: April 4, 2020 by MemeThreeFour. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Sci-Fi Erotica, Fiction » Erotica » Menage/Multiple Partners
When her girlfriend dumps her, Molly decides to crash at her stepdad’s place until her new job starts. She and her casual hookup Bryce discover that her stepdad has a TruDoll, a life-like robotic sex toy. When Bryce jokes that the doll might be customized to look like her, it brings up old memories . . .  and taboo desires.  
The Brief Career of Bruce Poleman, Pornstar - Box Set
Series: The Brief Career of Bruce Poleman, Pornstar. Price: $3.49 USD. Words: 21,200. Language: English. Published: March 31, 2020 by MemeThreeFour. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Menage/Multiple Partners, Fiction » Erotica » Contemporary
Six hot stories in one bargain volume! When Jerry crashes with his sister Melly, he learns about her career in porn. Melly and her kinky co-worker Honey come up with an idea for a new web series – featuring Bruce Poleman, a.k.a. Jerry! Of course, they won't actually perform with each other . . . but their escalating sexual tension is leading them somewhere they're not sure they want to go!
Mom's Slut School - Box Set
Series: Mom's Slut School. Price: $2.99 USD. Words: 10,880. Language: English. Published: March 30, 2020 by MemeThreeFour. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Menage/Multiple Partners, Fiction » Erotica » MILF
Kara catches her boyfriend with her mom, Lydia - and it's not the first time! Lydia's going to teach Kara how to be sluttier - with her own boyfriends as teaching assistants! All three increasingly kinky parts complete in one bargain volume: "Not again, Mom!", "Give him a show!" and "I wouldn't say 'no'!"
Z-Men G-Squad: Lesson 2
Series: Z-Men G-Squad. Price: $1.34 USD. Words: 2,150. Language: English. Published: March 23, 2020 by MemeThreeFour. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Sci-Fi Erotica, Fiction » Erotica » Menage/Multiple Partners
Fred and Ian get superhero codenames, and their first hands-on experience in their new roles!
Z-Men G-Squad: Lesson 1
Series: Z-Men G-Squad. Price: Free! Words: 1,840. Language: English. Published: March 21, 2020 by MemeThreeFour. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Sci-Fi Erotica, Fiction » Erotica » Menage/Multiple Partners
A new recruit to the Zeta-Men, the world's most notorious superhero squad, learns dark secrets in the first installment of a sexy superhero serial.
Some Lines Should Not Be Crossed
Series: The Brief Career of Bruce Poleman, Pornstar. Price: $1.34 USD. Words: 3,270. Language: English. Published: February 15, 2020 by MemeThreeFour. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Menage/Multiple Partners, Fiction » Erotica » Contemporary
(4.00 from 1 review)
The conclusion! Honey thinks that Bruce and Sugarbee should finish what they started. But can their alter-egos Jerry and Amelia faces the consequences if they do?
Some Lines Are Crossed
Series: The Brief Career of Bruce Poleman, Pornstar. Price: $1.34 USD. Words: 3,990. Language: English. Published: February 8, 2020 by MemeThreeFour. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Menage/Multiple Partners, Fiction » Erotica » Contemporary
(5.00 from 1 review)
The new company lands a guest star with a lot of cachet. He doesn't do bisexual scenes often, so it will definitely be a draw – but he's got a rep for pushing boundaries. And he doesn't know Bruce and Sugarbee's taboo secret!
Some Lines Are Not Crossed
Series: The Brief Career of Bruce Poleman, Pornstar. Price: $1.99 USD. Words: 5,160. Language: English. Published: February 1, 2020 by MemeThreeFour. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Menage/Multiple Partners, Fiction » Erotica » Contemporary
(5.00 from 1 review)
The new porn production company pulls out the stops for a Halloween cosplay shoot starring Bruce, Ian, and Honey as the Vampire Queen – with Melly behind the camera!
Two Deals Are Closed
Series: The Brief Career of Bruce Poleman, Pornstar. Price: $1.99 USD. Words: 5,610. Language: English. Published: January 11, 2020 by MemeThreeFour. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Menage/Multiple Partners, Fiction » Erotica » Contemporary
(5.00 from 1 review)
Bruce gets a surprising offer – to help out with the family business. Honey and Melly want to launch a new website that puts a new spin on dirty movie scenarios. Bruce has more on-camera fun, with Cinnamon – and Danny!
Some Cats Exit Bags
Series: The Brief Career of Bruce Poleman, Pornstar. Price: $1.34 USD. Words: 3,400. Language: English. Published: December 30, 2019 by MemeThreeFour. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Contemporary
Bruce learns more about Melly's career behind - and in front of - the camera, which brings up desires he's struggled with for years. Honey learns more about what Bruce likes – and vice versa!
Two Bells Are Rung
Series: The Brief Career of Bruce Poleman, Pornstar. Price: $1.34 USD. Words: 3,610. Language: English. Published: December 30, 2019 by MemeThreeFour. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Contemporary, Fiction » Erotica » Menage/Multiple Partners
When Jerry's wife throws him out, he shows up on his sister's doorstep. Melly lets him crash for a few days, and he meets her co-worker, Honey. She christens him with a new pseudonym, Bruce Poleman. They share an intimate moment – and a shocking secret!
Price: $2.49 USD. Words: 8,150. Language: English. Published: December 24, 2019 by MemeThreeFour. Categories: Fiction » Romance » Erotic, Fiction » Erotica » Sci-Fi Erotica
(4.00 from 1 review)
An erotic lesbian romance that might shock the Dickens out of you! Seven years ago, Ebby made a terrible mistake. Will she get one last chance to make it right? Ebby has it all: money, looks, ruthless business instincts, and powerful sex toys. But even if she won't admit it to herself, she's haunted by guilt over what she did. Do the Christmas ghosts offer a way to find her better self again?
"I Wouldn't Say No!"
Series: Mom's Slut School. Price: $1.34 USD. Words: 3,730. Language: English. Published: December 21, 2019 by MemeThreeFour. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Menage/Multiple Partners, Fiction » Erotica » MILF
(5.00 from 1 review)
Lydia teases Mike until he admits he's attracted to her daughter Kara – but then Mike has an idea of his own!
"Give Him A Show!"
Series: Mom's Slut School. Price: $1.99 USD. Words: 4,090. Language: English. Published: December 14, 2019 by MemeThreeFour. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Menage/Multiple Partners
(4.00 from 1 review)
Kara caught her mom her boyfriend! And now her mom is going to catch Kara with Daniel - but Daniel is going to be the only one getting a surprise!
"Not Again, Mom!"
Series: Mom's Slut School. Price: $1.99 USD. Words: 4,240. Language: English. Published: December 7, 2019 by MemeThreeFour. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Menage/Multiple Partners
(4.00 from 1 review)
College cheerleader Kara discovers her boyfriend cheating on her with her mom, Lydia! Lydia thinks Kara needs to be more of a slut – and she's going to teach her how!
The Literal Opposite Of
Price: $1.99 USD. Words: 4,440. Language: English. Published: November 29, 2019 by MemeThreeFour. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » General
(4.00 from 1 review)
College kid Len and his girlfriend watch from a roof as her brother seduces his brother on a backyard sleepover. But who put this plan in motion? A short, scorchingly kinky story of first-time bi exploration and siblings behaving very badly.
Mom's BF Thinks He P0wns My Kitty - Box Set
Series: Mom's BF (thinks he) P0wns My Kitty. Price: $2.99 USD. Words: 11,240. Language: English. Published: November 24, 2019 by MemeThreeFour. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Menage/Multiple Partners, Fiction » Erotica » Sci-Fi Erotica
Polly's got the hots for her mom's latest boytoy, Zeke. Zeke likes mind control smut. So what if Polly pretends to be mind-controlled? It's just a game, right? It won't get out of hand, right? This box set contains all four chapters and a new bonus epilogue!
Three's Cum-Plenty?
Series: Mom's BF (thinks he) P0wns My Kitty. Price: $1.99 USD. Words: 4,790. Language: English. Published: November 17, 2019 by MemeThreeFour. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Menage/Multiple Partners, Fiction » Erotica » Sci-Fi Erotica
(4.00 from 1 review)
In the fourth chapter, Zeke wants to try the hypnotizing app one on of Polly's friends. But the app doesn't really work. How's Polly going to pull this off?
There's an App for That
Series: Mom's BF (thinks he) P0wns My Kitty. Price: $1.34 USD. Words: 3,660. Language: English. Published: November 10, 2019 by MemeThreeFour. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Sci-Fi Erotica, Fiction » Erotica » Menage/Multiple Partners
In the third chapter, Zeke thinks this weird new app has Polly hypnotized. Of course, Polly's just playing along...
Extreme Vetting
Series: Mom's BF (thinks he) P0wns My Kitty. Price: $1.34 USD. Words: 2,230. Language: English. Published: November 3, 2019 by MemeThreeFour. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Menage/Multiple Partners, Fiction » Erotica » Sci-Fi Erotica
In the second chapter, Polly learns what Zeke is into. Uh-oh.
Sometimes a Fantasy
Series: Mom's BF (thinks he) P0wns My Kitty. Price: Free! Words: 1,710. Language: English. Published: October 27, 2019 by MemeThreeFour. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Sci-Fi Erotica, Fiction » Erotica » Menage/Multiple Partners
In the first chapter, Polly realizes she's got the hots for her mom's latest boytoy, Zeke.


Perverted Tentacle Creature
Zyrgle is a tentacle creature who's into humans (which makes him a pervert). Chiyo is into tentacle creatures. Sara is into Chiyo. And tentacle creatures!
0: Zyrgle, Chiyo
Price: $0.99 USD.
1: Chiyo+Zyrgle
Price: $1.99 USD.
Studio SexSickSex
Kinky videos inspire even kinkier action in this taboo-shattering supernatural sexfest! The Carr family find themselves living out scenes that are strangely like their favorite porn site! But is there a sinister force behind it all? The series is complete in 6 chapters! Each hotter and nastier than the one before it!
Swelter in Place
After two weeks of quarantine lockdown, sexual tensions in the neighborhood are getting out of control! Day 15: Drew's a bit of voyeur, but Amber's a bit of a succubus. 6% succubus, to be exact. Day 16: Amber shares her biggest secret with Emiliano. Then she shares a good time with Drew! Day 17: Neighbor couples respond to texts from Amber Day ?...
Daddy's Doll Doubled
When her girlfriend dumps her, Molly decides to crash at her stepdad’s place until her new job starts. When she learns he has a life-like robotic sex toy, it brings up old memories . . . and taboo desires.
The Brief Career of Bruce Poleman, Pornstar
When Jerry crashes with his sister Melly, he learns about her career in porn. Melly and her kinky co-worker Honey come up with an idea for a new web series – featuring Bruce Poleman, a.k.a. Jerry! Of course, they won't actually perform with each other . . . but the escalating sexual tension between them is leading them somewhere they're not sure they want to go.
Two Bells Are Rung
Price: $1.34 USD.
Some Cats Exit Bags
Price: $1.34 USD.
Two Deals Are Closed
Price: $1.99 USD.
Some Lines Are Crossed
Price: $1.34 USD.
Mom's Slut School
Kara catches her boyfriend with her mom, Lydia - and it's not the first time! Lydia's going to teach Kara how to be a slut - with her own boyfriends as teaching assistants!
"Not Again, Mom!"
Price: $1.99 USD.
"Give Him A Show!"
Price: $1.99 USD.
"I Wouldn't Say No!"
Price: $1.34 USD.
Z-Men G-Squad
Sexy superhero action
Mom's BF (thinks he) P0wns My Kitty
Polly's got the hots for her mom's latest boytoy, Zeke. Zeke likes mind control smut. So what if Polly pretends to be mind-controlled? It's just a game, right? It won't get out of hand, right?

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Smashwords book reviews by MemeThreeFour

  • Backstage Pass: Absolute Beginners on Oct. 23, 2011

    Explicit short story delivers what it promises.
  • Daddy's Dirty Girl on Oct. 23, 2011

    Delivers exactly what it promises. The first few paragraphs, with exhibitionist Liddy showing off for stepdad, really set the tone.
  • Daddy's Tight Girl on Oct. 23, 2011

    Delivers just what it promises.
  • Daddy's Little Whore on Oct. 24, 2011

    Satisfying variant on the popular step father fantasy
  • Daddy's Lil Devil on Oct. 24, 2011

    This variant on the popular step father fantasy features a virgin whose reaction to her minister stepdad's corporal punishment is not what he intends it to be ... or is it?
  • It's Miller Time! on Dec. 15, 2011

    Short and to the point with a little bit of homoerotic subtext
  • Sexy Little Cheerleaders: #1 Practice Makes Perfect on Dec. 21, 2011

    The accidental-on-purpose girl-girl seduction was pretty hot. Keywords don't mention big breast fetishism, but there's a big emphasis on breast size in the story, also an exhibitionist theme.
  • The Cheerleader & the Team - A Naughty Cheerleader Sex Story on Dec. 23, 2011

    Hot dialogue and action.
  • Brendella: Collected Stories Volume One on Jan. 07, 2012

    This wasn't what I expected: tease more than hardcore. As a sword-wielding warrior Brendella is pretty incompetent, especially at retaining her clothing. She also seems kind of dim, and although she frequently gets into dilemmas that some might find erotic, they're not erotic to _her_ which is a bit of a buzzkill for me.
  • Pastor's Lil' Slut on Jan. 10, 2012

    Hot! Long, slow tease before the payoff. The punishment scene was a bit rough for my taste, but the psychological dimension made it work for me.
  • Whispers in Darkness: Lovecraftian Erotica on Jan. 21, 2012

    About as odd as it sounds. Shares plot details with the Lovecraftian universe, but not so big on Lovecraft's characteristic xenophobic dread (probably a good thing for an erotic collection). I thought it was a little uneven; I liked Bernie Mojzes "Ink" and Elizabeth Reeves' funny/hot "The Dreams in the Laundromat" best.
  • Double Stuffed on Feb. 01, 2012

    The description says it all -- Jill really wants some anal action, her boyfriend Dave is just not into it. I thought the reversal of the cliche was unusual and interesting.
  • Double Teamed By Daddy & Uncle on Feb. 02, 2012

    Descriptions of the action were repetitive and not very imaginative. Also had many, superfluous commas which I, found distracting.
  • Jennifer's Journey on Feb. 11, 2012

    Check out the sample to see if this writer's style appeals, it is very idiosyncratic and well-formed standard English sentences are a rarity in this story. Very, very strong fetish content, borderline scat, mucus eating, etc., in addition to what is mentioned above. It was not to my taste.
  • Forbidden Love on Feb. 18, 2012

    I enjoyed these stories for the most part despite some distracting punctuation and capitalization mistakes. Carl East definitely explores the psychological dimension of characters craving things they think they shouldn't want (and since this is erotica, ultimately giving in). In addition to the related-by-marriage theme expressed in the titles, several of these stories feature men with women who at least initially seem to be passed out or asleep.
  • XXX-Mas Party Vixen Bundle on Feb. 22, 2012

    These three stories share a Christmas-sex-on-the-job theme with some holiday costumes. The first two mix some romance in with the hardcore.
  • Pride and Penetration (The Filthy Classics Collection) on Feb. 22, 2012

    Wade recasts the dynamic of Austen's classic characters in a 21st century setting. She takes the bare bones of Pride and Prejudice's plot. She (wisely) doesn't ape Austen's style or try to match her wit. What she does is basically replace the coded glances between Darcy and Elizabeth Bennett with a series of sexual encounters, and it works surprisingly well. Note: this is a little vanilla compared to many of Wade's other stories, which means there's still a touch of S&M play and a MFM threesome. Doesn't mean it's not hot and involving.
  • Sense and Sexuality (The Filthy Classics Collection) on Feb. 22, 2012

    Virginia Wade puts Austen's characters and plot (in a very condensed version) into a 21st century setting and adds explicit sex. No faux-Regency prose nor witticism-for-the-ages dialog, but the skeleton of Austen's story proves surprisingly sturdy in this new mode. Works better much for me than other attempts to sex up Jane, like "Pride and Promiscuity." Rather mild compared to many of Wade's other stories. Still hot!
  • Naughty Emma (The Filthy Classics Collection) on Feb. 22, 2012

    My favorite (so far?) of Virginia Wade's modern-day, tarted-up, whirlwind takes on Jane Austen plots. This one had a voyeuristic component the others did not.
  • Backstage Gangbang on Feb. 22, 2012

    This story of two rival groupies competing for a band's attentions had a touch more emotional realism than many stroke stories, without sacrificing heat. Will read more from this author for sure.
  • Ghostfuckers on Feb. 23, 2012

    Sexy, with strong descriptive prose - Pembroke is definitely a good writer. Creepier than I expected, I would have given this story a "horror" tag.
  • Ghostgasmic (Paranormal Erotica) on Feb. 23, 2012

    As described, short, weird, and hot. I will read more from this author.
  • A Lesson from Teacher on Feb. 27, 2012

    The description and tags are accurate, but they don't do justice to the fresh twist Pembroke brings to the classic discovered-and-punished scenario, or show how good the prose is. This story made me add the author to my favorite authors list.
  • Russian Anal Angels: Svetlana's Fist on March 14, 2012

    Hot and nasty, with a splash of watersports and some Ds roleplay and infidelity themes in addition to the action described in the tags.
  • Russian Anal Angels: Olga's Ass to Mouth on March 15, 2012

    Delivers exactly the level of not-quite-scat nastiness the title promises. The sex is not exactly tender, but it's Olga pushing her own limits more than Sergei pushing her, which makes it hotter for me. In addition to listed tags, toy use is also a theme.
  • Your Every Wish (Fantasy Erotica) on March 18, 2012

    Great balance between heat, humor, and tenderness, with an assured narrative voice and some genuinely creative action. A winner.
  • The Naughty Nun; In the Beginning - Multiple Partner Erotica on March 19, 2012

    Accident-prone Sister Mary Immaculate spins quite a tale for her confessor, with unexpected results. Could use a light copy edit, but picks up a star for originality.
  • The Naughty Nun; Sister Mary's Edible Undies, Erotica on March 19, 2012

    Accident-prone Sister Mary Immaculate wants to wear something unusual to her next confession, but the results aren't quite what she expects. Nicely sustained tease (with eventual payoff, of course) and a touch of humor.
  • Jillian's Secret on March 19, 2012

    Could really use a copy-edit, but I give it an extra star for a little more emotional realism than typical for this type of story.
  • I'm a Bad Babysitter on March 22, 2012

    Nothing terribly surprising in this babysitter-caught-mid-blowjob story, but it's nicely executed. Some spanking in addition to the listed tags; some typos.
  • Teaching the Babysitter on March 22, 2012

    Elly's always been scared of sex. So why does she peek at her babysitting client jerking off? Maybe the young couple could help her get over her uptightness? And maybe Wynne Burroughs can turn this into a story that really delivers the goods. (Unfortunately there are a few distracting typos.)
  • Get Me, Got Me, Good on March 31, 2012

    I've always wondered about on-TV marriage proposals... what happens if the answer is not "Yes!" ... better hope there's not a producer type hottie lurking around, I guess.
  • Sex With Her Girlfriends (A FFF Erotic Story) on March 31, 2012

    Has a voyeurism theme in addition to the listed tags; the action is between women, but there is a male observer.
  • Cumming On My Daughter's Face (Winning My Daughter's Virginity, 1) on April 07, 2012

    Nasty! Lesbian, fisting, and questionable consent activity in addition to the listed tags.
  • My Boyfriend is a Lesbian on April 17, 2012

    Delivers everything promised in the description (if I tagged the story I'd include "femdom" as well). Nicely character driven with some real tension to the story. Would benefit from a copy edit, lots of typos.
  • Webcam Gangbang on April 19, 2012

    More emotional (and even physical) realism than the run-of-the-mill gangbang tale. I liked how modern technology is integrated into the story. Also appreciated that although there's some interracial action, it's presented matter-of-factly rather than fetishized.
  • I Fucked the Swamp Creature! (Monster Sex) on April 26, 2012

    Weird and hot, as advertised. I liked how the human jerk who's not so concerned with consent gets shut out.
  • Grace Fucks a Ghost (M/F Paranormal Erotica) on April 26, 2012

    Romantic take on the ghost sex genre, for once addresses the issue of how a ghost gets solid enough for all the fun described.
  • Hostel Whore on April 26, 2012

    Deserves a dubious consent tag in addition to those listed. More guilt and unhappiness than you might expect, although it ends on an upbeat note, if you enjoy rough degrading sex (the narrator does).
  • Babysitter Grand Slam on April 26, 2012

    Delivers just what it says it does. When Stephie's babysitting clients finally turn up they're not happy about what she's been up to in their house . . . I wish there'd been a bit more of their domination of her.
  • Miley's Birthday Orgy on April 26, 2012

    Kind of like the written equivalent of those Hustler faux-celebrity Untrue Hollywood stories videos. More mechanical/less psychological than I usually go for, but executed with such over-the-top abandon that I give it 4 stars anyway.
  • Cheating Housewives Knocked Up: Rent Money Slut on Aug. 04, 2012

    I liked how Natalia Darque's story started a bit rough and nasty and actually got more romantic -- reversal of the standard smut escalation arc. But it was a little too repetitive, and the phrase "black seed" made me giggle a bit each time it came up. (That said: free, and better than plenty of stories here that I've paid for.)
  • Hardcore Hotel: A Wrinkle Inside on Aug. 18, 2012

    A voyeuristic couple haunts a hotel in this collaboration between Rachel Boleyn and Kelly Haven. Nothing too surprising, but solidly constructed, with a hint of real character development. Seems like this was intended to be the first of a series and I would definitely read more. Rounding up from 3.5 stars.
  • Book Club Sex Party! on Sep. 09, 2012

    The book club turns out to have participants both who are new to Sapphic games and pretty experienced at them, so there's an element of seduction. Who picked that smutty book, anyway? Hmm.
  • Tramp Stamp on Dec. 31, 2012

    Kayla starts out the story by trading some oral action for the new tat that provides the title, and she only gets trampier from there. Uncomplicated, unsurprising, but plenty hot. I will definitely read more from Jasmine Dwayne.
  • Vicki Venus and the Temple of the Lust Gods on Jan. 03, 2013

    Nonconsensual and violent Tomb Raider parody with aliens, mummies, tentacle monsters, etc. Not exactly sophisticated, but sincere. Easy to imagine it being written one-handed.
  • Banging My Drunk Sister on Jan. 06, 2013

    Mercy is basically passed out for most of this story, which was not a turn on for me.
  • Daddy, I Think I'm a Succubus on Feb. 01, 2013

    I was a little disappointed by this one, the title suggests a bit of playfulness/camp humor that didn't actually feature in the story.
  • The Island of Doctor Sex - Bred by the Lizardman on Feb. 03, 2013

    I thought the introductory chapter of Neneh Gordon's story was hot and solidly written, will read more of these for sure. It plays with consensuality a bit, but from the perspective of the narrator wanting things she feels dubious about. The story so far emphasizes the power dynamic between Miss Gardner and the "scientist" in charge of the island more than fetishizing the interspecies aspects.
  • Aunt Frisky; A Short Story of Incest on Feb. 06, 2013

    Esmeralda Greene's story is a very nicely executed take on the horny-relative's-arrival-shatters-everyone's-inhibitions sort of porn tale, a bit like the 80's Beeline books: thoroughly consensual, filthy, no pussy-footing about relations only by marriage, all participant's ages established as 18-up but not fetishized in the text. Well above average.
  • Bad Bikers: Daddy's Girl on Feb. 08, 2013

    In three individual chapterlets, determinedly slutty Rachel seduces some of her dad's buds to get them to support her bid to go on a cross-country bike-trip/orgy with them all. I thought her garage session with a lesbian with a dominant streak was the hottest. There's some sexual tension between Rachel and pop, but nothing explicit happens between them in the story. Well above average.
  • Daddy's Bukkake Girl on Feb. 08, 2013

    There's a lot of "daddy" talk, but this is not the sort of incest-themed story where anybody is getting seduced or dwelling on guilt -- as this story opens Frank and Emma are prepping for a bukkake session, and it's not even their first time. The action sometimes gets a little confusing what with a guy named Shane, a girl named Shayna, and fair number of typos. But thoroughly hot and nasty.
  • Our Little Secret Part 1: Charlotte's 18th on Feb. 09, 2013

    Charlotte and her dad don't consciously acknowledge they have the hots for each other throughout most of their accidentally-on-purpose mutual seduction. Pushes the boundary of the "barely legal" genre with the randy twosome more-or-less watching the clock for Charlotte's birthday to officially pass.
  • Seven Sins of Snow White on Feb. 10, 2013

    A different take on smutting up the classic fairy tale with no dwarves or poison apples (but with an evil stepmother). This version on Snow is from the naive-but-fast-learning school of porn protagonists, and the village she wanders around in is a little more realistically portrayed (in a Conan sort of way) than the Disney vision of Grimm. I thought it was hot.
  • Undressing Snow White on Feb. 10, 2013

    Ana Star's take on Snow White is impressively slutty -- she enjoys being dominated by her stepmother, and opens herself in every way to the queen's huntsman, the prince, and the dwarves. The ending was a little abrupt, but overall this was well-paced and thoroughly nasty.
  • S&M: Sex and Machinery on Feb. 10, 2013

    This is really four short stories, two of which are linked. The first pair is pseudo-Victorian with a handful of steampunk trappings (and caning), with a femdom/maledom split between the tales. The second portion, with a character willingly transforming herself into a marionette, was the most original, and I thought it was the hottest, too. The other pair of stories concern a journalist stalking a reclusive and kinky musician, and then provide some of the musician's paranormal backstory. It ended rather abruptly. Both stories would benefit from a good copy edit, but my main problem is that the details of both settings are unconvincing.
  • Snow White And Her Seven Lovers on Feb. 14, 2013

    A modern day spin on the classic fairy tale, with the heroine as an amnesia victim who winds up as the lover of every man in a group house. The guys are a little kinky, running the gamut from the classics (doctor/patient; principal/troublemaker) to the downright whacky. Funny, romantic, hot, makes me curious to read more from Jenna Ives. Not quite 5 star -- some of the scenes are a little overwritten (every! orgasm! the most mindblowing! ever!) -- but really good.
  • Alice in Eroticland [Grown-up and Ready to Party] on Feb. 18, 2013

    Mildly pervy and not very imaginative riff on Carroll's classic with a thoroughly grown up Alice. The White Rabbit, Cheshire Cat, etc. become more human before they are sex partners; Wonderland food modifies genital sizes (although perhaps not as you might expect). Anal sex in addition to listed tags. Dee Dawning's tale would benefit greatly from a copy edit (even switches from 3rd to 1st person at one point).
  • Real Campus Call Girls: Ashley on Feb. 23, 2013

    Above-average, although I would have liked a little more exploration of the professor/student dynamic.
  • Real Campus Call Girls: Lindsey on Feb. 23, 2013

    Cute story with just a little twist at the end, interesting narrative voice. Above average.
  • Daddy's Little Angel on March 03, 2013

    This solidly executed entry by Rachel Boleyn in the popular step-dad/daughter genre fetishizes the latter's virginity and the we're-bad-but-not-SICK aspect conferred by the step-. Consensual with a hint of mdom/roughness (dad is def a dick to the maid, not to mention his wife, who is really demonized).
  • Kate Gets Two Cocks (Co-ed Menage) on April 26, 2013

    The two cocks Kate gets in the story belong to supposedly gay dudes, and the story is very unusual in that it features explicit guy-on-guy action without fetishizing it. Our narrator Kate isn't squeamish in her descriptions, but what the guys get out of it is really incidental to her story. I thought that was hot, and I will definitely read more by Audri London.
  • Probe Me (Alien Tentacle Sex Series) on April 26, 2013

    Not really a complete story, but a very promising start, with some psychological depth and, for once, and a bit more science fiction content than alien sex stories usually feature.
  • The Babysitter's Seduction on April 26, 2013

    The seduction is of the client by the babysitter in Kelli Wolfe's free intro chapter of her Babysitter's Diaries series. Solid if a bit unsurprising, certainly good enough to get me to check out the for-pay sequels.
  • Babysitter and the Beast (Babysitter Diaries #2) on April 26, 2013

    This entry in the Babysitter Diaries has more psychological tension than the first story. Dylan's attraction to Jenna is so powerful it frightens him, and leads him into some kinda creepy, stalker-y behavior ... but it turns out Jenna is every bit as much into him as he is into her.
  • Swallowing; A Short Story of Semen Fetishism on May 21, 2013

    Blistering hot, super nasty. Esmeralda really gets you into the (semen-obsessed) head of her main character.
  • Tied to the Scene; A Short Story of Domination and Humiliation on May 21, 2013

    Ashley gets enough more than she bargained for that this probably merits a dubcon tag. But Esmeralda Greene gradually dribbles out revelations about Ashley that make you want to see her get a comeuppance ... and she does!
  • Pregnant Interlude; A Short Story of Eroticized Pregnancy on May 26, 2013

    Esmeralda Greene can even sell me on a fetish I'm not especially into.
  • The Collected "Greene Shorts"; Volume 3 on June 04, 2013

    I bought this collection for the bonus story even though I'd purchased most of them individually; I'm not sorry. Greene has a way of getting inside her characters' heads that makes these stories hot even when I'm not really into the fetishes being explored (and a LOT of fetishes are explored; not for the faint-of-heart). The bonus story, about an adulterous seduction in a grocery store is one of the more vanilla entries. I was also particularly impressed by the story-within-a-story construction of "Teacher Fantasy."
  • Ian's Gang - Mousetrap on June 19, 2013

    Has something of the vibe of the sort of B-movie MST3K loved to lampoon, but much gorier. More about mood than character or a plot with any real tension.
  • Switek: Episode 1 on June 21, 2013

    Told in a breathless, light-on-details, almost script-like style, Zinetti's randy fantasy about a loutish minor leaguer is just quirky enough to snare me past the first three chapters.
  • Switek: Episode 2 on June 21, 2013

    Told in a breathless, light-on-details, almost script-like style, Zinetti's randy fantasy about a loutish minor leaguer is just quirky enough to snare me past the first three chapters.
  • Switek: Episode 3 on June 21, 2013

    Told in a breathless, light-on-details, almost script-like style, Zinetti's randy fantasy about a loutish minor leaguer is just quirky enough to snare me past the first three chapters.
  • Art School Gangbang on July 10, 2013

    Straightforward, pretty romantic for a gangbang story. The edition I downloaded had some distracting typos.
  • Centaur on Oct. 17, 2013

    Kinky fun, with a fresh, breezy style. I will definitely read more in the Treena series.
  • Dark Secrets: Taken on The Train (Public Stranger Sex, Extreme Anal Sex, Taboo Erotica) on Oct. 17, 2013

    Jake is rough and dominant but Becca is way into it in this brief tale for public transit fetishists.
  • Anal Gangbang for Daddy's Girl on Oct. 17, 2013

    Opens with a scorching phone sex scene as Sara tells her stepdad how she spent her night. Some confusion about who's in which orifice when took me out of the story a little bit. Very rough with emphasis on gagging and some dubcon elements.
  • Rough Stuff for Daddy's Girl on Oct. 17, 2013

    Sara's stepdad is pretty shocked when Sara confesses that she's added watersports to her already prodigious sexual repertoire. In response he tries -- and fails -- to find the amount of roughness that's too much for her. Lots of gagging in addition to the listed keywords.
  • Big Black Cock for Daddy's Girl on Oct. 18, 2013

    As the 5th story of eager submissive Sara and rough step dad Steve opens, Sara has progressed to the point that a quick near-anonymous assfuck in the loo is almost too vanilla for her. But as always, Steve knows how to push her boundaries...
  • Anal Adventures for Daddy's Girl on Oct. 18, 2013

    This collection offers 5 of Atherton's stories for the cost of many single short stories, a great value. Extreme throatfucking and brutal anal action is the order of the day, with girls who love it rough. Includes the story of how Sara and step dad Steve started their nasty games, as well as "Anal Schoolgirl Party for Daddy's Girl," with 4 guys taking Sara and her friend Megan to their limits, and a really hot sequence of Sara prepping Megan for what she's about to get. Giving this 5 stars for the value despite a few distracting typos.
  • Fist Fun for Daddy's Girl on Oct. 19, 2013

    The title says it all - this story has a lot of fisting (front and back) and anal toy action, and not-blood relative kink. The focus is really on the fisting, and this story doesn't feature the rough oral action that features in most of this series.
  • Anal Punishment for Daddy's Girl on Oct. 19, 2013

    Sara tells Osagie she likes it really rough, but he doesn't quite believe her -- until her step dad instructs him.
  • More Anal Adventures of Daddy's Girl on Oct. 21, 2013

    A couple of these stories are almost too strong for me, with oral gagging and overtones of scat. There are some typos and sometimes dialog or a description seems to be applied to the wrong person. But if rough anal stepdad/stepdaughter action is your bag, this is a great value with 5 stories for the price of one. Some lesbian, wet & messy, & fisting in addition to the listed tags.
  • Bound Submission for Daddy's Girl on Oct. 21, 2013

    Megan and Steve jointly top Steve's stepdaughter Sara, then of course Megan submits to him as well. All the nasty anal and extreme throat action you expect from Atherton, and some fisting too.
  • Food Fetish for Daddy's Girl on Oct. 21, 2013

    The food sex is wet and messy, with some vaginal fruit play. Very unusual for A Cindy Atherton story, Sara makes it 3/4 of the way through with nothing up her butt. (That doesn't last, of course.)
  • Dirty Games for Daddy's Girl on Oct. 21, 2013

    Cindy Atherton's stories about Sara and her dominant stepdad Steve have mostly been just this side of too kinky for me. They typically have a hint of dubcon, but Sara really likes being topped. The oral action is generally very rough with gagging and choking, but again, Sara gets off on it. This one goes a little too far for my taste, featuring vomit, enema action with scat overtones as well as golden showers.
  • Liz and Mandy: Hard Licker on Nov. 09, 2013

    A really well put together - and hot - bit of smut. I will definitely look for more from this author.
  • Andy Unbroken on Nov. 10, 2013

    A really fun cake-and-eat-it exercise: bitter geek Andy writes (and shares with the reader) competent but unimaginative mind-control revenge porn, at least until he meets a mildly improbable nerd-girl.What ensues is funny, sweet, and sexy.
  • Her Best Friend's Dad on Nov. 10, 2013

    Just a dash of male domination colors this barely legal tale. Nothing too unusual, but a typically solid showing from the dependable Rachel Boleyn.
  • Anal School: Private Lessons on Nov. 14, 2013

    Cindy Atherton's stories are usually a cut above the usual, and this is no exception, featuring some actual content about Shelley and the Romantic poets. It's a bit tamer than many of Atherton's tales, but still has a bit of Mdom to counterbalance the sweetness.
  • What Happens at the Tavern Stays at the Tavern: Epic Fantasy Quest Erotica on Nov. 30, 2013

    These are mostly bona fide high-fantasy stories incorporating explicit sex, rather than erotica with a veneer of fantasy. Two play with the trope of women required to remain chaste, or at least technically virginal, despite their inclinations. I liked Andrea Trask's tale best, although it's elliptical resolution made it feel a bit like an excerpt from a longer work ... One I would definitely like to read.
  • Keeping It In the Family: A 5-Story Taboo Collection (Incest Erotica/Family Sex Bundle) on Dec. 13, 2013

    Note: There were actually 6 stories, not 5 when I downloaded this book. Many of these stories have a mind-control theme, and there's also a sub-theme of women -- and one deluded guy who's not as straight as he'd like to think -- who don't think of what they're doing as sexual when they're controlled -- there's a bit of a "it's so perverted and wrong for me to get turned on when all I'm doing is [insert sex act]" vibe, which I thought was weird, but not necessarily un-hot. I would read more from this author.
  • Plush Lover on Dec. 16, 2013

    I found the end of this emotionally unsatisfying, but it was still a fun little story. Even if I'm not sure exactly how the teddy bear can hold the dildo. ;)
  • Taken By Her Sex Toy on Dec. 21, 2013

    This has a scenario I found promising: Melody configures her new sex robot for maximum libido, and when her friends Candy and Sally drop by to try it out, they don't know its safewords. But I found the execution disappointing. And the robot is called Obama, which I found distracting.
  • Orgy in the Witches' Den - MFFF Witch Erotica on Dec. 21, 2013

    Nicely atmospheric (and creepy) buildup before the payoff; lush and descriptive prose. I would almost call this erotic horror, and it definitely has dubcon and femdom elements.
  • Sharing the Preacher's Daughter on Dec. 21, 2013

    This story has a repeating pattern: Cindy knows she shouldn't escalate the sexual tension between her and camp counselor pals David and Kyle. But she's having fun, and she's going to let it go just a >little< further before she calls a halt. I thought CC Corrigan nailed Cindy's narrative voice as she argues with herself, and I would definitely read more from this author. (Note: despite the "d" word in the title, there's no PI or ageplay)
  • Pauline Takes a Ride on Dec. 22, 2013

    A solid gang bang tale incorporating some unusual elements: bukkake, watersports, and guys who (somewhat to their surprise) like cream pie action. I enjoy gang bang stories, but they sometimes have of a note of misogyny I really don't like. This one does not. Pauline's boundaries get pushed a little bit, but it's her desire that drives the story, and it's notable that none of the words "slut," "bitch," or "whore" appear. I also liked the gradual introduction and escalation of the watersports elements. And either there were relatively few typos, or I was too involved in the story to notice many of them. I will definitely read more from this author.
  • Penny and Her Peculiar Problems on Dec. 22, 2013

    This was a strange little story for sure. I don't want to spoil it, but it's not quite like anything else I've read, about equally creepy and hot. Will definitely read more from this author.
  • Brainwashed to be Bi: Three Innocence-Corrupting Mind Control Tales (Erotica Bundle) on Dec. 26, 2013

    Most of the mind control erotica I've read is from the perspective of the controller, but these stories are from the perspective of the controllee, so there's an interesting tension that comes from having an unreliable narrator. The first two (really one long story in 2 parts) is told in a series of diary entries. A bit creepy, I'm not entirely comfortable with enjoying them ... but I did.
  • The Gangbang Girls Are Go! on Dec. 27, 2013

    Comparable to late 80s Greenleaf/Liverpool books for sheer filth, and certainly better written than Star novels of that era. There's a lot of blackmail sex that's a bit dubcon. Also an emphasis on descriptions of animal anatomy. Although all the sexually active characters are adults at the time of this story, prior noncon experiences shape their psyches, so if that's triggering for you (and all the other listed keywords somehow aren't!) proceed with caution.
  • Adam and Sheree’s Family Business on Dec. 28, 2013

    Sheree is a really impressive creation, a mix of sweetness, avarice, insecurity, a domineering streak and sheer unbridled lust that's much more complex -- and compelling -- than I expect from the typical smutty story. And the dynamic between Sheree and Adam is remarkably believable. The titular "family business," meanwhile, gives Renarde ample opportunity to explore a wide range of kinks. For me, this was the sort of story that made even the stuff I'm not personally into seem hot. I'd give it 6 stars if I could.
  • A Governess' Tale on Dec. 29, 2013

    Laura Knots editing is usually rough and this is no exception, e.g., "past" instead of "passed" and it looks like there was a late change from 3rd person to 1st person, so there's a mix of "my" [body part] and "her" [body part] which can get confusing. But despite the editing problems, some of her stories work for me because they're so sincerely committed to the kinks and fetishes being explored. This one felt a bit lacking, there wasn't much tension to it. Should really be tagged dubcon or even noncon.
  • Alice Through the Porn Window on Dec. 29, 2013

    A few witty touches liven this up considerably . I like somewhat richer prose descriptions -- it's a bit thinly sketched - but this has some nicely pervy qualities.
  • Alice's Sexual Discovery in a Wonderful Land (Fairy Tale Erotica) on Jan. 01, 2014

    Liz Adams erotic reworking of Alice in Wonderland is long on tease, with Alice spending a large chunk of the book trying unsuccessfully to reach her first orgasm. I found some of it a bit creepy, particularly Alice's encounter with a group of men poised somewhere between imbecility and disturbingly child-like innocence. Many Alice erotica tales feature BDSM themes and couplings with non-humans; this one doesn't. It does feature a smidgeon of bisexual behavior, some back-door action, and several multi-partner scenes. Alice's insecurity grated on me a bit, and I found the dénouement disappointingly vanilla, but it had some clever touches and hot scenes.
  • Big Red Rides on Jan. 01, 2014

    Romantic , despite the strong content. I found the shifts between present and past tense distracting. Still liked this enough to read more stories by Ruby Winchester.
  • Daddy's Little Gymnast on Jan. 01, 2014

    Audra being a gymnast is not an afterthought, it's really woven into the story. Short but hot. Hope there's a sequel!
  • Dirty Mouth on Jan. 01, 2014

    Beautifully executed tease leading to a great payoff. I love how the story itself only refers to "the c-word" for the first several pages. Who says monogamy can't be hot? This is scorching. And funny.
  • Dominated By A Clown (Cream Pie Erotica - literally!) on Jan. 03, 2014

    inventive and hot, perfectly poised between sweet and nasty. I love how the narrator's fraught relationship with her ex-husband helps establish her personality. After I finished this I purchased several other Britten Thorne stories.
  • Happy Hallow-Kreme on Jan. 03, 2014

    I have really mixed feelings about Kreme's stories. I like tales of people overpowered by desires they may not want to acknowledge, but stories in which smart women become dumb have a not of misogyny that's uncomfortable for me. But on the other (third?) hand, Kreme's inventive, fetish-y and sci-fi/horror flavored scenarios are a lot of fun. This was no eXception. Made me hot and a little ashamed to be hot.
  • Flicker on Jan. 04, 2014

    The lead story, a supernatural serial killer tale that (mostly) left a lot of gaps for the reader to fill in barey held my attention .. I would have given it 2 stars. But the bonus essay about the history of "Scooby Do" and its influence on horror cinema was much more interesting. I'd give that 4 stars.
  • Aurealis #65 on Jan. 04, 2014

    I enjoyed both of the (dark fantasy) short stories, the rock'n'roll one more than the sacrifice/adultery one (despite details that feel inauthentic to me, like a guitar soloist with a 7-string instrument). But the real winner here was Patricia O'Neill's nonfiction piece summarizing recent sleep research. Entertaining and informative!
  • Rainbow Party on Jan. 04, 2014

    Really surprised me, which is rare for a smutty story. Narration was a bit tell more than show for my taste at first, but it eventually developed unexpected emotional depth. And it was hot. Will definitely read more from Huck Pilgrim.
  • Whatsoever He Might Kind of Want or Desire on Jan. 04, 2014

    Worked for me at a parody level, but not at a romance level. Well-written enough to make me curious about Jody Wallace's writing when she's not funning.
  • Dorothy’s Wizard (Mind Control BDSM) on Jan. 05, 2014

    There are some interesting aspects to the reworkings of the familiar Oz denizens -- a dash of steampunk, for instance -- but to connect for me the story would need richer descriptions and more character development.
  • Bowl of Candy on Jan. 05, 2014

    I thought this story spent too much time setting up Candy's back story -- only the last third or so is really "present day." I also think it would have benefitted from richer descriptions of Candy's outrageous outfits.
  • Jane 8086 Part One on Jan. 05, 2014

    Fun, and funny little story, but really marred for me by some gratuitous sexist asides.
  • The Alien Next Door on Jan. 06, 2014

    Laura Knots is hit or miss for me, and this is a miss: the alien is very humanoid - no tentacles here, folks - and the action is much more noncon than dubcon.
  • Kandy Korn 2 on Jan. 06, 2014

    2 long stories, one short one. I liked the short one best, a macabre femdom quickie (bit of a switch for Kreme). The zombie tale I found gross rather than erotic; I thought the last story, in which Plutonians come to teach earthlings a lesson for demoting Pluto from planethood started off promisingly, but by the end it felt too repetitive ... It ratcheted up the kink factor, but in a predictable direction.
  • Night of the Incubus on Feb. 01, 2014

    I wasn't sure if his was contemporary or historical, which I guess doesn't matter too much, but does indicate how thinly the setting is sketched. But I liked this enough to read more from Morrigan -- almost romantic, very female-pleasure-centric take on demon sex. Could really use a copy edit, though, some distracting typos/wrong/missing words.
  • Sex By Proxy on Feb. 05, 2014

    I guess if you want to imagine the President of the United States as a mindless sexbot, you might like this story better than I did...
  • Night at The Plantation - A Halloween Story on Feb. 06, 2014

    Atmospheric and well-paced. Didn't necessarily make a lot of sense, and I was frustrated by the protagonist's slowness at putting things together, as well as a major plot question the story leaves unresolved. But I would read more from Xavier Edwards.
  • A Wolf in Grandmother’s Clothing on Feb. 06, 2014

    The title really says it all, this is Little Red Riding Hood with the wolf's crossdressing as the main event. Kinky, fun, but also a touch macabre.
  • Her Horse Fetish - Beastly Duets on Feb. 06, 2014

    One short story and one very short, flash-fiction style story. The first one has a bit of tease to it, once Lisa decides she wants to play with a horse she sets out to train herself to accommodate one and slowly builds up to the real thing. Considerably better than the very standard "here's all the protag's measurements" intro suggests, definitely above average. The second story doesn't quite seem to track with the first, but has plenty of fetish action despite its brevity.
  • Dr. Madison K9 Addict on Feb. 06, 2014

    If Kat really thinks her girlfriend has an addiction problem with dog sex, more dogs trained for sex doesn't seem like the best approach, but that's what Kat tries. Predictably, this leads to more sex with dogs and women, and between women, with a little May-December interaction thrown in. Nicole Draylock is reliably filthy as usual.
  • Taken By the Fairies on Feb. 06, 2014

    A bit of emotional tension enlivens this paranormal dubcon gangbang story.
  • Pixie Chix - Episode 01 - The First Taste is Free on Feb. 08, 2014

    snappy dialogue, clever world-building, evocative descriptions. And, oh yeah, really hot. Impatient to read more in this series!
  • Lesbian Lust in Fantasyland: Horny Halfling: Serving the Elven Queen (Lesbian Femdom) on Feb. 09, 2014

    Kinky fantasy interacial action in a not-overly Tolkeinesque setting, with an actual plot and even some character development. A bit of size-difference fetishization, but the titular halfling is not described as particularly hirsute. Will read more Odessa Piper for sure.
  • Lesbian Lust in Fantasyland: Horny Halfling: The Gnome and Her Sex Potion on Feb. 09, 2014

    In this context "gnome" seems a not like code for "nerd girl" -- and I'm fine with that. This seems more like an interlude in a larger tale than a completely self-contained story, compared to the other entry in this series I read. (I'm probably getting them out of order.)
  • Stable Slut on Feb. 09, 2014

    Every bit as filthy as you expect with a title like that, with some bonus psychological tension to lift it well above the run-of-the-mill. Will definitely read more from Miranda Push.
  • Carnival Games (Lesbian Ghost Hunters, #2) on Feb. 12, 2014

    After reading and loving the first in this series (not currently available on Smashwords, I found it on AZ) I was a bit worried the sequel wouldn't live up to it, but this is another winner: some real character development and romantic tension between characters, an actual plot that's even a bit surprising, and a lot of hot sex (with a hint of Ds).
  • Fetish Photo Shoot on Feb. 13, 2014

    Down-on-her-luck Maggie hooks up with sleazy photog Andy to do some "tasteful nudes" for quick cash, and this is how it goes: Maggie sets a "but I won't don't THAT" limit, Andy pushes it Maggie caves (the story should probably have a "dubcon" tag) ,she says "more please" and sets a new "but I won't do THAT" limit. Repeat until the story is well beyond the boundaries of mainstream porn. Prose was a bit flat, but I thought the story was pretty hot overall. Look forward to reading more from Alexis Alexandra.
  • Yes, Virginia, Santa Claus is Horny on Feb. 13, 2014

    Yes, Virginia there is Santa porn by Jenevieve DeBeers . . . and it even has a sense of humor. Rule 34 FTW.
  • Built on Feb. 15, 2014

    Really interesting speculation about the intersection between sex and technology, with an emphasis on virtual reality and body modification. Will definitely check out more from Grace Vilmont. One aspect that didn't appeal to me: Sophie may technically consents to everything in the story, but she doesn't enjoy all of it -- so this story almost worked better for me as science fiction than as erotica. Could also definitely use a copy-edit, as the typo in the description suggests.
  • F*cking Satan in Hell on March 02, 2014

    Liked this even though it doesn't meet most of my standards for "good" erotica: the plot really makes no sense, there's not much emotional/erotic tension, the language is mostly pedestrian with some thesaurus-misfire gaffes. But in its favor, narrator Julie is an intriguing, if not very credible, mixture of innocent and slutty: kinky enough to borrow her mom's vibe, fastidious enough to wash it first, and there's a little bit of femdom role-reversal. I didn't think the rest of the story quite lived up to the vividness of the first scene. Story could also be tagged anal, and possibly tentacle (demons' tongues are large and prehensile). Multi-page samples of 2 other Carmen Foxx stories are included.
  • The Buggy Seduction Of Gaby on March 04, 2014

    To each his/her own. The mind control stories I like are usually about the tension between what people want and what they admit they want (or are willing to do in a given circumstance), or told from the OMG-can't-believe-I'm-doing-this perspective of the controllee. In CIndy Cumby's story, Gaby is not into what's going on, and she sometimes recovers herself enough to clearly state that (which is a big turn-off for me, personally). And narrator Roger apparently is fine with being the beachhead for an alien invasion of Earth as long as he gets his nut off. Ew.
  • Plushie: An Erotic Romp on March 04, 2014

    Five stars even though this breaks one of the cardinal rules of erotica: the sex scenes all have the same participants doing basically the same things. But I didn't mind that because I was caught up in the story. Mr BIgglesworth is kinda creepy (he has a bit of stalker vibe) and the action is hot . I was hoping for a 3-way with Sierra's college "experimental days" pal, which didn't happen. But now I'm hoping for a sequel. I will definitely read more Clea Kinderton stories.
  • Taken by Teddy (Plushie Group Sex Erotica) on March 10, 2014

    First Maggie's teddy bear magically comes to lustful life, then her stuffed unicorn wants some action too. He's pretty horn-y.
  • Taming My Teddy Bear - An Erotic Story on March 10, 2014

    I've read several similarly themed stories lately and this one really stands out as different from the norm: there's nothing supernatural going on, and there's some sexual, if unconventional interaction between human beings in addition to plush pals.
  • My Stepmom's Secret - An Erotic Story on March 11, 2014

    This starts with an awkward, nonconsensual attempted and emphatically rebuffed seduction by the older partner. What happens after that is consensual (and initiated by the younger partner) but the first scene colored the way I saw the rest of the story, and it just didn't work for me.
  • Treesome on March 14, 2014

    Strikes a nice balance between an eroticized fairy tale mood and catering to the currently popular "weird partner" fetish: romantic, sweet, but odd (with a dab of dubcon).Prose and dialogue were both a little flat - readable, but not rich. But promising overall; I would read more from Angelicka Wallows.
  • The Princess and the Troll Thief on March 15, 2014

    Most fantasy monster sex stories are from the lady's POV ("OMG I can't believe this bestial monster turns me on") but this reverses it:( "OMG I can't believe this delicate human turns me on.") Iqbar is creepy by human standards, but restrained by troll standards. Technically a bit dubcon (the princess doesn't explicitly consent to everything in advance), but also kinda rom and very female-pleasure centric for a male POV story. All this wrapped in a not-bad-at-all sword and sorcery setting that doesn't feel generic. A winner! Look forward to reading more Katie Ayres.
  • Tremblers (tentacle sex) on March 15, 2014

    Starts with a series of vignettes establishing that the tentacled creatures menacing the town are drawn to people having sex. Questionable consensuality (with a hint of mind control) and every which way gender pairings. A little scary, a lot pervy. I thought the dialect dialogue at the beginning was a bit much, but it didn't continue throughout. Definitely leaves me curious to read more from NL Allen.
  • 1 on March 15, 2014

    These stories recall the epic sweep of sci-fi pioneers like Olaf Stapledon - they span decades, or even centuries. Some barely have dialogue, or even characters, at all. (They're very much "tell, don't show.") Several have religious themes. Your mileage may vary, but these were not at all to my taste.
  • 3-Z on March 15, 2014

    These zombie takes all feature at least one twist, but they were the sort I saw coming well in advance. Enlivened a bit by some grim humor, but not my bag.
  • The Other Side of the Looking Glass on March 16, 2014

    Walter stumbles into a group of rich, all-fetishes-embraced lifestyle Ds devotees. They tell him their story in narrated flashback while drawing him in to their circle. (He starts out so naive they have to define B&D for him, which I found a bit hard to swallow.) Unfortunately the story is unedited, there are so many missing words, misplaced quotation marks, etc. that it is sometimes hard to follow. It's also sometimes interrupted by rants about the narrator's ex-wife.
  • Slutty Schoolgirl Demon Slayer on March 23, 2014

    For my preference, too much of this story was written in a very dry style, almost like a synopsis. Definitely try reading the sample to see if it's to your taste. Noncon/dubcon and bimbofication themes in addition to the listed tags.
  • A Stegosaurus Tail on March 25, 2014

    Ali and Stephanie can't have been transported back to the age of dinosaurs, it must be a dream. Of course, they can't agree on which of them is dreaming -our if they're both a dream of the improbable, horny (in more ways than one) stegosaurus. But either way it's an excuse to indulge desires they'd never acknowledge in "real" life. Editing was rough, but I thought this was fun. I'd read more in this series.
  • A Tentacle Monster's Love on April 05, 2014

    4 stars for content: hot, sweet, weied but consensual; 2 stars for editing, with your/you're and its/it's mistakes really pulling me out of the story.
  • Abduction Affection on April 05, 2014

    Enough good points that I'm inclined to try at least one more Blaine Teller story to see if it's more to my taste, but i found this one a little flat. I found the fact that the alien is referred to only by a strong of digits distracting.
  • A Treat for Halloween Tricksters on April 05, 2014

    Not a lot of dramatic or romantic tension; sweet and romantic but not terribly compelling.
  • A Thousand Silent Beats a Minute on April 05, 2014

    Odd but interesting story about grief, guilt, and love. Features a clockwork heart that's not the least bit steampunkish. Marred by some distracting typos.
  • Alien Ride (Paranormal Erotica) on April 06, 2014

    Fresh spin on human-alien interaction, with an amusing twist. Liked this a lot despite some clunky editing, reading more Mina Shay for sure.
  • Alien In My Basement (Tentacle Breeding Erotica) on April 06, 2014

    I think this is the first tentacle riotous I've read where the tentacles are used for massage. Points for originality! The breeding element of this story seemed kinda grafted on, though.
  • Amy's Tijuana Sex Show on April 06, 2014

    Dubcon elements, really rough editing (lots ofpast vs present tense confusion. But reliably filthy, Crimson Rose does not pull punches.
  • Alien Abduction (Paranormal Erotica) on April 06, 2014

    The story starts with Cassie abducting the titular alien, and that's not the only reversal in also emphasizes the alien's special abilities over his physical attributes. Funny, hot, and a little dark -a five-star winner despite rough editing.
  • Bred by the Alien Tentacles on April 07, 2014

    This is a sequel to Alien in the Basement. I was critical of the first story for throwing breeding elements in (it seemed) arbitrarily at the end, but this story deals explicitly with the consequences of the alien pregnancy (it's really one story spit into 2 parts). Dubcon, with a dark streak, largely recapitulates the erotic action of the first story ... I liked it anyway.
  • Alien Ecstasy (Paranormal Erotica) on April 07, 2014

    MIna Shay delivers another twist to differentiate this from other human/alien stories you may have read. In this variant, the alien is hurt. Guess what he needs to get better? And is Ruby up for it? You bet!
  • Alien Escape (Alien Abduction Erotica) on April 11, 2014

    My favorite thing about Mina Shay's alien stories is how different they all are, from each other, and from other authors' alien sex erotica. This one features aliens with a sort of cosmic blue ball syndrome, bifurcated anatomical features. and a mood on the very strange line between mind control and rom. But it felt more standard-issue than most of Shay's stories.
  • Alien Visitation (Paranormal Erotica) on April 12, 2014

    Nice set up, but the erotic content felt a little pedestrian. Definitely not my favorite from MIna Shay's "Alien" series.
  • Allured By Nine-Tails (Mating with Monsters #9) on April 12, 2014

    Fun story about a famous kitsune of legend, with mild femdom/bondage elements. Male POV. Four stars despite some sloppy editing. I will read more in this serious.
  • Aphordite's Pendant 2: The Domino Club on April 22, 2014

    Continues the story of Julie and Greg as their lives are changed by the mysterious pendant that opens their minds and (literally) orifices to sexual adventures they'd never considered. This installment ups the ante a bit (and is more M/M M/trans oriented) but doesn't resolve the story. I hope Crimson Rose returns to finish it.
  • Aphrodite's Pendant on April 22, 2014

    Begins the story of Julie and Greg as their lives are changed by a mysterious pendant that opens their minds and (literally) orifices to experiences they'd never considered. Some M/M content, mild D/S. I thought this was a lot of fun.
  • Blackmailed for Sex (Five Hardcore Rough Blackmail Erotica Stories) on May 05, 2014

    Definitely liked this collection well enough to try more from Jane Kemp. These stories are on the milder side of dubcon/reluctance and prioritize female pleasure. Almost all of them have a bit of a twist that adds some plot tension.
  • Beneath the Ice on May 05, 2014

    I think this may be the first Inuit-themed erotica I've read? Fun and unusual.
  • Backseat Fast Girls on May 05, 2014

    I really liked Lula Lisbon's historical erotica about a carhop widening her horizons. Will read more from this author!
  • Aunt Jess's Disciplinary Farm: Tiffany's Rude Awakening on May 05, 2014

    Almost -- but not quite -- too nasty for me. Dubcon or noncon, depending on how you look at it, and really rough. Jess wants to break Tiffany's will, and I'm rooting for Tiffany to out-slut her dominant aunt and not get broken ... but not sure that's how it will pan out.
  • Straight-Laced Sister on May 05, 2014

    The description is actually for the wrong story (Aunt Frisky) -- in this story Lilly tells Juliana she doesn't want to play their special game anymore, but Juliana's sure she knows better. Then Lilly's mind gets a little blown by all the craziness in the house ... but she still manages to have the last word! As usual, Esmeralda Greene pulls no punches.
  • His Naughty Little Girl on May 05, 2014

    Is Blaine really so drunk he thinks Chloe is her mother?? Mmmaybe not.
  • Daddy May I? on May 05, 2014

    Feels a little too generic, and the extended flashback structure removes some of the dramatic tension.
  • The Cruise Ship Affairs – the Sex List on May 06, 2014

    Determinedly kinky, and I liked how the parties were more realistic than the standard porn Barbie Dolls,but this was spoiled for me by an unpleasant misogynist vibe. Borderline scat activities were also not my thing. I think Mister Average is probably not for me.
  • Bimbo on May 06, 2014

    In addition to the listed tags, this has BDSM and desperation themes. Brief, but well executed.
  • Sinsation on May 06, 2014

    Long slow build-up leads into a kinky sci-fi orgy.Nastier than I expected ...not that I'm complaining.
  • Her Gift -- The Duchess on May 07, 2014

    Yummy historical seduction with a little D/s seasoning. Very nice.
  • Her Gift -- The Houseparty on May 07, 2014

    Charlotte's tutelage continues. Lots of voyeurism/exhibitionism in this installment, as well as D/s themes.
  • Down on the Beach on May 07, 2014

    Hot, well crafted vignette. Reading more Alessia Brio for sure.
  • Daddy's Little Cherries on May 09, 2014

    What really makes this story work is the contrast between Anna, who jumps in with both feet, and Kelly, who needs a little more time to get used to the ideas the girls are exploring.
  • The Devil's Bitch on May 11, 2014

    This one really straddles the line between horror and erotica, there's a nontrivial bodycount and a dark streak that goes well beyond the dubious consent that's so common in paranormal erotica. Caveat lector!
  • Open Your Legs For Me on May 14, 2014

    Not badly written and the sub seems enthusiastic enough, but the doom just seems like a jerk. Some watersports.
  • Aunt and Niece Squirt Fest: A Lesbian, Incest, Squirting, and Pee Fetish Story on May 31, 2014

    Really rough editing, very short. Barely any plot or character development, very abrupt ending. But committed to its fetish.
  • Say Yes, Alice (Brazen Babysitters #1) on June 01, 2014

    Loved the first chapter, glad there are four more.
  • No More Monsters on June 02, 2014

    I'm a fan of consensual tentacle stories in general, but I had trouble with willing suspension of disbelief for this one -- Tanya seems just a little _too_ open-minded, too soon (maybe if she had explained how she was really into hentai porn?).
  • Strange Sex Stories: My Dildo is Haunted (Paranormal Erotica, Erotic Humor) on June 04, 2014

    Really nice sustained tease/buildup, with satisfying payoff. I like how it's not very penetration-centric, and the hint of mind control isn't oversold. With a light edit this would be a 5-star story, but there a few near-repeat sentences and a couple of descriptive elements that seem out of sequence. Also, the title is a bit of a spoiler. But overall I liked this a lot.
  • Japanese Tentacle Toy on June 07, 2014

    I thought this had a really promising start, but the descriptions kept flipping between first and third-person (my body part, her body part in consecutive sentences) and I found that really distracting. And it made me pay attention to how formulaic the action was, despite the creative setting and unusual monster.
  • Dancing on Daddy's Pole on June 07, 2014

    Average. Title is a bit of a spoiler, since the relationship is only revealed in the last pages.
  • Teaching an Old Dog New Tricks (Bestiality Animal Sex Erotica) on June 07, 2014

    I just didn't buy the characters' motivations, particularly the innocent virgin suddenly deciding to start with a nonhuman penis. And I felt a little bad for the poor old pooch, he really gets put through the ringer. Many of the listed tags don't actually apply to this story, there's no sexual interaction between the human characters and no BDSM elements.
  • Daddy Cum Join Us on June 07, 2014

    Kinda unusual in a story like this to leave a character sexually frustrated for a while, that made me pay attention and earns a third star. A light copy edit would really help, many awkward, choppy sentences.
  • JoAnne's Fun with Max (Bestiality Blow-Bangs in Blue Jeans #1) on June 11, 2014

    Fetishisizes the amount of time the described acts take. In addition to the listed tags, there are dubcon, watersports and voyeurism elements. I thought this was just so-so -- pretty repetitive.
  • The Humiliated Elven Bride (m/f, spanking, forced sex) on June 14, 2014

    Right on the edge of too noncon for my taste, but definitely better written/edited than many other similarly themed stories. Betrayal from an unexpected quarter adds a bit of psychological tension.
  • The Humiliated Lady Frost (f/f forced pseudo-incest, bestiality) on June 14, 2014

    Right on the edge of too noncon for my taste, but definitely better written/edited than many other similarly themed stories. Nice tension in the opening scene, where Alyce thinks her lover is describing a fantasy that pushes her boundaries a little. But it's not just a fantasy . . . Not sure why the other reviewer described the story as 8 pages long, 4700 words was 16 pages on my ereader.
  • Age of Dragon Sex Bundle: Humiliated Damsels (spanking, pseudo-incest, forced sex) on June 14, 2014

    Jane Amber's dark erotic fantasies are just on the edge of too nonconsensual for me, but definitely above average quality. All three of the stories share a subtheme of betrayal by someone the protagonist trusts.
  • Ann of the Apocalypse (A Post-Apocalyptic Erotic Adventure) on June 14, 2014

    I've enjoyed many of Virginia Wade's stories, but this one was a near miss in a few different genres: too noncon oriented for the romance to work for me, too plot-heavy for porn, but without enough unique story elements to succeed on a science fiction level. But I did really like the detail that Ann learned to use a bow because she was a Hunger Games fan.
  • Impregnated By My Six Brothers (Taboo Family Incest Gangbang Breeding Erotica) on June 18, 2014

    Odd and unsatisfying for a smutty story: about a page of warm-up, a page of action, and 4 pages for 9 months of consequences.
  • Oh Say Can You Suck Daddy's Dick on June 21, 2014

    Awkward phrasing like, "Rick’s expressions were priceless. His face contorted in ways that had never been seen on this man. He ended up making so much noise that a neighbor decided to stick his head over the fence." stopped me from getting involved in the story.
  • Your Turn, Alice (Brazen Babysitters #2) on June 21, 2014

    Can Alice keep quiet while Carla and/or Beth work her over? That is,quiet enough that her parents won't hear funny noises and catch her in flagrante delicto? A little bit of voyeurism adds some additional spice. Ends a bit abruptly.
  • In Space, no one can hear you Spank your Secretary on June 25, 2014

    A telepathic lie detecting alien adds a lot of spice to an erotic military discipline session. I didn't quite buy the romantic twist at the end, but this was decidedly fun despite some editing gaffes.
  • Lesbian Lust in Fantasyland: Horny Halfling: The Pirate's Booty on June 25, 2014

    Famed adventurer Miranda is awfully easy for the pirates to capture. But that's OK because it turns out she really likes being a pirate captain's captive there's a lot of consensual FF Ds play and a bit of noncon MF grabass. Not much of a plot to this installment, and several details felt anachronistic. But fun overall.
  • A Cheerleader in King Arthur’s Dungeon (Bondage Erotica) on June 28, 2014

    Usually it annoys me when reviewers complain that a story is too short; it says clearly that this one is less than 5000 words. But this one really did leave me hanging -- it ends very abruptly without resolving the plot threads at all (although it does bring a sex scene to conclusion). A shame, because I thought it was a really promising set up.
  • The Humiliated Virgin Witch (m/f, forced pseudo incest, bestiality) on June 28, 2014

    Intriguing world-building adds interest to this story of a lecherous mage who_really_ shouldn't be allowed to administer the "treat of obedience" to the graduating class. Has a nasty little twist at the end. Mdom and S&M themes in addition to the listed tags. Quite a few missing words in the text, could really use a copy edit, but 4 stars anyway.
  • The Humiliated Lady Fire (Forced, Humiliation, Bestiality Erotica) on June 28, 2014

    Not exactly Game of Thrones fanfic, but very clearly inspired by the series. The Duke struck me as unctuous, but I definitely appreciatehis use of an ancient work of pornography to facilitate his seduction. As usual for Amber, a copyedit would really help, but I like it anyway.
  • Succubus In Heat, Paladin In Bondage on June 29, 2014

    Hot + plot, what's not to like? With a novel bondage/forced masturbation element.
  • Daddy's Fluffer (Taboo, Step Daughter Daddy Oral Sex) on July 03, 2014

    Interesting variant on all the stepdaughter stories where the wife is unavailable: she's plenty available, but the dude has performance issues.
  • Vines of the Alraune (Mating with Monsters #1) on July 18, 2014

    Unusual mix of two familiar fetish elements - the narrator's plant-lady has no character trait beyond an insatiable hunger for sperm -- like the bimbo genre -- but she also has tentacles. I found it more weird than hot, but it did hold my attention.
  • Witch's Ball on Aug. 03, 2014

    Slightly melancholy, which I liked. The characters start out feeling very awkward in their human forms, which I also liked, but I thought they fell into human idioms and behaviors a little too easily and quickly.
  • Vampire Sex on Aug. 03, 2014

    This story has a very extreme fetish element not listed in the tags or the description. I thought the story was OK until then, a little overwritten, but the end really ruined it for me.
  • Two Bitches For Cupid on Oct. 18, 2014

    Lots of ws in addition to listed tags. Very committed to its fetishes.
  • The Exposed Sprite (A Fairy Supernatural Erotica) on Oct. 18, 2014

    There's an attempt at some world-building and story here, but it was too clunky and over-written for my taste. I did like the bit with the pencil, though.
  • Web of the Jorogumo (Mating with Monsters #2) on Oct. 18, 2014

    On the plus side, there are a ton of stories about women and monsters, a (hetero) guy + monster has some novelty. The monster is unusual (at least in Western pop culture) and the story is actually a bit educational (it takes liberties with the folklore, but points some of them out). And it's both creepy and erotic, a difficult balancing act to pull off. On the minus side, it's heavy on exposition, and I found the narrator kinda unlikable. Could really use a copyedit, too. But overall I definitely liked it better than the Mark Desires story I reviewed earlier.
  • Passionate Suburbia on Oct. 18, 2014

    Nails the elaborate syntax and exuberantly purple prose of classic (pre 80s) Greenleaf or Beeline authors so well that I might suspect it was a pirated text if it didn't convincingly integrate modern elements like reality TV and console games. Bravo.
  • Sister Sloppy Seconds - Creampie Slut on Nov. 12, 2014

    This story helped me figure out something about how I like this kink - consensual, but not romantic, and celebrating perversion rather than minimizing or excusing it. I've definitely found other Cheri Verset stories more to my taste.
  • Cocktopus (tentacle sex erotica) on Nov. 13, 2014

    Shelli's friends are a bit dubious about cocktopus, at least at first, but Shelli is positively enthusiastic and that really makes the story work for me. Also, their backstory includes sapphic exploration they're not entirely comfortable with, which was an interesting angle. Lots of distracting typos, although the one about "protecting the pubic" made me giggle.
  • Cocktopus 2: The Spawning on Nov. 13, 2014

    The sequel to Cocktopus is not just more of the same - not only is there a lot of guy-on-guy action, there's [spoiler alert] a bunch of little cocktopi in addition to Dad. Also a bit of violence I didn't care for, although it's offscreen, as it were. But overall I liked the story even though M/M is not my thing.
  • Tarnished by the Incubus on Nov. 15, 2014

    Very nicely paced seduction. A little bit dubcon and a little bit bi. Having the demon's accomplice as our primary viewpoint character provides an interesting vantage on a familiar scenario.
  • American Sex Doll (group gangbang erotica) on Nov. 16, 2014

    A bit unusual in that some vanilla one-on-one follows the big gangbang. I also liked that it was multicultural without being too fetishy about it. Rounding up half a star for much better than average copyediting.
  • Goldilocks Shaves Red Riding Hood on Nov. 16, 2014

    Promising start, setting the standard once-upon-a-time mood, but the porn bits felt very color-by-numbers. Also a bit violent, which I didn't expect.
  • Alien Attorney Abducted on Nov. 30, 2014

    You definitely know what you will get with a Laura Knots story - lots of maledom dub/non con, often with violence, and so many typos the stories often get a bit hard to follow. But there's a weird sincerity to them.
  • Abraham Lincoln Vampire Fucker on Nov. 30, 2014

    Unsettling blend of funny and dark. "Once you've had vamp, you need that kind of tramp," I guess. I wouldn't call it rigorously researched or anything, but Cheri Verset clearly did a little bit of research.
  • Watch Me Play, Daddy (Jerk Off Instructions) on Jan. 19, 2015

    Second person, present tense, which was odd, and I kept expecting a last page twist in which it turned out the characters were skyping or something instead of being in the same room. But that never happened.
  • Santa Gives Her a Ride on Jan. 19, 2015

    Belinda seems to have fun, but what goes down is mostly kinda dubcon, and the opening scene with the disrespectful trucker was not a turn on for me.
  • A Christmas Carol Gangbang on Jan. 19, 2015

    Weird mix of nasty/romantic.
  • Sharing Wet Sisters (cum kiss snowballing taboo) on Jan. 19, 2015

    Spends a bit too long on the unsexy encounter with the jerky bad date guy, but makes up for it with a long boundary-pushing seduction - that manages to leave a few lines uncrossed.
  • Brooke's Big Mistake on Jan. 19, 2015

    A lite little slow to start, with a bit of a word tone to the characters' actions, but certainly delivers kink a-plenty.
  • The Forbidden Taboo 8 - Mom Shared By Son And Daughter on Jan. 22, 2015

    Ever-increasing perviness and sly references to the original, infamous "Taboo" porn flick. Plenty of that trademark Verset "it's still 'pseudo,' honest!" boundary pushing.
  • The Forbidden Taboo 4 - A Game of Kissing Farm Cousins on Jan. 22, 2015

    When Cheri Verset is at the top of her game - as here - she's one of the best of the high-volume-output erotica authors on Smashwords. In addition to the listed kinks, long steady buildup is one of her specialties, and there's plenty of that here - including a male solo masturbation scene, virtually unheard of in porn marketed to guys.
  • Utopia: Pet Hotel for Dogs (Doing the Doberman and Caught on the Nanny Cam!) on Jan. 24, 2015

    Miranda Push's stories break the rule of thumb that the content is usually as amateurish as its cover: its straightforward, uncomplicated smut with barely any plot - but it's competently executed.
  • Riding the Ponies (Taboo Bestiality) on Feb. 01, 2015

    Comparable in prose style and sheer OTT perviness to similarly themed Liverpool/Greanleaf-type offerings from the late 70s/early 80s, and an absolute steal by Smashwords standards with ~30k words for 3 bucks.
  • Sexcraft - Roomates on Feb. 01, 2015

    I guess this story didn't sell well enough for Adel to continue the series. That's a shame - the distinctly Hogwarts-y setup was fun. Gender transformation themes in addition to the listed tags.
  • Sexcraft - Initiation on Feb. 01, 2015

    Syndee encounters a porny version of Hogwarts' famous Sorting Hat. I thought the sex was kinda pedestrian, but the setup was quite well done.
  • Betraying the Coven (F/f/F Gangbang) on Feb. 05, 2015

    Well executed. I'd definitely read more from Adriana Rossi.
  • Taken by the Scarecrow (Reluctant Monster Sex Erotica) on Feb. 05, 2015

    Very nice intersection of horror and erotica, genuinely creepy at first, and subsequently hot (but still a bit creepy).
  • Sexy Slutty Spying Stepsister Gangbang Collection 1 on Feb. 14, 2015

    Amanda is not totally at ease with how much being blackmailed into sex slavery to her step brothers gets her off, and that psychological tension is what really makes this work for me. This volume includes the first 3 parts of the story.
  • Sexy Slutty Spying Stepsister Gangbang 4 on Feb. 14, 2015

    The forth installment of Amanda's story is plenty filthy, but a tiny dash of romance begins to creep in. Unexpected, but not unwelcome.
  • Sexy Slutty Spying Stepsister Gangbang 5 on Feb. 14, 2015

    Continues the filthy-but-kinda-romantic balancing act introduced in chapter 4. I'm going with 5 stars, but this was a tiny bit disappointing because it doesn't really conclude Amanda's story - there's groundwork laid for at least one more chapter, and I wish I could read it.
  • Dirty Sister (Lesbian Incest Sex) on Feb. 14, 2015

    The step sisters in this story swap bodies, freaky Friday styl, and there are multiple POV shifts. Kinda hot but a little confusing.
  • Dirty Mommy (Lesbian Incest Sex) on Feb. 15, 2015

    Didn't do it for me as PI kink -- Katie's new stopmom is close to her age and they meet at the beginning of the story, and there's very little taboo tension to it. But the object insertion fetish part of the story worked for me.
  • Daughter's Purity Ball (Incest Orgy Gangbang) on Feb. 15, 2015

    The nastiest dad-daughter story I have read in a while, and that's saying something.
  • Dorothy Does Oz: Over the Rainbow, Under the Munchkins on March 09, 2015

    Dorothy starts out a little too passive for my taste (although she gets less so as the series goes on) so what really makes this story work for me is that author's ability to channel Baum's Carroll-lite absurdity and word play. Pervy fun. I would definitely read more from Aimee Nichon.
  • Dorothy Does Oz: A Witch Is a Terrible Thing To Waste on March 09, 2015

    Dorothy starts out a little too passive for my taste (although she gets less so as the series goes on) so what really makes this story work for me is that author's ability to channel Baum's Carroll-lite absurdity and word play. Pervy fun although I was hoping for more witch/Dorothy action. I would definitely read more from Aimee Nichon.
  • Dorothy Does Oz 4: Sex in the (Emerald) City on March 09, 2015

    Dorothy starts out a little too passive for my taste (although she gets less so as the series goes on) so what really makes this story work for me is that author's ability to channel Baum's Carroll-lite absurdity and word play. Pervy fun. I would definitely read more from Aimee Nichon.
  • Dorothy Does Oz 2: Friends Have the Darnedest Things on March 09, 2015

    Dorothy starts out a little too passive for my taste (although she gets less so as the series goes on) so what really makes this story work for me is that author's ability to channel Baum's Carroll-lite absurdity and word play. Pervy fun. I would definitely read more from Aimee Nichon.
  • Dorothy Does Oz 3: Everything's Coming Up Poppies on March 09, 2015

    Dorothy starts out a little too passive for my taste (although she gets less so as the series goes on) so what really makes this story work for me is that author's ability to channel Baum's Carroll-lite absurdity and word play. Pervy fun. I would definitely read more from Aimee Nichon.
  • Cherry Float on May 25, 2015

    I've enjoyed most of Clea Kinderton's stories much more than this one. It's very sincerely committed to the deflowering fetish -- so much so that Kayla goes on and on about how she was afraid to put even a finger inside herself, which I just found weird and distracting. And Kayla's attraction to her step dad is hard to fathom, since his only real character trait is being distracted and self-absorbed.
  • Candy's Canine Capers on June 21, 2015

    The first review seems harsh to me - yes, there are a few typos/editing gaffes, but on the whole this is much cleaner than most of the selfpub smut on smashwords. Editing-wise, I mean, it is not the least clean in any other respect. Features a smidge of MM and some FF in addition to listed tags.
  • Sexual Desires on June 21, 2015

    Fun exploration of furry fetishism in a supernatural context. I got a little confused in the Mindy/Mixi scene, but I suspect that was a bit deliberate. Much more woman-friendly than the Dark Bros. films with all the freaky costumes, but still reminded me of those, with bunny ears, tails, etc. all in play. Tags are somewhat inaccurate, I would have tagged it cosplay supernatural FF MF object insertion.
  • Daddy Cum Here on June 21, 2015

    This felt really color-by-numbers, and the "stepdad is too drunk to know regard he's doing" trope freaked me out a bit.
  • Student Elf on Aug. 08, 2015

    This raunchy romp is more inspired by Hogwarts than directly parodic. It's set in the same world as "the princess is a filthy Slut" - one with lots of humanoid magical creatures, and in which elves are open to almost any form of sex at any time. Not quite as comprehensively pervy as "princess" - no family shenanigans or non-human participants who can't talk - but still really, really dirty. I liked that the only characters who aren't at least a little bit bi are women who exclusively like women, and i liked that the story respected their orientation (while challenging some supposedly straight dudes'). Actually has a plot, too. I would be psyched for a sequel.
  • Circus! Circus! A Zebra For Zelda! (The Most Erotic Circus-Sex Act Ever!) on Aug. 22, 2015

    Zelda's one of those painfully-naive first person narrators who gets duped into making a blue movie -- but when she finds out what she's in for, instead of being mad, she's really into it. The action escalates continually, culminating in an over-the-top orgy. Copy editing is a bit rough, but the story delivers (and as I think I've noted elsewhere, the writing is a bit more polished than the cover design might lead you to expect). (Orgy scene includes a bit of FF and MM.)
  • Oops, I Made Daddy Cum! on Sep. 19, 2015

    Competent, brief, and not very original explorations of the fetish. 4 seducing daughters, 1 seducing parent. Pretty vanilla except for the "I"-link.
  • Daddy Made Me Cum on Sep. 19, 2015

    All dominant dads and submissive daughters. First and best story features fisting. Not very imaginative.
  • Claiming the Captain (Alien Mind Control Erotica) on Oct. 05, 2015

    Unusual and intriguing take on the "close encounter of the sexual kind" theme. I felt a bit let down by a handful of rote adjectives, but I appreciated the psychological underpinnings.
  • Cum For The Invisible Man on Oct. 06, 2015

    Wade's stories often hover right around the edge of my comfort level with consent/nonconsent and this is no exception. The invisible man is pretty creepy - I liked his scam of claiming he's a ghost - but Kelly is pretty into being creeped on (and verbally degraded). Story escalates nicely both in terms of sexual action and emotional involvement.
  • Black Magic Slut on Oct. 10, 2015

    End very abruptly, but not badly written
  • Licking Candy (mother sister snowballing xxx erotica) on Oct. 16, 2015

    Verset's specialty is pushing the line between step-relation and full-blood relation hanky-panky just about to the breaking point. This is no exception. Mom is the instigator this time around, soon is creeped out/but into it, step sis feigns passivity. The action is a bit color-by-numbers, but the escalation is well paced.
  • Edit Me Harder on Oct. 18, 2015

    I love the notion of a story centered around the frequently slipshod editing of self pubbed fiction, but I do wish the guy hadvbeen less of a jerk. The descriptions of the protagonist's arousal worked for me in an erotic context, but it was hard to fathom why she'd respond as she did. Still: funny, well executed and - yes - edited. Well read more from Belle Fornix for sure.
  • Posed for Success on Oct. 18, 2015

    Kind of a whacky amount of somewhat outdated info about internet connectivity underlies this intriguingly structured story. I'd apply the "mind control" tag, and either dubcon or noncon depending on how you interpret it.
  • Curious Sensualities (Sex Toy Erotica) on Oct. 20, 2015

    Competently executed. Story-within-a-story dimension was a nice touch.
  • A Reluctant Witch in The Land of BDSM - Shame and Delight at His Hands on Oct. 20, 2015

    Generally the billionaire bondage subgenre boars me to tears, but the "witch" aspect pulled me into this, and I'm really glad. Very nicely paced and written well.
  • A Reluctant Witch in The Land of BDSM - Masked and Squirting Mayhem on Oct. 20, 2015

    Nicely structured and paced, prose quality not only well above average for self-pubbed work, but much livelier than as much of "Fifty Shades" as I managed to read. Nastier, too. If only all billionaire bondage stories were this good.
  • The Canine Cumslut Collection (Six Story Bestiality Animal Sex Erotica Bundle) on Nov. 15, 2015

    6 short, uncomplicated vignettes of young women's first-time experiences with bestiality. A bit of dubcon, one with mdom, one with slightly anthropomorphized canines, 2 with human sexual partners, all with anal action, most fetishisizing the 18-and-legal line. Prose not too clunky, a few moderately distracting typos. Good value.
  • Monsters in my Closet on Nov. 22, 2015

    Waaaay on the dubious side of dubcon, I might be inclined to call it noncon. Masochistic themes and a bit of urophilia. Very little plot, but creepy.
  • Pregnant by Daddy and Horny for Mommy (family breeding incest erotica) on Nov. 22, 2015

    Most of Verset's stories stop barely short of genital contact/penetrative actsbetween actual blood relations. This one shatters those lines and instead plays with the edge of age of consent. A bit too over the top for me, but unrelentingly kinky.
  • Camgirl Confessions: Learning the Ropes on Nov. 26, 2015

    Straightforward smut and some solid tips for building engagement online.
  • Camgirl Confessions: Naked in the Library on Nov. 26, 2015

    Very nicely paced, with enough character grounding to make the character's motivations credible. Some anal toy play.
  • Camgirl Confessions: Making a Friend on Nov. 26, 2015

    Picks up the penny the first story in the series dropped (no contact with males in a live show...). Really liked the way the story focuses in turn on the pleasure of the two participants. More pragmatic advice for amateur erotic businesses, too.
  • Camgirl Confessions: Naked in the Coffee Shop on Nov. 26, 2015

    Last story (so far?) in the series doesn't escalate the action, but has plenty of getting-caught risk
  • Calli's Gift on Nov. 27, 2015

    Characters' motivations are a bit hard to swallow, but this definitely delivers a boatload - or is that buttload? - of kink. D/s Mdom in addition to listed tags.
  • Calli's Reward on Nov. 27, 2015

    Filthy, filthy filthy. Calli's new neighbor's a bit of a voyeur, but even more of a sub - for Calli, her dad, and their dog. Calli meanwhile leans to do a bit of topping.
  • Sex Machine: motorcycle vibrator, solo sex, female ejaculation on Nov. 28, 2015

    Nicely paced solo/fantasy story about a young woman exploring the vibratory opportunities provided by a motorcycle
  • Robot Sex on Nov. 29, 2015

    Nobody ever thinks to build a fail safe into their sex robots, and somehow they always go haywire... This one chased Mixi and Professor Karen all over campus. They enjoy it to a point, but it never stops, so they need to escape for a while to escape actual medical harm. I found the emphasis on getting for-real hurt decidedly unsexy, but I enjoyed Mixi and the professor's enthusiasm, and the general madcap pervy slapstick atmosphere
  • Brandi Whyne 1 on Dec. 05, 2015

    The introduction to this parodic Robin Hood in Space tale is a little slow to get started, both in plot/character and in erotic content. I wouldn't normally grouse about a leisurely intro - certainly in the spirit of Fanny Hill, another obvious touchstone - but it's a slightly different proposition when paying by the chapter
  • Brandi Whyne 2 on Dec. 05, 2015

    Hotter, funnier, and less cookie-cutter than the first installment. Title implies BD/SM, and there is some, but it's not exclusively BD/SM focused, and it's mostly female-pleasure centric.
  • Doggy-Loving Nuns (The Kennel Club 9) on Jan. 26, 2016

    Some sloppy editing (Heather and Iris get confused a few times, which pulled me out of the story) but ratchets the perversion up a few notches, which as this point in the tale is not easy.
  • Wormwords on Jan. 31, 2016

    Clever, creepy little story about evolving AIs. Bit of a "Black Mirror" vibe, not just because one "Black Mirror" episode used a similar jumping-off point, but also because of its dark-humored take on sorta-credible extrapolation of tech trends. Recommended, and I'll read more from Weber.
  • Monica Munches Man-Meat on Mars -- Volume 1 on March 12, 2016

    Protagonist growing second head = too weird for me. No plot or character development either.
  • Steampunk Erotica on March 15, 2016

    Somethings I liked a lot about this story, some things I really didn't care for. + It's fundamentally about women asserting identity and power in defiance of Victorian strictures. Yay. + Not only is there really a plot & some character development, at least some of the sex scenes advance establish character & advance the plot - At least one character is sadistic in the "Marquis de" mode - sexually aroused by noncon violence up to and including death. The story overall is pretty violent. - One sexualized scene emphasizes how one of the participants is not enjoying the activities. - Le Brocq embraces the Victorian-style physiological distortions of sexual response to the point of ridiculousness. There's a long tradition of this, obviously, but it distracted me On balance, definitely more good than bad, I'll try more from Le Brocq
  • The Invisible Girl's Peep Show: A Lesbian Story on March 19, 2016

    Our pervy voyeur narrator discovers she might not be as straight as she thought. Hope this series continues!
  • One To Groan On on March 26, 2016

    (Bonus star coz with 13 stories for a buck, this is a crazy good value by Smashwords standards.) Very specific in its fetishes, almost all of which appear in all of these stories - the "ok it's midnight now" level of barely legal, defloration, involuntary (male) orgasms. Also a lot of accidental pseudo bondage mishaps, e.g., caught struggling with teetering loads (as it were). A bit of (not pseudo) father-daughter interaction, implied brother-sister, and a dash of girl-girl for seasoning.I liked the two multi-partner stories best, but then, I would. I also definitely appreciated the puns and the well-above-average grammar, proofreading etc. I wish the women in the story seemed a bit more like people, but then, I would.
  • A Connecticut Nympho on King Arthur's Crotch on April 10, 2016

    This might set poor Clemens spinning in his grave, but it's unusually faithful for a pornification of a classic, with some of Twain's original dialogue included. The sexytimes are grafted on a bit awkwardly, but with at least a smidge of plot justification -- our narrator's ability to arouse all and sundry is what marks her as a witch. The sexytimes also emphasize that everyone involved should enjoy themselves and be given the opportunity to opt out. Five stars from me, despite some dodgy editing.
  • The Dog Next Door (An erotic tale of bestiality) on April 25, 2016

    Some emotional grounding and backstory for the narrator elevates this above average.
  • Defiled on April 25, 2016

    Right on the edge of my comfort level with the dubcon/noncon line ... kinda didn't want to like it, but I did.
  • Ravished By The Clockwork Machine on April 30, 2016

    I liked Zhen's tentacle-themed "Defiled" and bought several more of her stories. Some were too far toward the noncon side of dubious consent for me, and this one still pushes my boundaries . . . but the cantankerous steampunk bondage contraption won me over.
  • Preacher Reality TV Part 2 on May 01, 2016

    Second installment is more explicit than the first and makes good use of shifting narrators.
  • The Hustle Hardcore Anal and DP for Miss Trailer Trash Part 1 (Double Penetration, M/F/M, XXX Movies, 11 Inch Cocks, Rough, Face Fucked, Bareback Slut, Interracial) on May 01, 2016

    Free chapter is prolonged build up/tease. Mdom, humil, dubcon themes.
  • Interspecies Violation on May 01, 2016

    Pretty good dubcon tentacle story, with a bit of psychological tension and an atmospheric, creepy set up.
  • Interspecies Penetration on May 01, 2016

    Very similar structurally to another of the author's stories "taken alive," - both feature tables turned on the woman who's been acting as a tentacle monster's procurer, but I liked this one a lot better.
  • A New Breed of Nuns Part 1 - The Convent on May 03, 2016

    Lifestyle BDSM with mind control themes, set in a right-wing dystopian future in which the poor are literally enslaved by the rich. What sold me on this tale was a double take on the same scene - the reluctant young protagonist witnesses a sex act, and a few chapters later replays it in her head when she consciously acknowledges how much it turned her on. I also liked that the future society is not exclusively mdom themed; the are priest slaves too. Darker than I usually like in erotica, but I'll read the next installment.
  • Nuns Learning New Tricks #1 - A New Policy on May 03, 2016

    Sister Angelica is super enthusiastic about her new duties.Sister Beatrice is disgusted. At least, so far.
  • Preacher Reality TV Part 1 on May 03, 2016

    Mostly tease/setup. I liked the reality TV angle on this step sib seduction story, elevates it above run-of-the-mill.
  • The Blackmailed Nun - Part 1: Forced Into Submission on May 03, 2016

    Nicely paced blackmail/nun fetish story. Spanking in addition to everything else.
  • The Hustle Hardcore Anal and DP for Miss Trailer Trash Part 2 (Double Penetration, M/F/M, XXX Movies, 11 Inch Cocks, Rough, Face Fucked, Bareback Slut, Interracial) on May 08, 2016

    This story is misleadingly described and tagged. Although the blurb refers to the protagonist as "eager," the she repeatedly and vehemently denies consent, and uses the word "rape" to describe what is being done to her. In addition she is made to submit by financial coercion. To each their own, I guess, but i would not have purchased this story if it had been accurately described.
  • The Blackmailed Nun - Part 2: Spanked and Rented Out on May 08, 2016

    Definitely my favorite Elizabeth Thorn story so far, Father Clency has a whole lot going on, and women respond in a wide variety of ways.
  • I Love Horsey Cumsauce on May 15, 2016

    The narrator opens this story with a gratuitous anti-Semitic slur and it really put me off.
  • How Dare You Fuck My Husband, Young Lady! on June 26, 2016

    Really hot and nasty story of a mother coming to terms with her attraction to her daughter as realization dawns that her husband and daughter are already having a taboo affair. No "pseudo" games. The story is tagged "torture and abuse" which seems a little much - i think in the context of this sort of story, "dubcon" and "rough sex" make more sense. Would gladly read a sequel.
  • Come And Get Me, Uncle Jimmy! on June 26, 2016

    I didn't like this much as the longer Cate Aria story I read, mostly because it doesn't have any real psychological tension; when the narrator sends Jimmy the title message, he doesn't try to talk her out of it or anything, and the narrator is over any internal conflict with her desire before the story starts. So it's a bit "wham bam thank you ma'am" but as a free download a good way to evaluate Aria's prose - which I think is a little better than average, especially for self-pubbed erotica.
  • Filled With the Devil's Seed - Book One of the Devil Made Me Do Him series on June 26, 2016

    This fits comfortably within the rough-but-tender powerful male dynamic that characterizes all those billionaire stories, with the added fillip of magical satyriasis and (mildly) non-human anatomical characteristics. But there are several hints that the story will get less, well, vanilla, as it progresses. Refreshing to have a protagonist who doesn't describe herself like an improbable Barbie doll, too.
  • One Cock Two Cock White Cock Black Cock on June 26, 2016

    I left one of Anita Little's stories a bad review because it seemed racist, but I'd already bought this one, so i decided to read it anyway. The black man in this story doesn't get much of a personality, but neither does anyone else, so I guess I wouldn't call it overtly racist. It does pull me out of the story a bit when someone decides to lose her virginity to a horse - my suspension of disbelief has limits even in porn - and this is that kind of story. (I think "One Cock, Two Cock, Black Cock, Horse Cock" would have made a better title.)
  • The Witch's Daughter (Book 1 of "The Coven Chronicles") on July 04, 2016

    The Witch's Daughter uses the gambit of a world building that structurally requires unorthodox relationships, in this case in the context of witchcraft - so the goings-on are perverted from the reader's perspective, but not from the participants'. Definitely well-above average execution, with more than a pro-forma plot to hold the naughty bits together. I was surprised and pleased by a baseball play-by-play.
  • Cucked by my Cock: How My Cock Made Me Impregnate My Daughter on July 04, 2016

    Not as weird as Chuck Tingle, but weird enough to hold my interest.
  • She's Just Like Me, ...Only From A Sluttier Dimension on July 04, 2016

    The set up here is a bit like the Jack Finney classic "The Woodrow Wilson Dime" - Tania bounces wily-nilly between two slightly different realities. The alternate is marked by greater societal acceptance of exhibitionism, voyeurism, and polyamory, to the extent that many businesses have official "Naked Employees," which Tania's alter ego, naturally, is one of. Tania adopts a "when in Rome" approach, and takes on almost all comers (literally) -- usually with lots of enthusiastic commentary from assorted onlookers, in British slang that I found slightly comical. Over the course of ten chapters this gets a bit repetitive -- this is less marked than most porn stories by the general trend of continual escalation of extremity -- but if this is your bag, it's good bang for the buck, so bonus star for that.( I was a bit distracted by censorship of words like f**k for a chapter or two somewhere in the middle; definitely shows signs of having been stitched together from stories originally published separately, I would guess.)
  • The Perils of Penetrating Pixies on July 05, 2016

    I liked the dirty parts just fine, but what I like best about this story is that it's not _all_ dirty parts -- it's a not-bad "trying to get back to our home dimension" sort of tale with a protracted (and explicit) sex scene in the middle of it. I have the sense Melos has a much better grounding in legends of Fae than her characters. I'll keep an eye out for the next installment.
  • Do I Have To? - Vol. 1 on July 09, 2016

    I'd say this warrants the dubcon tag, although Casey is plenty enthusiastic once she commits. There's also some assplay. Centers around the tension of Casey not being ok with what she's into, but really being into it anyway. The action escalates through 3 distinct scenes -- by Smashwords standards this is a real bargain.
  • Yes Daddy! - Vol. 2 on July 09, 2016

    This one's a bit weird in terms of consent - we know from Casey's interior monologue that she's an enthusiastic participant, but her dad doesn't know that, and she has to talk him around to believing that she likes it as much as she does. I wouldn't apply the "torture" tag to this story - I think "rough bondage" and maybe "humil" covers it better. Multiple scenes and great value-for-money.
  • Make Up Exam - Vol. 3 on July 14, 2016

    By prevailing Smashwords standards this is an outstanding value - a lot of authors would charge 2 or 3 bucks for each chapter. A couple more erotic firsts for Casey that aren't tagged (perhaps to avoid spoilers?), some exhibitionism/voyeurism, and she even has sex with someone who's not a relation.
  • Teddy Bear: Daddy Loves Hypnosis on July 24, 2016

    I like MC stories best when the controllees wind up doing what they really want to do anyway (but not might be comfortable admitting to wanting), and even more when there's some form of reversal. This succeeds for me on both counts - it's easy to read this as an unreliable narrator who's not as good at hypnosis as he thinks he is.
  • Bred By The Dark Lord on Aug. 28, 2016

    Not a bad Regency parody. I liked that Hannah is reading Radcliffe and Burney. As the description says, tamer than most Virginia Wade stories
  • The Autoerotic Attache: O Tempora on Oct. 24, 2016

    First story I read in the series, definitely won't be the last. Interesting world-building.
  • Dog Sitter & Other Tales on Dec. 29, 2016

    Not all of these stories were strictly to my taste, but they held my attention even when they weren't.
  • The Cumming Year - 2017 on Jan. 02, 2017

    Essentially an author self-interview formatted as an erotic story. Pretty clever, and reveals a few things that make me more comfortable financially supporting this author.
  • The Sexual Adventure of Incest Amy #4: Greeting The Neighbors on April 16, 2017

    I really liked how Amy turned the tables and took charge in this installment.
  • The Sexual Adventure Of Incest Amy #5: Paying The Rent on April 16, 2017

    Amy continues to assert herself and take care of her own pleasure as well as the family finances; the action is over-the-top.
  • Seduced by the Sex Demon! (Volume 3) on June 13, 2017

    This one crosses over the magic line where I became more involved emotionally with the characters and the plot than with the erotic aspects. Leaves me impatient for the 4th story!
  • Seduced by the Sex Demon! (Volume 2) on June 13, 2017

    Like a lot of demon sex stories, this one plays with the edges of consent (with a hint of mind control)), but this one shows a remarkable degree of concern about the well-being of its participants when the demon delivers some straight talk on safe, enjoyable butt play.
  • Seduced by the Sex Demon! (Volume 1) on June 13, 2017

    Much better written - prose, editing, plot - than the general run of demon sex stories.
  • Confessions of a Naughty Invisible Man (Vol. 1) on June 18, 2017

    This is written from the perspective of a very cerebral and somewhat arrogant man, and, like Wells' novel, it takes a few pages to get going. But definitely recommended for those who like character-driven erotica.
  • Confessions of a Naughty Invisible Man (Vol. 2) on June 18, 2017

    Sloan's riff on the Invisible Man has a healthy dash of Jekyll/Hyde in the second installment, and a complicated relationship with consent.
  • Confessions of a Naughty Invisible Man (Vol. 3) on June 18, 2017

    Third installment continues upping the erotic ante, and introduces a surprising plot twist just when I thought I knew where it was headed. I really hope Sloan continues the series! Very open-ended conclusion.
  • Bribing the Babysitter on June 29, 2017

    Really liked how this inverted the power dynamic of standard babysitter porn: the client is doing all the seducing, but Jenni has (and uses!) all the power.
  • Dog-Slut Daughter on July 01, 2017

    Hayley is a memorably enthusiastic narrator; story nicely paced. Family stuff is all off-camera and mostly not hetero-oriented, for what that's worth.
  • My Dad's Best Friends (Little Emily's Anal Weekend) on July 29, 2017

    Another very enthusiastic protagonist from Spenser, and much better written/edited than a lot of the more hardcore selfpub stories on Smashwords. (Family stuff is described in flashback for what it's worth.)
  • Iago Wick and the Vampire Queen on Sep. 02, 2017

    Definitely exceeded my expectations - flavorful prose, some intriguing world-building, more than enough here to make me seek out more from Rainey.
  • Silence on Oct. 17, 2017

    well-paced and well-written ghost fantasy
  • Stripping My Son’s Sleeping Girlfriend on Dec. 17, 2017

    sleep-sex isn't a favorite kink for me, but this was really well-paced. Bonus story was good too.
  • The Sleep-Walker: An Erotic Tale of Public Urination on July 07, 2018

    Very nicely paced story, I really appreciated how the narrator is increasingly uncomfortable with the lack of Ava's consent even as Ava is steadily escalating the action.
  • Cocks and Rockets on July 07, 2018

    nicely atmospheric exploration of an unusual fetish
  • Online Slave Girl: Part One on Aug. 25, 2018

    Intriguingly unreliable narrator and interesting multi-POV structure. I did find it erotic but also a bit disturbing. But I really liked that despite some dubious self-care, the narrator used a condom - very refreshing change from the current glut of impregnation fetish stories.
  • Revenge on My Boss: Erotic Tales of Wet Revenge on Aug. 26, 2018

    really enjoyed this story and appreciated its political dimension.
  • Sleazy Tales from the Bartender - Part One on Sep. 09, 2018

    well-paced, walking that fine line between realistic and over-the-top.
  • Only on Halloween on Dec. 27, 2018

    great balance between erotic and emotional tensions; well paced.
  • Mrs. Wilson's Cure for Headstrong Ladies & Hysterical Wives on Feb. 03, 2019

    Evocative, romantic, and unabashedly feminist historical romp. Delightful.
  • The Monster Sex Experiment: Episode 9 on March 01, 2019

    I hope this series hasn't been abandoned for lack of reader response or other reasons. It's frequently right up against or even over my personal line of comfort with nonconsensual stuff, and I like the present-tense stories better than the flashbacks, but it's an intriguing setup, I really like the tension between supernatural and superscience explanations, and I like the variety of monsters throughout the series.
  • The Monster Sex Experiment: Episode 1 on March 01, 2019

    This frequently right up against or even over my personal line of comfort with nonconsensual stuff, and I like the present-tense stories better than the flashbacks, but it's an intriguing setup, I really like the tension between supernatural and superscience explanations, I like how the characters are developed through the series. And I like the variety of monsters throughout the series.
  • Pee Perverts: The Ballerina's Bladder on Aug. 05, 2019

    Discovering/exploring new kink story with just a hint of Ds and more than a hint of romance. Despite some editing gaffes, one of the best I've read for this kink.
  • Pee Perverts: The Listener on Aug. 05, 2019

    Another story about discovering and exploring new kink story not driven by a Ds humil dynamic, with a hint of romance. Excellent despite some editing gaffes.
  • Pee Perverts: Wet Jeans on Aug. 05, 2019

    This seems more like a set up for a continuing story than a complete story; one of the protagonists is exploring a new kink, but the other might be oblivious. I would like to see the story continued.
  • Gaped by Her Own Creations: Be Careful What You Write on Sep. 07, 2019

    This was really fantastic. I loved the character of the writer grappling (literally) with the violations of internal logic and anatomical liberties that are common in smutty stories, and I liked how the actual author explores sticky problems with erotica as a genre (like the pressure toward more and more extreme acts ). I even liked how "Chelsea" turns into "Alyssa" for a paragraph or two, which I choose to take as a deliberately playful tribute to sloppy copy editing.
  • Cherry Pie - Sister Makes Three (Book 1 of "PotErotica") on Dec. 21, 2019

    Good flirty (and kinky) dialogue. Enthusiastic consent and female-pleasure centric (but also male-gaze-of-breasts centric). Enough emotional realism to be a little creepy but not enough to lose the heat (i.e., the guilt goes out the window at some point). Way above average despite some odd passive voice construction in the down'n'dirty descriptions. Will buy more from this author.
  • Carnal Sin on Dec. 21, 2019

    Deliciously blasphemous angel/demon action nicely balancing forbidden romance and a bit of D/s. Vivid prose.
  • Like on Dec. 24, 2019

    Embraces awkwardness and emotional tension in a way that makes it feel much less idealized than most stories with similar themes, but not realistic enough to be real-world creepy. Good pacing, too.
  • Orc Fuck Slave 2: The Elf Girl's Bukkake Gangbang Humiliation on June 22, 2020

    The other review seems unfair to me. There are a few questionable word choices, but mostly this does a pretty good job of evoking the old-fashioned style of JRRT's many imitators. The tags for the story are accurate. This is not the best story I've read on the site but it's better than many and IMO does not being singled out for a one star review.